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* IKnewIt: Several commenters on [=SpaceBattles=] already figured out that Tāwhirimātea was a Sentient long before TheReveal.
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* AudienceAwarenessAdvantage: Many readers found Cauldron's plan to take down Tāwhirimātea moronic and criticized Alexandria for continuing the attack despite Sajuuk making it clear that Tāwhirimātea isn't an Endbringer. Other commentators point out that Cauldron had no way of knowing that Tāwhirimātea had an AdaptiveAbility specializing in advanced technology nor would they have any reason to believe what Sajuuk says.
* ContinuityLockout: The story can be confusing for those unfamiliar with ''VideoGame/{{Warframe}}'', especially with all the {{Continuity Nod}}s used by the author.
* JerkassWoobie: Sajuuk. He and his sister Tāwhirimātea are amongst the last of the Sentient race. The rest of their family is dead, everything he fought for in the Old War was AllForNothing, he's become so worn out by the fighting that he's become reclusive and bitter. All while the Tenno continue to pick off his fellow Sentients one by one.
* SlowPacedBeginning: Some readers complain that the story focuses too much on WorldBuilding and not enough on moving the plot along. For example, it takes over ''100,000 words'' and almost three arcs until Taylor decides to start testing out her powers.
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* AudienceAwarenessAdvantage: Many readers found Cauldron's plan to take down Tāwhirimātea moronic and criticized Alexandria for continuing the attack despite Sajuuk making it clear that Tāwhirimātea isn't an Endbringer. Other commentators point out that Cauldron had no way of knowing that Tāwhirimātea had an AdaptiveAbility specializing in advanced technology nor would they have any reason to believe what Sajuuk says.
* ContinuityLockout: The story can be confusing for those unfamiliar with ''VideoGame/{{Warframe}}'', especially with all the {{Continuity Nod}}s used by the author.
* JerkassWoobie: Sajuuk. He and his sister Tāwhirimātea are amongst the last of the Sentient race. The rest of their family is dead, everything he fought for in the Old War was AllForNothing, he's become so worn out by the fighting that he's become reclusive and bitter. All while the Tenno continue to pick off his fellow Sentients one by one.
* SlowPacedBeginning: Some readers complain that the story focuses too much on WorldBuilding and not enough on moving the plot along. For example, it takes over ''100,000 words'' and almost three arcs until Taylor decides to start testing out her powers.
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