- Bile Fascination: With canon defilement to the max, annoying Mary Sue heroine, sickening saccharinity, gratuitous Japanese and Japanese stereotypes in a setting that isn't Japanese in the slightest, there are not many unironic enjoyers of this fic.
- Cliché Storm: The fic reads like a display of the most ignorant anime stereotypes – of the "extreme moe" kind.
- Fetish Retardant: The attempts at Fanservice.
- Moe: Sakura was probably supposed to come off as this.
- Narm: The [wind] opened its huge mouth and swallowed her whole.; [Ume] looked like a queen in her lacy night underwear.; "Now lose you the bra!!!"
- So Bad, It's Good: Cowboy Bebop is often described as an anime for people who don't like anime, due to its avoidance of common anime stereotypes. This story pretty much adds all of those stereotypes back in. Then there's the whole Mary Sue and Fangirl Japanese thing.
- Unnecessary Makeover: Faye gives Sakura one. (She wanted to make her more "sexy" instead of cute.)
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