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* CaptainObviousReveal: The first time the vampire's Commander appears, they're shot from behind and in shadow in a way that's obviously intended to conceal their identity. It's not hard for any GenreSavvy viewer to deduce, though, and it's revealed only a couple of scenes later.
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* GeniusBonus: Rita explains that she’s so knowledgeable about the supernatural undead because she’s Haitian. Haiti is the origin of [[https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zombie zombie mythology.]]
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* GeniusBonus: Rita explains that she’s so knowledgeable about the supernatural undead because she’s Haitian. Haiti is the origin of [[https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zombie zombie mythology.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The [[BigBad Commander]], [[spoiler:real name [[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]]]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], [[VillainousGentrification buying up properties in the Bronx]] before murdering their owners. Unleashing their vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, [[spoiler:Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The [[BigBad Commander]], [[spoiler:real name [[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]]]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], [[VillainousGentrification buying up properties in the Bronx]] before murdering their owners. Unleashing their vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, [[spoiler:Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish.]]
* GeniusBonus: Rita explains that she’s so knowledgeable about the supernatural undead because she’s Haitian. Haiti is the origin of [[https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zombie zombie mythology.]]
* GeniusBonus: Rita explains that she’s so knowledgeable about the supernatural undead because she’s Haitian. Haiti is the origin of [[https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zombie zombie mythology.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:The [[BigBad Commander]], real name [[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], [[VillainousGentrification buying up properties in the Bronx]] before murdering their owners. Unleashing her vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish]].
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:The The [[BigBad Commander]], real [[spoiler:real name [[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]], Tyrell]]]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], [[VillainousGentrification buying up properties in the Bronx]] before murdering their owners. Unleashing her their vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, Vivian [[spoiler:Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish]].vanish.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The [[BigBad Commander]], real name [[spoiler:[[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]]]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], [[VillainousGentrification buying up properties in the Bronx]] before murdering their owners. [[spoiler:Unleashing her vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The [[spoiler:The [[BigBad Commander]], real name [[spoiler:[[BitchInSheepsClothing [[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]]]], Tyrell]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], [[VillainousGentrification buying up properties in the Bronx]] before murdering their owners. [[spoiler:Unleashing Unleashing her vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish.]]vanish]].
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* CompleteMonster: The [[BigBad Commander]], real name [[spoiler:[[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]]]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], buying up properties in the Bronx before murdering their owners. [[spoiler:Unleashing her vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The [[BigBad Commander]], real name [[spoiler:[[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]]]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], [[VillainousGentrification buying up properties in the Bronx Bronx]] before murdering their owners. [[spoiler:Unleashing her vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The [[BigBad Commander]], real name [[BitchInSheepsClothing [[spoiler:[[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]], Tyrell]]]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], buying up properties in the Bronx before murdering their owners. Unleashing [[spoiler:Unleashing her vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The [[BigBad Commander]], real name [[BitchInSheepsClothing Vivian Tyrell]], is the head of [[EvilInc the Murnau Corporation]], buying up properties in the Bronx before murdering their owners. Unleashing her vampire forces to slaughter those who won't be missed in the Bronx, Vivian kills the young heroes' friend Tony and later returns to [[WouldHurtAChild murder the children]], revealing she doesn't ever wish the Bronx to change because she far prefers it when nobody notices when so many innocent people vanish.
