While it is well written, Lilacs does move the relationship along really fast, so if you're not a fan of 'love at first sight', don't read this. Also, there are a few cliches, but they're worked into the plot nicely. One annoyance is that the author sometimes puts comments in the middle of the chapter, she/he does put it in parenthesis, but it still breaks up the storyline. Other than that, it's an okay fic, and I enjoyed it.
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While it is well written, Lilacs does move the relationship along really fast, so if you're not a fan of 'love at first sight', don't read this. Also, there are a few cliches, but they're worked into the plot nicely. One annoyance is that the author sometimes puts comments in the middle of the chapter, she/he does put it in parenthesis, but it still breaks up the storyline. Other than that, it's an okay fic, and I enjoyed it.