RonnieR15
Since: May, 2013
Jul 31st 2023 at 4:52:02 PM
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Though I think aspects of this could be work reworked into a proper trope(s), I'm inclined to agree. As it stands now it's just anyone using something as an umbrella, there's no meaning to it nor does it influence a story in anyway.
Is this really necessary to have? Feels very "People Sit On Chairs"-y. Like it has very little narrative meaning. All it says is that the character got caught in a rain unexpectedly
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