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Mostly I was just editing out WordCruft I myself put there and some, but not all, of the \\\"immediately answer yourself rhetorical question\\\" formatted entries. There were a few other edits I made:

* I added TheDitz to Goofy\\\'s list
* I added BumblingDad to Pete\\\'s, because not everything that goes wrong for his family that\\\'s his fault is the direct result of malice, speaking of which...
* I realize the entry under ItsAllAboutMe was even more biased/hyperbolic before it was edited, but since the new entry was more concrete, I thought it prudent to mention that Pete doesn\\\'t physically injure PJ \\\'\\\'intentionally\\\'\\\'--when it occurs it\\\'s a side-effect of something else. Thank you for helping me keep my dysphemistic language in check--we really \\\'\\\'are\\\'\\\' on the same page about what happens (or close enough); I just instinctively describe it in worse terms. However, that being said...
* When the PotHole to AbusiveParents was edited out of TheChewToy\\\'s entry, the sentence looked imbalanced and the {{Jerkass}} pothole wasn\\\'t directly connected to a verb, so I just re-potholed that whole phrase to {{Jerkass}}. No real reason they had to be separated anyway.
* I added {{Adorkable}} to PJ\\\'s list.
* I \\\'\\\'removed\\\'\\\' CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass from his list and all references to it because I\\\'ve come to realize watching the whole series he\\\'s not an example. He\\\'s BookDumb but not much else, and the question of his competence isn\\\'t really a question at all.
* I changed some of the tropes on his list to be clearer and/or less redundant/wordy.
* Pete\\\'s existence has to do with PJ [[ButtMonkey not being able to catch a break]], yes, but it doesn\\\'t really have anything to do with his specific role as NoRespectGuy that wasn\\\'t already covered under the other points.
* I expanded the context for a few examples, especially of the DeadpanSnarker variety. Also, PJ needed more credit in that area. Maybe I\\\'ll edit the main entry too.
* I edited Stacey\\\'s HollywoodNerd description because Type I doesn\\\'t exist anymore as it was decided it was redundant with {{Nerd}}; Type II is the \\\'\\\'only\\\'\\\' type.
* I added a spoiler tag to Bradley\\\'s DickDastardlyStopsToCheat entry so it would be consistent with the [[WesternAnimation/AGoofyMovie movie page]].
* And [[BlatantLies lastly but not leastly]], [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking there were a few grammar errors I fixed.]]
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