Bakazuki
Since: Jun, 2009
Sep 5th 2010 at 1:35:57 AM
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That's would be better, yes. I think the best thing to aim for is something that's poignant, but reveals very little about the plot itself. The focus of the pic should be the game's visuals so, if possible, text should be completely avoided. A piece of sample dialogue is better handled, as you have brought up, with the heading quote.
As for the top of the page in general, I, for one, agree with Jeramyu's notion of the description itself needing a lot of work. However, I'm not as well-versed in the history of the project as most of the other members of the Crestfallen forums. Any other member that happens to catch notice of this would like to take a crack at it?
Edited by Bakazuki
Holy crap, pictures. But should we choose one that's a little less spoiler-ish? Perhaps Rhue on the hill, saying "where are you?" Also, I believe you can only have one picture for a work. Oh, and I'm thinking of adding a quote. What do you guys think?
Edited by gentlemanorcus Full picture here.◊ Drawn by Saemus! Hide / Show Replies