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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet after Fanfic/{{Apotheosis}}, but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet Platform/FanFictionDotNet after Fanfic/{{Apotheosis}}, but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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Misuse, must be fandom preferred.
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* BetterThanCanon: While some readers don't agree with the decisions darkfire1220 made in writing ''Viridescent'', most people find this story an enjoyable deviation from canon.
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* ItsTheSameSoItSucks: A common criticism of the story is that despite all the changes to the setting, the plot is largely the same as canon's. The Field Training Arc was the worst offender, as outside of a few moments of foreshadowing, it was essentially a transcript of what happened in canon.
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* ItsTheSameSoItSucks: ItsTheSameNowItSucks: A common criticism of the story is that despite all the changes to the setting, the plot is largely the same as canon's. The Field Training Arc was the worst offender, as outside of a few moments of foreshadowing, it was essentially a transcript of what happened in canon.
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AST is now Trivia and requires an explicit Word Of God and/or Word Of Saint Paul in order to qualify
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: People found it disappointing that despite Eri having a good deal of focus on the trauma that Overhaul placed on her, it was almost completely dropped following the USJ arc.
** The recent chapters show that Eri is still traumatized and not completely over everything just yet.
*** Even more recent chapters prove this to be true.
** The recent chapters show that Eri is still traumatized and not completely over everything just yet.
*** Even more recent chapters prove this to be true.
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Getting rid of these BECAUSE they have their own pages
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Has its own page now.
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* NightmareFuel: Has its own page now.
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* TearJerker: Has its own page now.
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** It's revealed that "All Flare" [[spoiler:is actually composed of several fire Quirks with "All For One" as the base, granting Izuku several Quirks to use.]] Come the Joint Training Arc, it's revealed that [[spoiler:"One For All" also stockpiles the Quirks that it's previous owners had, so Viridescent!Izuku and Canon!Izuku both have several Quirks to call on.]]
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** It's revealed that "All Flare" [[spoiler:is actually composed of several fire Quirks with "All For One" as the base, granting Izuku several Quirks to use.]] Come the Joint Training Arc, it's revealed that [[spoiler:"One For All" also stockpiles the Quirks that it's its previous owners had, so Viridescent!Izuku and Canon!Izuku both have several Quirks to call on.]]
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Has its' own page now.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Has its' its own page now.
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* TearJerker: Has its' own page now.
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* TearJerker: Has its' its own page now.
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Fixed grammar issue that aggravated me
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* NightmareFuel: Has its' own page now.
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* NightmareFuel: Has its' its own page now.
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** Viridescent!Hisashi's characterization and CharacterDevelopment arguably mirrors Endeavour's own HiddenDepths and CharacterDevelopment in canon, who went from being a mere HateSink to a flawed yet nuanced character who is trying to become better.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: People found it disappointing that despite Eri having a good deal of focus on the trauma that Overhaul placed on her, it was almost completely dropped following the USJ arc. The recent chapters show that Eri is still traumatized and not completely over everything just yet.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: People found it disappointing that despite Eri having a good deal of focus on the trauma that Overhaul placed on her, it was almost completely dropped following the USJ arc.
** The recent chapters show that Eri is still traumatized and not completely over everything justyet.yet.
*** Even more recent chapters prove this to be true.
** The recent chapters show that Eri is still traumatized and not completely over everything just
*** Even more recent chapters prove this to be true.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet after 'Fanfic/{{Apotheosis}}', but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet after 'Fanfic/{{Apotheosis}}', Fanfic/{{Apotheosis}}, but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet after 'Fanfic/{{Apotheosis,}}' but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet after 'Fanfic/{{Apotheosis,}}' 'Fanfic/{{Apotheosis}}', but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet after "Fanfic/Apotheosis," but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet after "Fanfic/Apotheosis," 'Fanfic/{{Apotheosis,}}' but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet after Fanfic/Apotheosis, but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet after Fanfic/Apotheosis, "Fanfic/Apotheosis," but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet, but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* CriticalDissonance: The story is the most popular Manga/MyHeroAcademia story on Website/FanFictionDotNet, Website/FanFictionDotNet after Fanfic/Apotheosis, but many people find it to be okay at best and terrible at worst.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: The quick temper and foul mouth are still there, but fans can agree that this incarnation of Katsuki is a far cry more attractive than his canon counterpart, considering his great relationships with Izuku, Eri, and Momo, not to mention his crusade against perverts, which Izuku wholeheartedly participates in.
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* NightmareFuel: Not has its' own page.
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* NightmareFuel: Not has Has its' own page. page now.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Has its own page now.
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* NightmareFuel: Himiko's BloodLust is rather terrifying, especially when she's suffering withdrawal. This leads to the horrific end segment of chapter 36. With Toga starving for Izuku's blood, she ends up escaping her room, with the entire sequence playing out like a scene from a horror movie and leads to her almost consuming all his blood.
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* NightmareFuel: Himiko's BloodLust is rather terrifying, especially when she's suffering withdrawal. This leads to the horrific end segment of chapter 36. With Toga starving for Izuku's blood, she ends up escaping her room, with the entire sequence playing out like a scene from a horror movie and leads to her almost consuming all his blood.Not has its' own page.
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* TearJerker: Has its own page now.
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* TearJerker: Has its its' own page now.
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* BetterThanCanon: While some readers don't agree with the decisions Darkfire1220 made in writing ''Viridescent'', most people find this story an enjoyable deviation from canon.
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* BetterThanCanon: While some readers don't agree with the decisions Darkfire1220 darkfire1220 made in writing ''Viridescent'', most people find this story an enjoyable deviation from canon.
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* BetterThanCanon: While some readers don't agree with the decisions Darkfire1220 made in writing ''Viridescent'', most people find this story an enjoyable deviation from canon.
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Broken Base is for a serious divide, like 50/50 or like a 45/55, I think. Looking back, these were never really significant enough to warrant that.
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** While many readers are happy that the story avoids [[FandomSpecificPlot the old trend in popular MHA fanfiction]] where [[TheScrappy Mineta]] is kicked out of Class-1A and replaced by [[EnsembleDarkhorse Hitoshi]], there seems to be a divide in regard to his treatment. Many readers enjoy seeing him get subjected to brutal attacks from Bakugo as comeuppance for his perverted antics, however, others see it as standard bashing that hurts the story.
** The complete lack of Japanese honorifics (largely out of darkfire's preference as well as doing so being too difficult to keep up with) is also pretty divisive. Some don't really mind this, particularly those who prefer the English Dub, as MHA is considered a strong case of SugarWiki/SuperlativeDubbing. Others are less happy with this as the setting is still entirely within Japan, so they feel that it should have honorifics regardless of the author's preference.
** While many readers are happy that the story avoids [[FandomSpecificPlot the old trend in popular MHA fanfiction]] where [[TheScrappy Mineta]] is kicked out of Class-1A and replaced by [[EnsembleDarkhorse Hitoshi]], there seems to be a divide in regard to his treatment. Many readers enjoy seeing him get subjected to brutal attacks from Bakugo as comeuppance for his perverted antics, however, others see it as standard bashing that hurts the story.
** The complete lack of Japanese honorifics (largely out of darkfire's preference as well as doing so being too difficult to keep up with) is also pretty divisive. Some don't really mind this, particularly those who prefer the English Dub, as MHA is considered a strong case of SugarWiki/SuperlativeDubbing. Others are less happy with this as the setting is still entirely within Japan, so they feel that it should have honorifics regardless of the author's preference.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: In the first chapter, All Might accepting Izuku as his successor despite that the boy is the son of his most hated enemy.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: In the first chapter, All Might accepting Izuku as his successor despite that the boy is the son of his most hated enemy.Has its own page now.
