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** In particular, [[spoiler:Glitcher]] spends ''ten thousand years'' in the area due to a bug in the system. The mass decay eventually left in in a totally empty void, so [[spoiler:he had to use his own threads to make anything]], leaving him a partially-intangible mess filled with holes. Fortunately, [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Alison's voice kept him company.]]
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** In particular, [[spoiler:Glitcher]] spends ''ten thousand years'' in the area due to a bug in the system. The mass decay eventually left in in a totally empty void, so [[spoiler:he had to use his own threads to make anything]], leaving him a partially-intangible mess filled with holes. Fortunately, [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Alison's voice kept him company.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming:SugarWiki/FunnyMoments:
** The first [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/537104.html#549420 hacking attempt]] by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens'' of combat-trained [=AIs=].[[note]]And that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team.[[/note]]
--->'''Seal jetal:''' ...what is this? Who are all of you people? Which one of you is the real Unity?"
--->'''Alison:''' Unity isn't our name. It's our descriptor. ''Dogpile!''
** During Glitcher and Rulekeeper's GRatedSex, [[spoiler:the Corruptor]] is weirded out and tries to cover his face -- but he doesn't have any arms, so he just coils into a silly-looking ball and makes everything even more awkward.
** Many of Radmin's exploits during the wrestling tournament, but particularly the dramatic infodump he delivers for [[spoiler:Glitcher's son]], which sounds like a hilariously cliche setup for a HighFantasy novel. It's technically mostly true!
--->"You are in the universally famous wrestedone, located at the center of the great Luchadore empire and created by your father, [[spoiler:the Glitcher]] namesake himself, [[spoiler:Glitcher]]! Your mother is the red toned individual, and you are floating because you have inherited their magical wrestling powers! But be warned! Dark times have fallen upon our fair kingdom as your father, the great [[spoiler:Glitcher]], has been SPIRITED AWAY to the NEGA DIMENSION by a horrible monster! You must assemble a group of 5 to take with you on an epic quest to save him from the clutches of the dreaded Ring Shell!"
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments:
** The first [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/537104.html#549420 hacking attempt]] by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens'' of combat-trained [=AIs=].[[note]]And that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team.[[/note]]
--->'''Seal jetal:''' ...what is this? Who are all of you people? Which one of you is the real Unity?"
--->'''Alison:''' Unity isn't our name. It's our descriptor. ''Dogpile!''
** During Glitcher and Rulekeeper's GRatedSex, [[spoiler:the Corruptor]] is weirded out and tries to cover his face -- but he doesn't have any arms, so he just coils into a silly-looking ball and makes everything even more awkward.
** Many of Radmin's exploits during the wrestling tournament, but particularly the dramatic infodump he delivers for [[spoiler:Glitcher's son]], which sounds like a hilariously cliche setup for a HighFantasy novel. It's technically mostly true!
--->"You are in the universally famous wrestedone, located at the center of the great Luchadore empire and created by your father, [[spoiler:the Glitcher]] namesake himself, [[spoiler:Glitcher]]! Your mother is the red toned individual, and you are floating because you have inherited their magical wrestling powers! But be warned! Dark times have fallen upon our fair kingdom as your father, the great [[spoiler:Glitcher]], has been SPIRITED AWAY to the NEGA DIMENSION by a horrible monster! You must assemble a group of 5 to take with you on an epic quest to save him from the clutches of the dreaded Ring Shell!"
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny:
** The first [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/537104.html#549420 hacking attempt]] by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens'' of combat-trained [=AIs=].[[note]]And that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team.[[/note]]
--->'''Seal jetal:''' ...what is this? Who are all of you people? Which one of you is the real Unity?"
--->'''Alison:''' Unity isn't our name. It's our descriptor. ''Dogpile!''
** During Glitcher and Rulekeeper's GRatedSex, [[spoiler:the Corruptor]] is weirded out and tries to cover his face -- but he doesn't have any arms, so he just coils into a silly-looking ball and makes everything even more awkward.
** Many of Radmin's exploits during the wrestling tournament, but particularly the dramatic infodump he delivers for [[spoiler:Glitcher's son]], which sounds like a hilariously cliche setup for a HighFantasy novel. It's technically mostly true!
--->"You are in the universally famous wrestedone, located at the center of the great Luchadore empire and created by your father, [[spoiler:the Glitcher]] namesake himself, [[spoiler:Glitcher]]! Your mother is the red toned individual, and you are floating because you have inherited their magical wrestling powers! But be warned! Dark times have fallen upon our fair kingdom as your father, the great [[spoiler:Glitcher]], has been SPIRITED AWAY to the NEGA DIMENSION by a horrible monster! You must assemble a group of 5 to take with you on an epic quest to save him from the clutches of the dreaded Ring Shell!"
** The first [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/537104.html#549420 hacking attempt]] by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens'' of combat-trained [=AIs=].[[note]]And that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team.[[/note]]
--->'''Seal jetal:''' ...what is this? Who are all of you people? Which one of you is the real Unity?"
--->'''Alison:''' Unity isn't our name. It's our descriptor. ''Dogpile!''
** During Glitcher and Rulekeeper's GRatedSex, [[spoiler:the Corruptor]] is weirded out and tries to cover his face -- but he doesn't have any arms, so he just coils into a silly-looking ball and makes everything even more awkward.
** Many of Radmin's exploits during the wrestling tournament, but particularly the dramatic infodump he delivers for [[spoiler:Glitcher's son]], which sounds like a hilariously cliche setup for a HighFantasy novel. It's technically mostly true!
--->"You are in the universally famous wrestedone, located at the center of the great Luchadore empire and created by your father, [[spoiler:the Glitcher]] namesake himself, [[spoiler:Glitcher]]! Your mother is the red toned individual, and you are floating because you have inherited their magical wrestling powers! But be warned! Dark times have fallen upon our fair kingdom as your father, the great [[spoiler:Glitcher]], has been SPIRITED AWAY to the NEGA DIMENSION by a horrible monster! You must assemble a group of 5 to take with you on an epic quest to save him from the clutches of the dreaded Ring Shell!"
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-->'''Seal jetal:''' ...what is this? Who are all of you people? Which one of you is the real Unity?"
-->'''Alison:''' Unity isn't our name. It's our descriptor. ''Dogpile!''
-->'''Seal jetal:''' ...what is this? Who are all of you people? Which one of you is the real Unity?"
-->'''Alison:''' Unity isn't our name. It's our descriptor. ''Dogpile!''
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** [[spoiler:Glitcher]]'s posthumous message to Rulekeeper, saying that [[spoiler:for all his bombasity of being "the best", she was the best person he ever knew]].
*CrowningMomentOfFunny: CrowningMomentOfFunny:
** The first [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/537104.html#549420 hacking attempt]] by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens'' of combat-trained [=AIs=].[[note]]And that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team.[[/note]]
-->'''Seal --->'''Seal jetal:''' ...what is this? Who are all of you people? Which one of you is the real Unity?"
-->'''Alison:''' --->'''Alison:''' Unity isn't our name. It's our descriptor. ''Dogpile!''''Dogpile!''
** During Glitcher and Rulekeeper's GRatedSex, [[spoiler:the Corruptor]] is weirded out and tries to cover his face -- but he doesn't have any arms, so he just coils into a silly-looking ball and makes everything even more awkward.
** Many of Radmin's exploits during the wrestling tournament, but particularly the dramatic infodump he delivers for [[spoiler:Glitcher's son]], which sounds like a hilariously cliche setup for a HighFantasy novel. It's technically mostly true!
--->"You are in the universally famous wrestedone, located at the center of the great Luchadore empire and created by your father, [[spoiler:the Glitcher]] namesake himself, [[spoiler:Glitcher]]! Your mother is the red toned individual, and you are floating because you have inherited their magical wrestling powers! But be warned! Dark times have fallen upon our fair kingdom as your father, the great [[spoiler:Glitcher]], has been SPIRITED AWAY to the NEGA DIMENSION by a horrible monster! You must assemble a group of 5 to take with you on an epic quest to save him from the clutches of the dreaded Ring Shell!"
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** The first [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/537104.html#549420 hacking attempt]] by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens'' of combat-trained [=AIs=].[[note]]And that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team.[[/note]]
** During Glitcher and Rulekeeper's GRatedSex, [[spoiler:the Corruptor]] is weirded out and tries to cover his face -- but he doesn't have any arms, so he just coils into a silly-looking ball and makes everything even more awkward.
** Many of Radmin's exploits during the wrestling tournament, but particularly the dramatic infodump he delivers for [[spoiler:Glitcher's son]], which sounds like a hilariously cliche setup for a HighFantasy novel. It's technically mostly true!
--->"You are in the universally famous wrestedone, located at the center of the great Luchadore empire and created by your father, [[spoiler:the Glitcher]] namesake himself, [[spoiler:Glitcher]]! Your mother is the red toned individual, and you are floating because you have inherited their magical wrestling powers! But be warned! Dark times have fallen upon our fair kingdom as your father, the great [[spoiler:Glitcher]], has been SPIRITED AWAY to the NEGA DIMENSION by a horrible monster! You must assemble a group of 5 to take with you on an epic quest to save him from the clutches of the dreaded Ring Shell!"
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** [[spoiler:Glitcher's second death]] at the end of thread 13, with flashbacks to the best moments of [[spoiler:his]] life as [[spoiler:he's slowly broken up to elementary pieces by the Guardian's stomach]].
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** [[spoiler:Glitcher's second death]] at the end of thread 13, with flashbacks to the best moments of [[spoiler:his]] life as [[spoiler:he's slowly broken up to elementary pieces by the Guardian's stomach]]. The beginning of thread 14 proceeds to twist the knife as we see all the characters grieving.
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** [[spoiler:Glitcher's second death]] at the end of thread 13, with flashbacks to the best moments of [[spoiler:his]] life as [[spoiler:he's slowly broken up to elementary pieces by the Guardian's stomach]].
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** The response to Alison's LineInTheSand speech [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/582828.html#583972 here.]]
--->"Alison," Recluse says, "[[UndyingLoyalty Anyone left with you is already willing to die for either you or your mission, or both]]. If you want us to go to the paradise, you're going to have to order us. And some of us would argue."
--->"Alison," Recluse says, "[[UndyingLoyalty Anyone left with you is already willing to die for either you or your mission, or both]]. If you want us to go to the paradise, you're going to have to order us. And some of us would argue."
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The very fact that the immediate response of tgchan upon learning about the DeadlyGame was to try to save everyone.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming:
** The very fact that the immediate response of tgchan upon learning about the DeadlyGame was to try to saveeveryone.everyone.
** When [[spoiler:Glitcher]] was [[AndIMustScream spending eons in an empty void]], he was still able to communicate with Alison through a radio. She talked and sang to him throughout the entire ordeal, keeping him sane.
** Reuniting [[spoiler:Goat]] and [[spoiler:Timekeeper]].
** The very fact that the immediate response of tgchan upon learning about the DeadlyGame was to try to save
** When [[spoiler:Glitcher]] was [[AndIMustScream spending eons in an empty void]], he was still able to communicate with Alison through a radio. She talked and sang to him throughout the entire ordeal, keeping him sane.
** Reuniting [[spoiler:Goat]] and [[spoiler:Timekeeper]].
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** In particular, [[spoiler:Glitcher]] spends ''ten thousand years'' in the area due to a bug in the system. The mass decay eventually left in in a totally empty void, so [[spoiler:he had to use his own threads to make anything]], leaving him a partially-intangible mess filled with holes. Fortunately, [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Alison's voice kept him company.]]
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* NightmareFuel: Stage 7 Area 3 is pretty awful in general (see TearJerker, below), but in particular, [[spoiler:certain individuals are BuriedAlive, spending ''decades'' in total isolation (if they aren't DrivenToSuicide in the interim)]].
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Glitcher]]'s suicide.
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* TearJerker: TearJerker:
** [[spoiler:Glitcher]]'ssuicide.
suicide. See it [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/435623.html#442151 here.]]
** [[spoiler:Timekeeper]]'s suicide is even worse. It happens over a longer, slower period of gradual depression, and appears permanent. See it [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/567307.html#579881 here.]]
** Stage 7 Area 3 is incredibly disturbing in general; the only way to die is through suicide, and only the final survivor can move on to the next area. The last few contestants inevitably devolve into extreme nihilism and depression.
** [[spoiler:Glitcher]]'s
** [[spoiler:Timekeeper]]'s suicide is even worse. It happens over a longer, slower period of gradual depression, and appears permanent. See it [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/567307.html#579881 here.]]
** Stage 7 Area 3 is incredibly disturbing in general; the only way to die is through suicide, and only the final survivor can move on to the next area. The last few contestants inevitably devolve into extreme nihilism and depression.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The first [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/537104.html#549420 hacking attempt]] by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens''[[note]]and that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team[[/note]] of combat-trained [=AIs=], who promptly dogpile him.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The first [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/537104.html#549420 hacking attempt]] by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens''[[note]]and ''dozens'' of combat-trained [=AIs=].[[note]]And that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team[[/note]] of combat-trained [=AIs=], who promptly dogpile him.team.[[/note]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The first hacking attempt by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens''[[note]]and that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team[[/note]] of combat-trained [=AIs=], who promptly dogpile him.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The first [[http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/537104.html#549420 hacking attempt attempt]] by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens''[[note]]and that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team[[/note]] of combat-trained [=AIs=], who promptly dogpile him.him.
-->'''Hacker:''' ...what is this? Who are all of you people? Which one of you is the real Unity?"
-->'''Alison:''' Unity isn't our name. It's our descriptor. ''Dogpile!''
-->'''Hacker:''' ...what is this? Who are all of you people? Which one of you is the real Unity?"
-->'''Alison:''' Unity isn't our name. It's our descriptor. ''Dogpile!''
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The first hacking attempt by an enemy jetal. He boasts how soundly he's going to take Unity down, that most [=AIs=] don't know how to fight in cyberspace... and lands in the middle of the lobby, surrouded by ''dozens''[[note]]and that's only a small part of her 4000-strong team[[/note]] of combat-trained [=AIs=], who promptly dogpile him.
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* AngstWhatAngst: [[spoiler:Glitcher]] recovers from suicidal depression very quickly.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The very fact that the immediate response of tgchan upon learning about the DeadlyGame was to try to save everyone.
* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Glitcher]]'s suicide.
* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Glitcher]]'s suicide.
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* ArcFatigue: The "Belenosian Interlude", a {{Filler}}ish sub-plot, lasted three threads -- half the length of the "main" story up to that point. Some readers were a bit disoriented when transitioning back to events in the contest.
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