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Removed the "Sue" tropes, since these are now "Flame Bait" examples that should not be allowed; see "Flame Bait" page for more details.
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* MarySue: Some criticize the main characters for having no flaws.
%%* JerkSue: Jade starts off like one, but she does get CharacterDevelopment.
%%* PuritySue: Amber
%%* JerkSue: Jade starts off like one, but she does get CharacterDevelopment.
%%* PuritySue: Amber
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* TheWoobie: The Nameless One. In-story, this causes [[spoiler: Amber to fall in love with him]]
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* TheWoobie: The Nameless One. In-story, this causes [[spoiler: Amber to fall in love with him]]him]].
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*CriticalDissonance: Like ''[[Literature/InheritanceCycle Eragon]]'', ''The Prophecy of the Stones'' was a bestseller in many countries but had mixed reviews, with critics suspecting that the novel's success was due more to the author's age than its quality.
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Ensemble Darkhorse is for minor characters.
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* {{Anvilicious}}
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Jade is probably the [[strike: most interesting]] only interesting character among the girls.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Jade is probably the [[strike: most interesting]] only interesting character among the girls.
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** JerkSue: Jade starts off like one, but she actually does get CharacterDevelopment.
** PuritySue: Amber
* {{Narm}}: The whole book, but especially the scene where Opal dies, Adrien realizes he'd loved her all along instead of Jade, and she comes back to life soon after.
** PuritySue: Amber
* {{Narm}}: The whole book, but especially the scene where Opal dies, Adrien realizes he'd loved her all along instead of Jade, and she comes back to life soon after.
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* {{Narm}}: Pretty much the whole book, but most notably the scene where Opal dies, Adrien realizes he'd loved her all along instead of Jade, and she comes back to life soon after.
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* {{Narm}}: Pretty much the The whole book, but most notably especially the scene where Opal dies, Adrien realizes he'd loved her all along instead of Jade, and she comes back to life soon after.
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* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: [[spoiler: Did you really think Opal would stay dead when the Prophecy hadn't been fulfilled yet?]]
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* {{Narm}}: Pretty much the whole book, but most notably the scene where Opal dies, Adrien realizes he'd loved her all along instead of Jade, and she comes back to life soon after.
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* {{Narm}}: Pretty much the whole book, but most notably the scene where Opal dies, Adrien realizes he'd loved her all along instead of Jade, and she comes back to life soon after.after.
* TheWoobie: The Nameless One. In-story, this causes [[spoiler: Amber to fall in love with him]]
* TheWoobie: The Nameless One. In-story, this causes [[spoiler: Amber to fall in love with him]]
