This work is in both parts badly written and badly paced. The encounters between Warhammer world and Germany are done in one paragraph or two, were both parts get barely a surprise in the changes of the other world before it's glossed over. The thematic of Fish out of the Water and Values dissonances, which are the cream of the this types of literature are terrible presented, with the people accepting the changes, the leaders uniting with only a couple of discussions and both explaining and not explaining the difficulties inherent in this types of situations.
The overuse of italics, the constant changes of points of views, the dialogs which are wooden and unnatural and the lack of excitement in so many parts of the story completely broke my interest and willing suspension of disbelief.
It's a great idea, but it really needs a beta reader and a good rewrite from the beginning.
It's a badly constructed Fanfic.
This work is in both parts badly written and badly paced. The encounters between Warhammer world and Germany are done in one paragraph or two, were both parts get barely a surprise in the changes of the other world before it's glossed over. The thematic of Fish out of the Water and Values dissonances, which are the cream of the this types of literature are terrible presented, with the people accepting the changes, the leaders uniting with only a couple of discussions and both explaining and not explaining the difficulties inherent in this types of situations.
The overuse of italics, the constant changes of points of views, the dialogs which are wooden and unnatural and the lack of excitement in so many parts of the story completely broke my interest and willing suspension of disbelief.
It's a great idea, but it really needs a beta reader and a good rewrite from the beginning.
2/10