"Just seeing how the Matou Magecraft, the crest worms, is horrifying enough. But when Lupin and Kirei view the actual Matou estate to see how Sakura is faring, it can leave a chill down your spine."
Feel like this could use some correcting, mostly with the first sentence. What that correction would be though, I'm not entirely certain. Anybody got any ideas?
"Just seeing how the Matou Magecraft, the crest worms, is horrifying enough. But when Lupin and Kirei view the actual Matou estate to see how Sakura is faring, it can leave a chill down your spine."
Feel like this could use some correcting, mostly with the first sentence. What that correction would be though, I'm not entirely certain. Anybody got any ideas?