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You\'re speaking like Opal just hates Kuvira for no reason or baseless rumors. She doesn\'t like her because of her actions. That\'s pretty justified. And she\'s concerned about Bolin because he\'s hopelessly naive. And again, it\'s not OutOfCharacter at all because, well, she has always been incredibly blunt and straightforward, especially with Bolin. She\'s a NiceGirl but that doesn\'t make her a pushover.
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You\\\'re speaking like Opal just hates Kuvira for no reason or baseless rumors. She doesn\\\'t like her because of her actions. That\\\'s pretty justified. And she\\\'s concerned about Bolin because he\\\'s hopelessly naive. And again, it\\\'s not OutOfCharacter at all because, well, she has always been incredibly blunt and straightforward, especially with Bolin. She\\\'s a NiceGirl but that doesn\\\'t make her a pushover.
Not to mention the OutOfCharacterMoment put in doesn\\\'t really... explain how it\\\'s an OutOfCharacterMoment, making it sound even more shoehorned. Also I don\\\'t really see how that could be a character trope.
Not to mention the OutOfCharacterMoment put in doesn\\\'t really... explain how it\\\'s an OutOfCharacterMoment, making it sound even more shoehorned. Also I don\\\'t really see how that could be a character trope.
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You\'re speaking like Opal just hates Kuvira for no reason or baseless rumors. She doesn\'t like her because of her actions. That\'s pretty justified. And she\'s concerned about Bolin because he\'s hopelessly naive.
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You\\\'re speaking like Opal just hates Kuvira for no reason or baseless rumors. She doesn\\\'t like her because of her actions. That\\\'s pretty justified. And she\\\'s concerned about Bolin because he\\\'s hopelessly naive. And again, it\\\'s not OutOfCharacter at all because, well, she has always been incredibly blunt and straightforward, especially with Bolin. She\\\'s a NiceGirl but that doesn\\\'t make her a pushover.
