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* SpoiledByTheFormat: The very first chapter starts by revealing that [[spoiler:Harry is a WingedHumanoid and that TheUnmaskedWorld is now in vogue]].
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* CriticalResearchFailure: The statements about the "wolf physiology" that werewolves have that makes them form packs ruled by an Alpha is all outdated information.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: The statements about the "wolf physiology" that werewolves have that makes them form packs ruled by an Alpha is all outdated information.
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* SpoiledByTheFormat: The very first chapter starts by revealing that [[spoiler:Harry is a WingedHumanoid and that TheUnmaskedWorld is now in vogue]].vogue]].
* ValuesDissonance: The almost glowing defense of house elf slavery did not sit well with some readers
* ValuesDissonance: The almost glowing defense of house elf slavery did not sit well with some readers
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* MemeticLoser: The Author forgot that HufflepuffHouse common room is located in the dungeons when they turned Dumbledore into a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
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winged humanoid who is seen with suspicion by both muggle and wizards alike and that TheUnmaskedWorld is in vogue]].
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* SpoiledByTheFormat: The very first chapter starts by revealing that [[spoiler:Harry is a
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winged humanoid who is seen with suspicion by both muggle and wizards alike and that TheUnmaskedWorld is in vogue]].
