Honestly, as popular as this fic is, I expected a lot better.
Author notes/unnecessary translations within the main body of the story, ridiculous formatting (you don't need to bold or underline a character's dialogue to let the reader know it's them! *Especially* underline - use your words!), OOC characters and general weeaboo butchered English guaranteed it was a struggle to read past the 3rd chapter.
Reading a bit further on, yes it gets better, but it left a very bad first impression and I would hesitate to recommend it as is.
Ehh...
Honestly, as popular as this fic is, I expected a lot better.
Author notes/unnecessary translations within the main body of the story, ridiculous formatting (you don't need to bold or underline a character's dialogue to let the reader know it's them! *Especially* underline - use your words!), OOC characters and general weeaboo butchered English guaranteed it was a struggle to read past the 3rd chapter.
Reading a bit further on, yes it gets better, but it left a very bad first impression and I would hesitate to recommend it as is.