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I\'m not sure, honestly. I managed that too, but in all three sessions I played, I consistently kept the child as clean as I could manage via the face wash and regular clothing changes during the period for which they were bath-phobic. I have no idea if the person who wrote the entry gave up to soon or just had another approach.
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I\\\'m not sure, honestly. I managed that too, but in all three sessions I played (late 2021 on Switch), I consistently kept the child as clean as I could manage via the face wash and regular clothing changes during the period for which they were bath-phobic. I have no idea if the person who wrote the entry gave up to soon or just had another approach.
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I\'m not sure, honestly. I managed that too, but in all three sessions I played, I consistenly kept the child as clean as I could manage via the face wash and regular clothing changes. I have no idea if the person who wrote the entry gave up to soon or just had another approach.
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I\\\'m not sure, honestly. I managed that too, but in all three sessions I played, I consistently kept the child as clean as I could manage via the face wash and regular clothing changes during the period for which they were bath-phobic. I have no idea if the person who wrote the entry gave up to soon or just had another approach.
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* ImNotAHeroIm: In \'\'Three Hopes\'\' Edelgard clarifies to Balthus in their B-Support that she is not compassionate, rather she is \
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* ImNotAHeroIm: In \\\'\\\'Three Hopes\\\'\\\' Edelgard clarifies to Balthus in their B-Support that she is not compassionate, rather she is \\\"hopelessly committed\\\" to her ideals. She makes it clear on many occassions that while she sees the end goal as worthwhile, she does not regard the actions she takes even indepedent of the Agarthans as \\\"good\\\" in any typical sense, and even acknowledges (or at least doesn\\\'t argue against Shez saying it) that the world she is seeking to build may not even end up any better than the current Fódlan. After all, at the end of the day she did instigate a massive war of conquest and is on threat of death forcing subjugated nations in Fódlan to do what she wants, and she does not expect many who suffer from her actions will ever forgive her, nor should they necessarily do so.

This is pretty fine, but I feel like we can drop the last paragraph (from \\\"after all\\\" and onward) and lose nothing? It\\\'s just editorializing on her character, and Edelgard\\\'s character page in general is a mess of examples editorializing on her or having actual arguments from what appears to be multiple different tropers within the trope descriptions proper. This character page is in dire need of a cleanup, really.
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