Anvilicious: RAPE IS NOT GOOD. The anti-rape message isn't a terrible one, especially in light of recent headlines. The way the author conveys the message, however, leaves a lot to be desired.
Don't Shoot the Message: The author wants to show us that rape is bad and it shouldn't be glorified in fanfic. He isn't wrong, it's just that the story itself does not really help his cause.
Hilarious in Hindsight: At one point, Simon is said to be fighting aliens in Call of Duty. At the time of this fanfic's release (2010), the concept of fighting aliens in Call of Duty (which is a realistic modern military shooter) was seen as absurd. Fast forward three years to Ghosts, and there is a game mode (named "Extinction") that involves fighting aliens.