Shunted a lot of the setting into the page quote, changed now to the opening strip's establishing log entry, with potholes for flavor (God, I love potholes) and added some plot and background info, as is customary with popular strips. I think the image is a bit blah, though. Anybody got any ideas for a good exemplar of an image/promo image?
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Is it just me, or do some of the characters resemble those from Girls With Slingshots? Samantha->Jamie, Jameson->Jameson... could just be a matter of the same body types are bound to reoccur. Or, since they're both semi-autobiographical strips, we may have some crossover because they are the same characters.
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If anyone knows the trope for it, Basilisks and Spitters sometimes use travelling in groups of Crawlers for stealth. Jenny also uses a lie to hide a lie. What's that called?
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Jenny has used a Suspiciously Specific Denial at least once. Howlers, Basilisks and Spitters because They Look Just Like Everyone Else! can use their guile to get Lost in a Crowd
Think I'm gonna tweak the summary, seems top-heavy on setting rather than story
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