[001]
TheWalkingDude
Current Version
Changed line(s) 0 from:
to:
“Radagon is currently not as powerful as he could have been if Elden Ring was intact” comes as incoherent?\\\"
Changed line(s) 2 from:
n
“Radagon is currently not as powerful as he could have been if Elden Ring was intact” comes as incoherent?\
to:
I\\\'d say the article is trying to address too many things (Whether or not the Elden Beast is possessing him, whether or not he and Marika were always fused) at once. That Radagon himself, separate from the Ring, is suggested to be weaker then he was before the Shattering should be the main focus in the example.
Also, does this discussion feel a bit unnecessarily hostile to you as well? I\\\'m sorry if I said anything rude, I just want the article to be as smooth to read as it can be.
Edit: Actually, I could send the article over to that \\\"Get Help With English\\\" Thread. If the mod there says it passes their standard, then I\\\'m just worrying over nothing.
Also, does this discussion feel a bit unnecessarily hostile to you as well? I\\\'m sorry if I said anything rude, I just want the article to be as smooth to read as it can be.
Edit: Actually, I could send the article over to that \\\"Get Help With English\\\" Thread. If the mod there says it passes their standard, then I\\\'m just worrying over nothing.
