So the characterisation isn't perfect, and neither is the grammar. And because of the format in which the fic has been posted, it's sometimes a little confusing to tell the difference between the parts taking place in the book and the parts taking place in the actual fic. It's a very amusing read despite all its faults and I'd definitely recommend it to anybody who needed a good laugh. The way Snape eventually begins to feel concern and care for Harry while reading is handled well enough and the dash of seriousness to go along with the cracky commentary is great. Pity it was never finished, I would have loved to see more of some of the dangling plot threads, especially about Scabber's true identity coming out by accident.
A crackfic with a sudden dash of seriousness
So the characterisation isn't perfect, and neither is the grammar. And because of the format in which the fic has been posted, it's sometimes a little confusing to tell the difference between the parts taking place in the book and the parts taking place in the actual fic. It's a very amusing read despite all its faults and I'd definitely recommend it to anybody who needed a good laugh. The way Snape eventually begins to feel concern and care for Harry while reading is handled well enough and the dash of seriousness to go along with the cracky commentary is great. Pity it was never finished, I would have loved to see more of some of the dangling plot threads, especially about Scabber's true identity coming out by accident.