Trivia / Chlorine Grown Roses

• Executive Meddling: After AkiTommichan began revising things in the fic, noticeable changes occurred; comma splices began cropping up everywhere, new original characters started appearing which were carbon copies of other characters from random media (Aunt Homura "Fukawa" is particularly egregious), and the fic's plot derails almost entirely when Aunt Homura gets murdered out of nowhere, the very chapter after she's introduced.