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db1894 Since: Sep, 2015
05/18/2022 14:12:13 •••

Didn't like it

Based on the comments, I'm in the absolute minority on this but I REALLY REALLY didn't like this fic. It runs on SO, SO much coincidence and the characters doing and knowing whatever the author wants them to do and know, without any thought given to whether it makes sense. Naruto/Natsu is WAY WAY too perfect and so is everyone else his/her age to a lesser extent, while the adults are divided into two camps... Those who are loyal to and do whatever Naruto/Natsu wants, and the idiots who don't know better. It's incredibly frustrating, because the fic has good ideas, and the writing is technically good... But the storytelling is just really bad, and all the characters the author likes are just inexplicably perfect.


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