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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: The Annual "Harass the Valliere" Festival sounds like a harmless event where where Zerbst lead farmers on exciting 'hunts' through the border's contested land. Usually to break enough stuff to make it an annoyance, but not enough to warrant a repercussion.... That is until you learn that they do it on the one day when Karin refuses to leave her manor because that was the day Luise was taken and Cattleya was ''killed'' several years ago and she's '''grieving'''.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: HarsherInHindsight: The Annual "Harass the Valliere" Festival sounds like a harmless event where where Zerbst lead farmers on exciting 'hunts' through the border's contested land. Usually to break enough stuff to make it an annoyance, but not enough to warrant a repercussion.... That is until you learn that they do it on the one day when Karin refuses to leave her manor because that was the day Luise was taken and Cattleya was ''killed'' several years ago and she's '''grieving'''.
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* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.
** Hell, it doesn't even address how ''Louise'' could have reacted. Did he honestly think that she would let the fact they were emotionally torturing her mother go without a hitch when she got reintroduced?
** Hell, it doesn't even address how ''Louise'' could have reacted. Did he honestly think that she would let the fact they were emotionally torturing her mother go without a hitch when she got reintroduced?
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** Hell, it doesn't even address how ''Louise'' could have reacted. Did he honestly think that she would let the fact they were emotionally torturing her mother go without a hitch when she got reintroduced?
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* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.
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* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.Louise.
** Hell, it doesn't even address how ''Louise'' could have reacted. Did he honestly think that she would let the fact they were emotionally torturing her mother go without a hitch when she got reintroduced?
** Hell, it doesn't even address how ''Louise'' could have reacted. Did he honestly think that she would let the fact they were emotionally torturing her mother go without a hitch when she got reintroduced?
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* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.
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* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.Louise.
** Hell, it doesn't even address how ''Louise'' could have reacted. Did he honestly think that she would let the fact they were emotionally torturing her mother go without a hitch when she got reintroduced?
** Hell, it doesn't even address how ''Louise'' could have reacted. Did he honestly think that she would let the fact they were emotionally torturing her mother go without a hitch when she got reintroduced?
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* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.
** There's also the fact that, the plot was jump started by him kidnapping Louise, which in turn made her act in ways that hurt the Cardinals father. However, he doesn't seem to realize that he doesn't have any grounds to criticize Karin, considering he kidnapped an allies child, murdered the other one, and gloats about it mind you, and he himself acting irrationally as a result, calling her a selfish bitch, while he stays mad at her for a death he indirectly caused through his criminal actions. Really, it makes the Cardinals speech come off as somewhat an AuthorTract.
** There's also the fact that, the plot was jump started by him kidnapping Louise, which in turn made her act in ways that hurt the Cardinals father. However, he doesn't seem to realize that he doesn't have any grounds to criticize Karin, considering he kidnapped an allies child, murdered the other one, and gloats about it mind you, and he himself acting irrationally as a result, calling her a selfish bitch, while he stays mad at her for a death he indirectly caused through his criminal actions. Really, it makes the Cardinals speech come off as somewhat an AuthorTract.
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* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.
** There's also the fact that, the plot was jump started by him kidnapping Louise, which in turn made her act in ways that hurt the Cardinals father. However, he doesn't seem to realize that he doesn't have any grounds to criticize Karin, considering he kidnapped an allies child, murdered the other one, and gloats about it mind you, and he himself acting irrationally as a result, calling her a selfish bitch, while he stays mad at her for a death he indirectly caused through his criminal actions. Really, it makes the Cardinals speech come off as somewhat an AuthorTract.Louise.
** There's also the fact that, the plot was jump started by him kidnapping Louise, which in turn made her act in ways that hurt the Cardinals father. However, he doesn't seem to realize that he doesn't have any grounds to criticize Karin, considering he kidnapped an allies child, murdered the other one, and gloats about it mind you, and he himself acting irrationally as a result, calling her a selfish bitch, while he stays mad at her for a death he indirectly caused through his criminal actions. Really, it makes the Cardinals speech come off as somewhat an AuthorTract.
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** There's also the fact that, the plot was jump started by him kidnapping Louise, which in turn made her act in ways that hurt the Cardinals father. However, he doesn't seem to realize that he doesn't have any grounds to criticize Karin, considering he kidnapped an allies child, murdered the other one, and gloats about it mind you, and he himself acting irrationally as a result, calling her a selfish bitch, while he stays mad at her for a death he indirectly caused through criminal actions. Really, it makes the Cardinals speech come off as somewhat an AuthorTract.
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* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.
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* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.Louise.
** There's also the fact that, the plot was jump started by him kidnapping Louise, which in turn made her act in ways that hurt the Cardinals father. However, he doesn't seem to realize that he doesn't have any grounds to criticize Karin, considering he kidnapped an allies child, murdered the other one, and gloats about it mind you, and he himself acting irrationally as a result, calling her a selfish bitch, while he stays mad at her for a death he indirectly caused through criminal actions. Really, it makes the Cardinals speech come off as somewhat an AuthorTract.
** There's also the fact that, the plot was jump started by him kidnapping Louise, which in turn made her act in ways that hurt the Cardinals father. However, he doesn't seem to realize that he doesn't have any grounds to criticize Karin, considering he kidnapped an allies child, murdered the other one, and gloats about it mind you, and he himself acting irrationally as a result, calling her a selfish bitch, while he stays mad at her for a death he indirectly caused through criminal actions. Really, it makes the Cardinals speech come off as somewhat an AuthorTract.
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* BaseBreaker: The fact that Saito is pretty much manipulated by everyone.
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* BaseBreaker: The fact that Saito is pretty much manipulated by everyone.
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* IKnewIt: A lot of readers figured out TheReveal on Chapter 73.
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* StrawmanHasAPoint: [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5055420/ Backed by the author]], the Cardinal has a point about what Karin did weakening the country.
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* IronWoobie: The sheer amount of things Siesta goes through in the fic is just depressing, but she soldiers on.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: The Annual "Harass the Valliere" Festival sounds like a harmless event where where Zerbst lead farmers on exciting 'hunts' through the border's contested land. Usually to break enough stuff to make it an annoyance, but not enough to warrant a repercussion.... That is until you learn that they do it on the one day when Karin refuses to leave her manor because Luise was taken years ago and she's likely grieving.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: The Annual "Harass the Valliere" Festival sounds like a harmless event where where Zerbst lead farmers on exciting 'hunts' through the border's contested land. Usually to break enough stuff to make it an annoyance, but not enough to warrant a repercussion.... That is until you learn that they do it on the one day when Karin refuses to leave her manor because that was the day Luise was taken and Cattleya was ''killed'' several years ago and she's likely grieving.'''grieving'''.
* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.
* WhatAnIdiot: As [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5016787/ this reader]] helpfully points out, there are so many damn ways the Cardinal's plot to reveal Louise later could have blown up in his face that he should by all rights be dead. This doesn't even include the fact that Karin could very well decided to level the church, royal family, and everyone else involved for hiding Louise.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: The Annual "Harass the Valliere" Festival sounds like a harmless event where where Zerbst lead farmers on exciting 'hunts' through the border's contested land. Usually to break enough stuff to make it an annoyance, but not enough to warrant a repercussion.... That is until you learn that they do it on the one day when Karen refuses to leave her manor because Luise was taken years ago and she's likely grieving.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: The Annual "Harass the Valliere" Festival sounds like a harmless event where where Zerbst lead farmers on exciting 'hunts' through the border's contested land. Usually to break enough stuff to make it an annoyance, but not enough to warrant a repercussion.... That is until you learn that they do it on the one day when Karen Karin refuses to leave her manor because Luise was taken years ago and she's likely grieving.
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