Although on a first glance I found this to be a somewhat amusing piece of fiction, upon further contemplation I have been forced to disagree with this assessment. The characters are off, and there is no acceptable explanation given within the story to justify this; there's really no reason for the serum, which the plot revolves around, to be developed in the first place, so the plot is made moot; there's a similar amount of logical sense in how Opal's brother is somehow one of the most powerful pixies in Haven and yet virtually unknown, period, as well as in his further actions; and quite frankly the whole thing comes off as being very one-dimensional, as a feeble justification for the author's other works.
I would not recommend this work, except as an exercise in how not to write a decent plot.
Not Worth It
Although on a first glance I found this to be a somewhat amusing piece of fiction, upon further contemplation I have been forced to disagree with this assessment. The characters are off, and there is no acceptable explanation given within the story to justify this; there's really no reason for the serum, which the plot revolves around, to be developed in the first place, so the plot is made moot; there's a similar amount of logical sense in how Opal's brother is somehow one of the most powerful pixies in Haven and yet virtually unknown, period, as well as in his further actions; and quite frankly the whole thing comes off as being very one-dimensional, as a feeble justification for the author's other works.
I would not recommend this work, except as an exercise in how not to write a decent plot.