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* AntiClimaxBoss: The Tyrant is one in-universe--despite being played up as a major threat for over half the story, he dies extremely quickly in an explosion. Twillight wasn't even ''trying'' to fight him--he just gets caught and dies.
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* AntiClimaxBoss: AntiClimaxBoss:
** The Tyrant is one in-universe--despite being played up as a major threat for over half the story, he dies extremely quickly in an explosion. Twillight wasn't even ''trying'' to fight him--he just gets caught anddies.dies.
** Likewise, the Evil Enchantress of Everfree Forest was built up for a few chapters, only to be unceremoniously defeated by Twillight's DeusExMachina in the same chapter she finally appeared. Pinkie Pie even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades this.]]
---> '''Pinkie Pie:''' This whole Everfree Forest plot was totally pointless and Zecora should’ve gotten more screentime.
** The Tyrant is one in-universe--despite being played up as a major threat for over half the story, he dies extremely quickly in an explosion. Twillight wasn't even ''trying'' to fight him--he just gets caught and
** Likewise, the Evil Enchantress of Everfree Forest was built up for a few chapters, only to be unceremoniously defeated by Twillight's DeusExMachina in the same chapter she finally appeared. Pinkie Pie even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades this.]]
---> '''Pinkie Pie:''' This whole Everfree Forest plot was totally pointless and Zecora should’ve gotten more screentime.
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* CanonDefilement: A LOT of it.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Celesia is a CardCarryingVillain who invokes YouHaveFailedMe at any opportunity.
** Luna, while not as bad as Celesia, still definitely qualifies.
** Luna, while not as bad as Celesia, still definitely qualifies.
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Up To Eleven is being dewicked.
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* CanonDefilement: [[UpToEleven A LOT of it.]]
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* CanonDefilement: [[UpToEleven A LOT of it.]]
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YMMV can't be inverted, just not an example than.
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* CreatorsPet: Fluttershy is a pretty major inversion.
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* MarySue: [[AwesomeMcCoolName ADMIRAL Awesome]] [[AuthorAvatar Yonasomun]] [[AwesomeMcCoolName Armageddon]].
** ParodySue: Pinkie even ''calls him'' a MarySue.
** ParodySue: Pinkie even ''calls him'' a MarySue.
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** And Rainbow Dash's love for Pinkie Pie, which was similarly spontaneous but didn't even have the mitigating factor of having been suggested by a MarySue.
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** And Rainbow Dash's love for Pinkie Pie, which was similarly spontaneous but didn't even have the mitigating factor of having been suggested by a MarySue.spontaneous.
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* AntiClimaxBoss: The Tyrant is one in-universe--despite being played up as a major threat for over half the story, he dies extremely quickly in an explosion. Twillight wasn't even ''trying'' to fight him--he just gets caught and dies.
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** There's also Twillight abruptly discovering every villain from the show--including ones who aren't featured anywhere else in the story, such as Discord or the Smooze--right before fighting Celesia. She wipes them out in one sentence, and they're never brought up again.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: Rarity, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie all abruptly declare themselves lesbians for what seems to be dramatic tension. After a few paragraphs, their relationships never come up again.
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** And Rainbow Dash's love for Pinkie Pie, which was similarly spontaneous but didn't even have the mitigating factor of having been suggested by a MarySue.
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** And Rainbow Dash's love for Pinkie Pie, which was similarly spontaneous but didn't even have the mitigating factor of having been suggested by a MarySue.MarySue.
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** ParodySue: Pinkie even ''calls him'' a MarySue.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Twilight's reaction to learning that Celesia is evil definitely qualifies.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The new lead guard [[MemeticMutation takes an arrow to the knee]] before he can shoot Twilight. The event is never mentioned again, despite being completely out of place in the story's general world where guns are the weapon of choice.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The new lead guard [[MemeticMutation takes an arrow to the knee]] before he can shoot Twilight. The event is never mentioned again, despite being completely out of place in the story's general world where guns are the weapon of choice.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Twilight's Twillight's reaction to learning that Celesia is evil definitely qualifies.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The new lead guard [[MemeticMutation takes an arrow to the knee]] before he can shootTwilight.Twillight. The event is never mentioned again, despite being completely out of place in the story's general world where guns are the weapon of choice.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The new lead guard [[MemeticMutation takes an arrow to the knee]] before he can shoot
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* AngstWhatAngst: Twilight's reaction to learning that Celesia is evil definitely qualifies.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The new lead guard [[MemeticMutation takes an arrow to the knee]] before he can shoot Twilight. The event is never mentioned again, despite being completely out of place in the story's general world where guns are the weapon of choice.
* CanonDefilement: [[UpToEleven A LOT of it.]]
* CrackPairing: [[spoiler: [=SlenderDash=]]], as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by [[FourthWallObserver Pinkie Pie]].
* CreatorsPet: Fluttershy is a pretty major inversion.
* MarySue: [[AwesomeMcCoolName ADMIRAL Awesome]] [[AuthorAvatar Yonasomun]] [[AwesomeMcCoolName Armageddon]].
* RonTheDeathEater: Celesia is a CardCarryingVillain who invokes YouHaveFailedMe at any opportunity.
** Luna, while not as bad as Celesia, still definitely qualifies.
* StrangledByTheRedString: Applejack and Rarity, who admit that they've fallen in love with each other the moment Admiral Awesome says that they're in love.
** And Rainbow Dash's love for Pinkie Pie, which was similarly spontaneous but didn't even have the mitigating factor of having been suggested by a MarySue.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The new lead guard [[MemeticMutation takes an arrow to the knee]] before he can shoot Twilight. The event is never mentioned again, despite being completely out of place in the story's general world where guns are the weapon of choice.
* CanonDefilement: [[UpToEleven A LOT of it.]]
* CrackPairing: [[spoiler: [=SlenderDash=]]], as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by [[FourthWallObserver Pinkie Pie]].
* CreatorsPet: Fluttershy is a pretty major inversion.
* MarySue: [[AwesomeMcCoolName ADMIRAL Awesome]] [[AuthorAvatar Yonasomun]] [[AwesomeMcCoolName Armageddon]].
* RonTheDeathEater: Celesia is a CardCarryingVillain who invokes YouHaveFailedMe at any opportunity.
** Luna, while not as bad as Celesia, still definitely qualifies.
* StrangledByTheRedString: Applejack and Rarity, who admit that they've fallen in love with each other the moment Admiral Awesome says that they're in love.
** And Rainbow Dash's love for Pinkie Pie, which was similarly spontaneous but didn't even have the mitigating factor of having been suggested by a MarySue.
