YMMV / Smash School

• Ass Pull: Anna pressing "bdown" suddenly causes a Smash Ball to appear, which is conviently needed to stop the skyquake.
• Big-Lipped Alligator Moment: Master Hand randomly attacks Woe's bus. With his hand.
• Designated Hero: Anna and Woe don't really do anything that's remotely heroic, aside from stopping a skyquake and killing Master Hand, which is then balanced by Anna killing Mr. Collins (the LA teacher), and Woe killing Olimar.
• Level Breaker: Despite the utter lack of any sort of "drama" in the story, sonicluvr still somehow manages to jar the reader out of the story with Woe's apparent death.
• Narm: The huge amount of spelling and grammar errors, coupled with the ridiculousness of the plot kills any sort of real drama. A shame considering that sonicluvr seems to be attempting to write a Dark Fic. Diabolical Pie seems to be much better at avoiding Narm.