GutstheBerserker
Since: Oct, 2014
Dec 11th 2014 at 9:51:36 AM
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Legion Of Lost Souls - Trope definition needs an overhaul. The trope pate describes the French Foreign Legion but doesn't precisely describe the actual trop, simply provides a real-world example.
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SeptimusHeap
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Dec 11th 2014 at 10:02:52 AM
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This is more of an Useful Notes page, I think.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
The structure of the page gets confusing. The intro is all about the French Foreign Legion, but the examples alternate between fictional counterparts of the Legion and fictional "legions of lost souls" like the Night's Watch from the Song of Ice and Fire series. It wouldn't have been that bad, except that if you read the introduction and then went into video games, for example, you might get the impression that the Grey Wardens from Dragon Age were an expy of the Foreign Legion and not an example of a Legion of Lost Souls. I would recommend splitting off the Foreign Legion stuff into its own Useful Notes page, linked under "Real Life," and then actually describe the Legion of Lost Souls itself in the intro.
Edited by blacksparrow99