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\\\"Can lead to Unfortunate Implications if, despite the co-opting of the struggle of a minority for drama, the cast remains largely straight, white, and pretty. \\\"
This sentence in the description sounds like it refers to badly written works which deal with Real Life, rather then Fantastic, racism (though I guess a variant of it is possible with its Fantastic type - the author wants to make the point that the Fantastic Species is unfairly discriminated against, but the narrative itself treats the species in question as a bit of a joke). Needs deleting or rephrasing.
This sentence in the description sounds like it refers to badly written works which deal with Real Life, rather then Fantastic, racism (though I guess a variant of it is possible with its Fantastic type - the author wants to make the point that the Fantastic Species is unfairly discriminated against, but the narrative itself treats the species in question as a bit of a joke). Needs deleting or rephrasing.
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\\\"Can lead to Unfortunate Implications if, despite the co-opting of the struggle of a minority for drama, the cast remains largely straight, white, and pretty. \\\"
This sentence in the description sounds like it refers to badly written works which attempt to deal with Real Life, rather then Fantastic, racism (though I guess a variant of it is possible with its Fantastic type - the author wants to make the point that the Fantastic Species is unfairly discriminated against, but the narrative itself treats the species in question as a bit of a joke). Needs deleting or rephrasing.
This sentence in the description sounds like it refers to badly written works which attempt to deal with Real Life, rather then Fantastic, racism (though I guess a variant of it is possible with its Fantastic type - the author wants to make the point that the Fantastic Species is unfairly discriminated against, but the narrative itself treats the species in question as a bit of a joke). Needs deleting or rephrasing.
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The more that I think about it, the more that I think that I should put the \'\'unverified\'\' \'\'Best Wishes\'\' entries (that are not Poison Oaks or semi-poisoned) in with the Brock Years and just call it \
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The more that I think about it, the more that I think that I should put the \\\'\\\'unverified\\\'\\\' \\\'\\\'Best Wishes\\\'\\\' entries (that are not Poison Oaks or semi-poisoned) in with the Brock Years and just call it \\\"Past Generations\\\". I\\\'ll put the \\\"Past\\\" page along with the general stuff for now and move X-Y onto the Future Page pending creation of a \\\"Past\\\" page.
EDIT: Done it. About ready to go.
EDIT: 4/26: Changes Underweigh. Should be done by 10 PM EDT. \\\'\\\'Best Wishes\\\'\\\' Archive already live.
EDIT: Well, it\\\'s 12:15 AM EDT, but it is done! I tell you, cleaning up a WMG page is a bit more difficult than cleaning up a bedroom, but there\\\'s a certain passion to it.
EDIT: Done it. About ready to go.
EDIT: 4/26: Changes Underweigh. Should be done by 10 PM EDT. \\\'\\\'Best Wishes\\\'\\\' Archive already live.
EDIT: Well, it\\\'s 12:15 AM EDT, but it is done! I tell you, cleaning up a WMG page is a bit more difficult than cleaning up a bedroom, but there\\\'s a certain passion to it.
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The more that I think about it, the more that I think that I should put the \'\'unverified\'\' \'\'Best Wishes\'\' entries (that are not Poison Oaks or semi-poisoned) in with the Brock Years and just call it \
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The more that I think about it, the more that I think that I should put the \\\'\\\'unverified\\\'\\\' \\\'\\\'Best Wishes\\\'\\\' entries (that are not Poison Oaks or semi-poisoned) in with the Brock Years and just call it \\\"Past Generations\\\". I\\\'ll put the \\\"Past\\\" page along with the general stuff for now and move X-Y onto the Future Page pending creation of a \\\"Past\\\" page.
EDIT: Done it. About ready to go.
EDIT: 4/26: Changes Underweigh. Should be done by 10 PM EDT. \\\'\\\'Best Wishes\\\'\\\' Archive already live.
EDIT: Done it. About ready to go.
EDIT: 4/26: Changes Underweigh. Should be done by 10 PM EDT. \\\'\\\'Best Wishes\\\'\\\' Archive already live.
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The more that I think about it, the more that I think that I should put the \'\'unverified\'\' \'\'Best Wishes\'\' entries (that are not Poison Oaks or semi-poisoned) in with the Brock Years and just call it \
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The more that I think about it, the more that I think that I should put the \\\'\\\'unverified\\\'\\\' \\\'\\\'Best Wishes\\\'\\\' entries (that are not Poison Oaks or semi-poisoned) in with the Brock Years and just call it \\\"Past Generations\\\". I\\\'ll put the \\\"Past\\\" page along with the general stuff for now and move X-Y onto the Future Page pending creation of a \\\"Past\\\" page.
EDIT: Done it. About ready to go.
EDIT: Done it. About ready to go.
