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The description is a little confusing. I thought this was where a character was accidentally placed in a situation that makes them look perverted, but the description makes it sound like it is some kind of excuse for awkward types or something.
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The description is a little confusing. I thought this was where a character was accidentally placed in a situation that makes them look perverted when they weren\\\'t, but the description makes it sound like it is some kind of excuse for awkward types or something.
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** Synopsis: In the words of madmuffin14 herself: Giratina has sent the pokemon special dex holders into another dimension. They arrive in a strange place, full of challenges, mysteries, and people with annoying voices. This world is known simply as \
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** Synopsis: In the words of madmuffin14 herself: Giratina has sent the pokemon special dex holders into another dimension. They arrive in a strange place, full of challenges, mysteries, and people with annoying voices. This world is known simply as \\\"anime\\\".
** Comments: Too many unnecessary, unfunny anime-bashing \\\'jokes\\\', which the plot is sacrificed for. The plot seems like it would at least hold up the story, only to be completely forgotten no more than one chapter later.
If anyone wishes to put it back up, please state why.
** Comments: Too many unnecessary, unfunny anime-bashing \\\'jokes\\\', which the plot is sacrificed for. The plot seems like it would at least hold up the story, only to be completely forgotten no more than one chapter later.
If anyone wishes to put it back up, please state why.
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** Synopsis: In the words of madmuffin14 herself: Giratina has sent the pokemon special dex holders into another dimension. They arrive in a strange place, full of challenges, mysteries, and people with annoying voices. This world is known simply as \
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** Synopsis: In the words of madmuffin14 herself: Giratina has sent the pokemon special dex holders into another dimension. They arrive in a strange place, full of challenges, mysteries, and people with annoying voices. This world is known simply as \\\"anime\\\".
** Comments: Too many unnecessary, unfunny anime-bashing \\\'jokes\\\', which the plot is sacrificed for. The plot seems like it would at least hold up the story, only to be completely forgotten no more than one chapter later.
If anyone wishes to put it back up, please state why.
EDIT: And yes, I went with one troper, instead of \\\"various.\\\" Still, he is good.
** Comments: Too many unnecessary, unfunny anime-bashing \\\'jokes\\\', which the plot is sacrificed for. The plot seems like it would at least hold up the story, only to be completely forgotten no more than one chapter later.
If anyone wishes to put it back up, please state why.
EDIT: And yes, I went with one troper, instead of \\\"various.\\\" Still, he is good.
