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  • Crack Pairing: There was few readers who were hoping Aqua and Silver would get together.
  • Funny Moments: Many of Silver and Gale's squabbles.
  • Genius Bonus:
    • Princess Aqua Regia's name, comes from the name of highly corrosive acid. Fitting her personality of-course.
    • Silver is labeled a "Mare of Diomedes", after word of her eating meat gets out. A reference to a group of horses that were trained to eat meat, in Greek Mythology.
  • Heartwarming Moments:
    • Silver managing to become close to the Sparkle family, despite almost killing Twilight in the last story.
    • Silver sticking up for Gale and becoming friends with the other Griffon students.
    • Silver's relationship with Ice Blossom.
    • All of Silver's friends sticking up for her, after Aqua Regia assaults her on stage.
    • Silver finally de-petrifying Pound Cake.
    • Silver Script offering Aqua Regia a new lease on life by means of an experimental de-aging potion, despite everything she put her through.
    • Silver's interaction with her children.
  • Moment of Awesome:
    • Silver Script telling Aqua Regia off in front of the school cafeteria, after she insults his room mate/new friend, before casually flying over her stunned and speechless body.
    • Silver wrestling a cockatrice, before decapitating it with a sharp rock.
    • Silver saving Silver Spoon from a Lamia and later blowing it up from the inside, after being swallowed alive.
    • Silver calling out Aqua Regia, in front of hundreds of ponies, for her childish harassment and trying to rape her. Silver than dares Aqua to go through with her threat of cutting her tongue out, after the latter assaulted her. Saying she will just brew a potion to grow it back, while her friends stand beside her. Only for Cool Beets knocking Aqua out, before she gets the chance, while also calling out the princess for assaulting her friend.
  • Morale Event Horizon:
    • Princess If Aqua Regia raping Silver in the bathroom wasn't enough, she later rapes/tortures Silver again and murders Ice Blossom, after Going Off The Slippery Slope
    • Also, Prince Blue Blood having his sister Aqua Regia legally disowned with a smile on his face, two months before her raping Silver became public and indirectly leading to her Sanity Slippage, just to save face.
  • Nightmare Fuel:
    • Silver being raped by Aqua Regia in the bathroom.
    • Silver hanging on to dear life, after the Lamia swallows her alive.
    • All of chapter 29.
  • Squick: Pretty much anytime "sexual stuff" is involved.
  • Tear Jerker: Again, all of chapter 29.
  • Too Bleak, Stopped Caring: Many readers were starting to get tired of Soren/Silver's constant physical and mental abuse in the first story. This got even worse in "Alchemist Heart", after the author slapped on a Tragedy Tag one hundred thousand words in. note  And that's not even getting into what that Tragedy Tag was alluding to.
  • The Woobie:
    • Soren/Silver advances from Butt-Monkey to full fledged Cosmic Play Thing in this story. And that is before he/she is raped, thrown in prison on bogus charges, and raped again, before seeing his Love Interest beheaded.
    • Ice Blossom is forced to watch Silver being raped and tortured, before being beheaded, when she tries to save her.

The Alchemist and The Mirror

  • Funny Moments: Silver Script's interactions with Sunset.
  • Heartwarming Moments: Silver Script standing up for Sonata.
  • The Woobie: Sonata is abandoned by her fellow sirens and left to slowly wither away, because she is not able to consume the magic she needs to sustain herself. On top of that, she shunned and even beaten by her former "fans". note 


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