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* AuthorsSavingThrow: Several readers disliked how during Applejack and Soarin’s duel Rainbow cheered for Applejack instead of Soarin, her own teammate, especially people who shipped the two of them. They also thought it was a bit harsh for her to say she doesn’t want him to think he was on her level when he had been trying to improve just to impress her and give her the kind of duel Flash could. During the last chapter, Rainbow calls Soarin the best partner she could ask for, and apologizes for what she said during his duel with Applejack, explaining she just didn’t want him to get cocky. Soarin says he figured that and says that probably would have happened if he won, which would have made him crushed when he eventually lost again. This was much better received.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: An early chapter of the first story features Trixie [[StalkerWithoutACrush following Twilight all over town]] trying to get her to accept her challenge to duel, even showing up at her house. [[HilarityEnsues It's actually pretty amusing.]] [[spoiler:Fast forward to the latest story, where at one point we're shown Trixie in Paris, watching Twilight as she sleeps. Given the [[DemonicPossession circumstances]], this time it's a lot less funny and a lot more [[NightmareFuel terrifying]].]]
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: HarsherInHindsight: An early chapter of the first story features Trixie [[StalkerWithoutACrush following Twilight all over town]] trying to get her to accept her challenge to duel, even showing up at her house. [[HilarityEnsues It's actually pretty amusing.]] amusing. [[spoiler:Fast forward to the latest story, where at one point we're shown Trixie in Paris, watching Twilight as she sleeps. Given the [[DemonicPossession circumstances]], this time it's a lot less funny and a lot more [[NightmareFuel terrifying]].]]
