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* EvilIsSexy: As a living man who fought for the King Above, Jacob was decidedly plain-faced. As a wraith, the physical form he can conjure for himself is extremely handsome.
** Depending on which side you think is the "Evil" part, Empress Morwen is described as a mature version of Regina, who is already WorldsMostBeautifulWoman.
** Depending on which side you think is the "Evil" part, Empress Morwen is described as a mature version of Regina, who is already WorldsMostBeautifulWoman.
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: At one point, Jacob takes to periodically scrying on Regina and Serah to make sure they're okay. This leads to some embarrassment for him, but apparently not for them.
-->'''Regina:''' I've felt your presence checking up on Serah and I.
-->'''Jacob:''' (''uncomfortable'') Yes, that one time...
-->'''Regina:''' [[InnocentFanserviceGirl We weren't doing anything shameful, just having sex.]]
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-->'''Regina:''' I've felt your presence checking up on Serah and I.
-->'''Jacob:''' (''uncomfortable'') Yes, that one time...
-->'''Regina:''' [[InnocentFanserviceGirl We weren't doing anything shameful, just having sex.]]
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** The Nine Heroes' leader lose any sympathy they might have generated from modern audiences when it's revealed that Morwen has reinstituted slavery and sends enemies of her regime to die in forced labor camps in the Ashlands.
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** The Nine Heroes' leader lose any sympathy they might have generated from modern audiences when it's revealed that Morwen has reinstituted slavery and sends enemies of her regime to die in forced labor camps in the Ashlands.Ashlands.
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** Depending on which side you think is the "Evil" part, Empress Morwen is described as a mature version of Regina, who is already WorldsMostBeautifulWoman.
* EvenBetterSequel: Fans of the series generally agree ''Wraith Lord'' is better than the first novel with stronger characterization and storytelling.
* GeniusBonus: At one point, Jacob says, "In my day we did not make a wasteland and call it peace." Which is a reference to ''The Tacitus.''
* OneTrueThreesome: Serah, Regina, and Jacob end up together. [[spoiler: But not without issues.]]
* MoralEventHorizon:
** The Lakelord crosses this whenthreatens to turn over Jacob to the Empress despite the fact he's broken the siege on his castle as well as done everything to keep him from being executed. He also turns on his nephew, niece, and Regina despite their own efforts to help him. He shouts that he's going to turn Regina over, naked, to be the concubine of the Crown Prince. That Serah and Thomas will be married against their will as well as serve as hostages. Also, that he's going to turn over Jacob to be a trophy for the Empire to cart around in parades. If they disagree, he promises to kill them all. Jacob responds by saying that this isn't even the fifth time he's heard a man threaten his relatives with rape and execution while calling himself righteous.
-->"I will offer hostages, beg, bribe, blackmail or steal to keep my position. If you have to marry some noble lord, Serah, so be it. If you have to marry a noble daughter, Thomas, it will be done. If I must clap you in chains, Regina, naked and mind-fucked for the Empress to give to her son, then I’ll do that too. I am the Lakelord and I am not to be dismissed!”
** Fel Hellsword and Thermic Redhand jump over this when you discover they're attempting to start a RaceWar in Kerifas in order to use the resulting bloodshed to kill everyone in the Northern Wastelands.
** The Nine Heroes' leader lose any sympathy they might have generated from modern audiences when it's revealed that Morwen has reinstituted slavery and sends enemies of her regime to die in forced labor camps in the Ashlands.
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-->'''Regina:''' [[InnocentFanserviceGirl We weren't doing anything shameful, just having sex.]]
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-->'''Regina:''' [[InnocentFanserviceGirl We weren't doing anything shameful, just having sex.]]]]
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-->'''Regina:''' [[InnocentFanserviceGirl We weren't doing anything shameful, just having sex.]]
* TheUntwist: [[spoiler:Jassamine is alive! Subverted in that she's completely insane and the Lawgiver's chosen.]]
* TheUntwist: [[spoiler:Jassamine is alive! Subverted in that she's completely insane and the Lawgiver's chosen.]]
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-->'''Regina:''' [[InnocentFanserviceGirl We weren't doing anything shameful, just having sex.]]
* TheUntwist: [[spoiler:Jassamine is alive! Subverted in that she's completely insane and the Lawgiver's chosen.]]
* TheUntwist: [[spoiler:Jassamine is alive! Subverted in that she's completely insane and the Lawgiver's chosen.
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* FunnyMoments: At one point, Jacob takes to periodically scrying on Regina and Serah to make sure they're okay. This leads to some embarrassment for him, but apparently not for them.
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* FunnyMoments: SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: At one point, Jacob takes to periodically scrying on Regina and Serah to make sure they're okay. This leads to some embarrassment for him, but apparently not for them.
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* EvilIsSexy: As a living man who fought for the King Above, Jacob was decidedly plain-faced. As a wraith, the physical form he can conjure for himself is extremely handsome.
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* FunnyMoments: At one point, Jacob takes to periodically scrying on Regina and Serah to make sure they're okay. This leads to some embarrassment for him, but apparently not for them.
-->'''Regina:''' I've felt your presence checking up on Serah and I.
-->'''Jacob:''' (''uncomfortable'') Yes, that one time...
-->'''Regina:''' [[InnocentFanserviceGirl We weren't doing anything shameful, just having sex.]]
-->'''Regina:''' I've felt your presence checking up on Serah and I.
-->'''Jacob:''' (''uncomfortable'') Yes, that one time...
-->'''Regina:''' [[InnocentFanserviceGirl We weren't doing anything shameful, just having sex.]]
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* TheUntwist: [[spoiler:Jassamine is alive! Subverted in that she's completely insane and the Lawgiver's chosen.]]
