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* CompleteMonster: [[{{Necromancer}} Edris Dean]] is a servant of The Lady Blue and masterminds a series of cruel attacks to create the "Unborn", murdering pregnant women to damn the souls of their unborn children to hell, where they will become powerful undead beings to be unleashed on the world, the fate that befalls the wife and unborn baby of the Viking hero Snorri. It is also revealed that when the hero Jalan was young, Edris Dean nearly killed him and murdered his pregnant mother to turn his unborn sister into the strongest Unborn ever seen. Torturing and murdering a friend of Jalan's to obtain the Liar's Key that can help reshape the world, Edris later enslaves the soul of Jalan's sister to get her to kill her brother to help tear a hole through reality which could kill countless people in the cities. [[TheStarscream Ostensibly on board]] with the Lady Blue's plan to usher in the apocalypse to become gods, Edris Dean murders the men she assigned to him to turn them into undead slaves, trying to kill Jalan to hijack the plan and [[AGodAmI become the new god of all creation]].
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* CompleteMonster: [[{{Necromancer}} Edris Dean]] is a servant of The Lady Blue and masterminds a series of cruel attacks to create the "Unborn", murdering pregnant women to damn the souls of their unborn children to hell, where they will become powerful undead beings to be unleashed on the world, the fate that befalls the wife and unborn baby of the Viking hero Snorri. It is also revealed that when the hero Jalan was young, Edris Dean nearly killed him and murdered his pregnant mother to turn his unborn sister into the strongest Unborn ever seen. Torturing and murdering a friend of Jalan's to obtain the Liar's Key that can help reshape the world, Edris later enslaves the soul of Jalan's sister to get her to kill her brother to help tear a hole through reality which could kill countless people in the cities. [[TheStarscream Ostensibly on board]] with the Lady Blue's plan to usher in the apocalypse to become gods, Edris Dean murders the men she assigned to him to turn them into undead slaves, trying to kill Jalan to hijack the plan and [[AGodAmI [[GodhoodSeeker become the new god of all creation]].
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** Snorri is shown to be an insightful person. Therefore, is he truly blind to Jalan's cowardly nature, since the latter often ends up becoming an AccidentalHero? Or did he eventually see through his companion? And if he did, why does he never address it? Is it because he wants to {{troll}} Jalan? Or did he see the good in him and is he a TricksterMentor who wants to help him become [[LoveableCoward a better person]]?
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** Snorri is shown to be an insightful person. Therefore, is he truly blind to Jalan's cowardly nature, since the latter often ends up becoming an AccidentalHero? Or did he eventually see through his companion? And if he did, why does he never address it? Is it because he wants to {{troll}} Jalan? Or did he see the good in him and is he a TricksterMentor who wants to help him become [[LoveableCoward [[LovableCoward a better person]]?
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Is Jalan actually as cowardly as he appears or does he have a (small) hero within him? There's actually some question to this, unlike similarly cowardly heroes like Ciaphas Cain.
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** Is Jalan actually as cowardly as he appears or does he have a (small) hero within him? There's actually some question to this, unlike similarly cowardly heroes like CiaphasCain.Cain.
** Snorri is shown to be an insightful person. Therefore, is he truly blind to Jalan's cowardly nature, since the latter often ends up becoming an AccidentalHero? Or did he eventually see through his companion? And if he did, why does he never address it? Is it because he wants to {{troll}} Jalan? Or did he see the good in him and is he a TricksterMentor who wants to help him become [[LoveableCoward a better person]]?
** Is Jalan actually as cowardly as he appears or does he have a (small) hero within him? There's actually some question to this, unlike similarly cowardly heroes like Ciaphas
** Snorri is shown to be an insightful person. Therefore, is he truly blind to Jalan's cowardly nature, since the latter often ends up becoming an AccidentalHero? Or did he eventually see through his companion? And if he did, why does he never address it? Is it because he wants to {{troll}} Jalan? Or did he see the good in him and is he a TricksterMentor who wants to help him become [[LoveableCoward a better person]]?
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** TheReveal at the end of the first book. [[spoiler:Snorri's family was DeadAllAlong and all he can do for them is MercyKill his unborn child who has been turned into an undead monstrosity]].
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** The moment when Jalan finally meets his [[spoiler:sister, after she's freed from the curse turning her into an Unborn, only to lose her almost immediately after as she passes on]]. All he can do is plead her to stay with him a little longer.
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** In the third book, Jalan [[spoiler:loses in the span of a few days his father, just when they were starting to mend the bond in their relationship, then his brother Darin, then his brother Martus.]] He's genuinely
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** In the third book, Jalan [[spoiler:loses in the span of a few days his father, just when they were starting to mend the bond in their relationship, then his brother Darin, then his brother Martus.]] He's genuinelygenuinely heartbroken by this.
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* CompleteMonster: [[{{Necromancer}} Edris Dean]] is a servant of The Lady Blue and masterminds a series of cruel attacks to create the "Unborn", murdering pregnant women to damn the souls of their unborn children to hell, where they will become powerful undead beings to be unleashed on the world, the fate that befalls the wife and unborn baby of the Viking hero Snorri. It is also revealed that when the hero Jalan was young, Edris Dean nearly killed him and murdered his pregnant mother to turn his unborn sister into the strongest Unborn ever seen. Torturing and murdering a friend of Jalan's to obtain the Liar's Key that can help reshape the world, Edris later enslaves the soul of Jalan's sister to get her to kill her brother to help tear a hole through reality which could kill countless people in the cities. [[TheStarscream Ostensibly on board]] with the Lady Blue's plan to usher in the apocalypse to become gods, Edris Dean murders the men she assigned to him to turn them into undead slaves, trying to kill Jalan to hijack the plan and [[AGodAmI become the new god of all creation]].
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* CompleteMonster: [[{{Necromancer}} Edris Dean]] is a servant of The Lady Blue and masterminds a series of cruel attacks to create the "Unborn", murdering pregnant women to damn the souls of their unborn children to hell, where they will become powerful undead beings to be unleashed on the world, the fate that befalls the wife and unborn baby of the Viking hero Snorri. It is also revealed that when the hero Jalan was young, Edris Dean nearly killed him and murdered his pregnant mother to turn his unborn sister into the strongest Unborn ever seen. Torturing and murdering a friend of Jalan's to obtain the Liar's Key that can help reshape the world, Edris later enslaves the soul of Jalan's sister to get her to kill her brother to help tear a hole through reality which could kill countless people in the cities. [[TheStarscream Ostensibly on board]] with the Lady Blue's plan to usher in the apocalypse to become gods, Edris Dean murders the men she assigned to him to turn them into undead slaves, trying to kill Jalan to hijack the plan and [[AGodAmI become the new god of all creation]].creation]].
* JerkassWoobie: Jalan is a SmugSnake and a DirtyCoward, but it's hard to not feel at least a little bad for him in the third book [[spoiler:when he loses in the span of a few days his father, then his two brothers]].
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** In the third book, Jalan [[spoiler:loses in the span of a few days his father, just when they were starting to mend the bond in their relationship, then his brother Darin, then his brother Martus.]] He's genuinely
** At the end of the third book, [[spoiler:Garyus sacrifices his life to help his sisters defeat the Lady Blue]]. His [[spoiler:funerals]] also count, but it's mixed with heartwarming moments as [[spoiler:Jalan, the Red Queen and the Silent Sister show how much they loved him during the scene]].
* JerkassWoobie: Jalan is a SmugSnake and a DirtyCoward, but it's hard to not feel at least a little bad for him in the third book [[spoiler:when he loses in the span of a few days his father, then his two brothers]].
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** In the third book, Jalan [[spoiler:loses in the span of a few days his father, just when they were starting to mend the bond in their relationship, then his brother Darin, then his brother Martus.]] He's genuinely
** At the end of the third book, [[spoiler:Garyus sacrifices his life to help his sisters defeat the Lady Blue]]. His [[spoiler:funerals]] also count, but it's mixed with heartwarming moments as [[spoiler:Jalan, the Red Queen and the Silent Sister show how much they loved him during the scene]].
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* CompleteMonster: [[{{Necromancer}} Edris Dean]] is a servant of The Lady Blue and masterminds a series of cruel attacks to create the "Unborn", murdering pregnant women to damn the souls of their unborn children to hell, where they will become powerful undead beings to be unleashed on the world, the fate that befalls the wife and unborn baby of the Viking hero Snorri. It is also revealed that when the hero Jalan was young, Edris Dean nearly killed him and murdered his pregnant mother to turn his unborn sister into the strongest Unborn ever seen. Torturing and murdering a friend of Jalan's to obtain the Liar's Key that can help reshape the world, Edris later enslaves the soul of Jalan's sister to get her to kill her brother to help tear a hole through reality which could kill countless people in the cities. [[TheStarscream Ostensibly on board]] with the Lady Blue's plan to usher in the apocalypse to become gods, Edris Dean murders the men she assigned to him to turn them into undead slaves, trying to kill Jalan to hijack the plan and [[AGodAmI become the new god of all creation]].
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