75.21.146.247
Since: Dec, 1969
Jul 7th 2010 at 12:30:14 PM
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- Somewhat of an inversion in the infamous fanfic My Immortal. The writer-cum-main character describes, in utterly emotionless matter of fact statements, every thought and action of the cast, such as it is. That is, in the parts between Ebony/Enoby Dark'ness Dementia Raven/Tara Way, describing her clothes, the clothes of her friends, the immensely dark, "goffik" look of everyone. The entire first "chapter" (I'm using literary terms loosely here) is Enoby describing herself. How do any of the characters feel? You never know, Tara's "ripped fishnets full of corset stuff" gets more attention than any of the characters.
...for the reason that it is not an example nor an obvious aversion, other than pointing out a way that Tara's writing could possibly have gotten worse.
76.20.249.173
Since: Dec, 1969
Apr 4th 2010 at 6:57:28 AM
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When the page can be edited again, Still Alive and I Feel Fantastic by Jonathan Coulton should probably be noted. Not sure whether Still Alive should be mentioned under Music or Video Games though.
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76.20.249.173
Since: Dec, 1969
161.74.11.24
Since: Dec, 1969
Mar 26th 2010 at 10:49:42 PM
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So... Is there any particular reason it's impossible to edit this page?
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Katana
Since: Jul, 2009
There is a specific variant of this trope that overlaps with tranquil fury. Someone appears calm and states they are angry in order to demonstrate they are completely in control of their anger, making them much more threatening than an angry character who can't control themself.