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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Noah Shackleton]] is a charismatic CorruptCorporateExecutive who created the town of Phoenix so he could [[OmnicidalManiac wipe out the rest of the world]] with the SyntheticPlague "Tabitha", which [[CruelAndUnusualDeath boils the skin clean off of its victims]]. [[EstablishingCharacterMoment In his first appearance]], he uses it to kill [[spoiler:Reeve]] and threatens to [[WouldHurtAChild paralyze Luke, Jordan and Peter from the waist down if they interfere with him again, while also attaching cameras to them so he can track them 24/7]]. Shackleton had no reason for doing any of this; it was purely ForTheEvulz, and for that flimsy reason he would attempt to kill millions if not billions of innocents.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Noah Shackleton]] is a charismatic CorruptCorporateExecutive who created the town of Phoenix so he could [[OmnicidalManiac wipe out the rest of the world]] with the SyntheticPlague "Tabitha", which [[CruelAndUnusualDeath boils the skin clean off of its victims]]. [[EstablishingCharacterMoment In his first appearance]], he uses it to kill [[spoiler:Reeve]] and threatens to [[WouldHurtAChild paralyze Luke, Jordan and Peter from the waist down down]] if they interfere with him again, while also attaching cameras to them so he can track them 24/7]].24/7. Shackleton had no reason for doing any of this; it was purely ForTheEvulz, and for that flimsy reason he would attempt to kill millions if not billions of innocents.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Noah Shackleton]] is a charismatic CorruptCorporateExecutive who created the town of Phoenix so he could [[OmnicidalManiac wipe out the rest of the world]] with the SyntheticPlague "Tabitha", which [[CruelAndUnusualDeath boils the skin clean off of its victims]]. [[EstablishingCharacterMoment In his first appearance]], he uses it to kill [[spoiler:Reeve]] and threatens to [[WouldHurtAChild paralyze Luke, Jordan and Peter from the waist down if they interfere with him again, while also attaching cameras to them so he can track them 24/7]]. Shackleton had no reason for doing any of this; it was purely ForTheEvulz, and for that flimsy reason he would attempt to kill millions if not billions of innocents.
