piearty
Since: Oct, 2009
aaeyero
Since: Apr, 2011
May 30th 2011 at 11:03:57 PM
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That pre-introduction is terrible. It has to go. Readers shouldn't have to read an awful trope demonstrating story to get to the intro/description of the trope.
LoustarJogger
Since: Jul, 2010
Jun 27th 2011 at 6:52:03 PM
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aaeyero: boooooooooo, boooooooooo!
I loved it.
Might be awesome. Wait, no, is awesome.
GuesssWho
Since: Jan, 2001
Cider
The Final ECW Champion
Since: May, 2009
Feb 16th 2012 at 1:26:00 PM
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So is this specifically supposed to be about stars disappearing to show that something bad is happening? I could think of examples where a character or mechanism is blocking out stars or turning them off but that doesn't really seem to match the description.
On the other hand, it would match the laconic just right, should the laconic be made a little more narrow?
Modified Ura-nage, Torture Rack
The trope summary for this page is beautiful. I wanna shake the hand of the person who wrote it.
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