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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* UncannyValley: Zirah is this InUniverse, considered to be plain creepy.
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** "Creepy" sells Zirah a million miles short of the pants-wetting, throat-constricting, limb-trembling ''horror'' that he is capable of.
** [[NightmareFuel/TheSacredAndTheProfane There's a whole page for it]].
** [[NightmareFuel/TheSacredAndTheProfane There's a whole page for it]].
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** "Creepy" sells Zirah a million miles short is capable of the such pants-wetting, throat-constricting, limb-trembling ''horror'' that he is capable of.
**that [[NightmareFuel/TheSacredAndTheProfane There's there's a whole page for it]].
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* ToughActToFollow: The OTHER reason "what if Aziraphale fell instead of Crowley" fics aren't too common in the fandom -- not only does this fic {{Deconstruct|ion}} the concept so epically, it's ''so'' good that not many people want to risk trying their hand at the same concept and getting negatively compared to this story.
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* ToughActToFollow: The OTHER reason "what if Aziraphale fell instead of Crowley" fics aren't too common in the fandom -- not only does this fic {{Deconstruct|ion}} the concept so epically, skillfully, it's ''so'' good that not many people want to risk trying their hand at the same concept and getting negatively compared to this story.
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* TheWoobie: Caphriel. Okay, he's generally pretty stoic about it, but read that last chapter and tell me you don't want to give him a hug, thank him for everything he's done, and let Canon!Aziraphale fuss over him for a while.
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* TheWoobie: Caphriel. Okay, he's generally pretty stoic about it, but read that last chapter and tell me us you don't want to give him a hug, thank him for everything he's done, and let Canon!Aziraphale fuss over him for a while.
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* {{HSQ}}: Approxomately 10.7 "Holy ''FUCK''"s per chapter, at a very conservative readthrough.
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Misuse
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* CrazyAwesome: [[spoiler: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Death by origami.]]]]
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* ToughActToFollow: The OTHER reason "what if Aziraphale fell instead of Crowley" fics aren't too common in the fandom -- not only does this fic {{Deconstruct|ion}} the concept so epically, it's ''so'' good that not many people want to risk trying their hand at the same concept and getting negatively compared to this story.
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* TheWoobie: Caphriel.Ok, he's generally pretty stoic about it, but read that last chapter and tell me you don't want to give him a hug, thank him for everything he's done, and let Canon!Aziraphale fuss over him for a while.
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* TheWoobie: Caphriel.Ok, Okay, he's generally pretty stoic about it, but read that last chapter and tell me you don't want to give him a hug, thank him for everything he's done, and let Canon!Aziraphale fuss over him for a while.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Just in case you had any thoughts that maybe Zirah was like our old LovableRouge friend Crowley from the original... [[spoiler: The spare baby doesn't get to live this time.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Just in case you had any thoughts that maybe Zirah was like our old LovableRouge LovableRogue friend Crowley from the original... [[spoiler: The spare baby doesn't get to live this time.]]
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I don't think it counts as Ho Yay if they're explicitly sleeping together.
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* CrazyAwesome: [[spoiler: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny death by origami.]]]]
* HoYay: Guess.
* HoYay: Guess.
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* AngstAversion: Some avoid this fic because of how notoriously depressing it is.
* CrazyAwesome: [[spoiler: [[CrowningMomentOfFunnydeath Death by origami.]]]]
* HoYay: Guess.]]]]
* CrazyAwesome: [[spoiler: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny
* HoYay: Guess.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: The spare baby doesn't get to live this time.]]
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* HypeBacklash: Inevitable for a story so well-regarded in the fandom.
* MoralEventHorizon: Just in case you had any thoughts that maybe Zirah was like our old LovableRouge friend Crowley from the original... [[spoiler: The spare baby doesn't get to live this time.]]]]
* MoralEventHorizon: Just in case you had any thoughts that maybe Zirah was like our old LovableRouge friend Crowley from the original... [[spoiler: The spare baby doesn't get to live this time.
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** [[NightmareFuel/TheSacredAndTheProfane There's a whole page for it]].
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* UncannyValley: Zirah
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* UncannyValley: ZirahZirah is this InUniverse, considered to be plain creepy.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Getting there by ''the first chapter after the prologue''. [[spoiler: "Zirah would kill a baby just to stop him crying"... made even worse because he still suffers from CutenessProximity. It's just ''creepy.'']]
** "Creepy" sells Zirah a million miles short of the pants-wetting, throat-constricting, limb-trembling ''horror'' that he is capable of.
** "Creepy" sells Zirah a million miles short of the pants-wetting, throat-constricting, limb-trembling ''horror'' that he is capable of.
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* NightmareFuel: Getting there by ''the first chapter after the prologue''. [[spoiler: "Zirah would kill a baby just to stop him crying"... made even worse because he still suffers from CutenessProximity. It's just ''creepy.'']]
** "Creepy" sells Zirah a million miles short of the pants-wetting, throat-constricting, limb-trembling ''horror'' that he is capable of.
** "Creepy" sells Zirah a million miles short of the pants-wetting, throat-constricting, limb-trembling ''horror'' that he is capable of.
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* UncannyValley: ZirahZirah
* TheWoobie: Caphriel.Ok, he's generally pretty stoic about it, but read that last chapter and tell me you don't want to give him a hug, thank him for everything he's done, and let Canon!Aziraphale fuss over him for a while.
* TheWoobie: Caphriel.Ok, he's generally pretty stoic about it, but read that last chapter and tell me you don't want to give him a hug, thank him for everything he's done, and let Canon!Aziraphale fuss over him for a while.
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** "Creepy" sells Zirah a million miles short of the pants-wetting, throat-constricting, limb-trembling ''horror'' that he is capable of.
* HoYay: Guess.
*{{HSQ}}{{HSQ}}: Approxomately 10.7 "Holy ''FUCK''"s per chapter, at a very conservative readthrough.
* HoYay: Guess.
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