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"Could be seen as this" = Weasel Words = Likely shoehorn. Plus, there's not much context.
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* FoeYayShipping: The way Audrey and Dee act towards each other could be seen as this.
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* RelationshipWritingFumble: There is a moment in the first book where [[spoiler:Julian disguises himself as Zach, Jenny's cousin]]. He persuades Jenny to kiss him and about a page and a half goes by before TheReveal is made.
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* RelationshipWritingFumble: PlatonicWritingRomanticReading: There is a moment in the first book where [[spoiler:Julian disguises himself as Zach, Jenny's cousin]]. He persuades Jenny to kiss him and about a page and a half goes by before TheReveal is made.
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* FoeYay: The way Audrey and Dee act towards each other could be seen as this.
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* FoeYay: FoeYayShipping: The way Audrey and Dee act towards each other could be seen as this.
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Removing entries that don't mention creator preferred ones, which is needed to count as a Fan Preferred Couple. Feel free to add back if there is ones.
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* FanPreferredCouple: Julian and Jenny
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-->'''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation. '''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
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-->'''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation. '''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
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* {{Narm}}: The way Jenny and Julian talk about the titular board game in the store: '''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation. '''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
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* {{Narm}}: The way Jenny and Julian talk about the titular board game in the store: '''Julian''': store:
-->'''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation. '''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
-->'''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation. '''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
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* {{Narm}}: The way Jenny and Julian talk about the titular board game in the store:
->'''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation.
->'''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
->'''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation.
->'''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
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* {{Narm}}: The way Jenny and Julian talk about the titular board game in the store:
->'''Julian''':store: '''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation.
->'''Jenny''':Temptation. '''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
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->'''Jenny''':
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* Narm: The way Jenny and Julian talk about the titular board game in the store:
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* Narm: {{Narm}}: The way Jenny and Julian talk about the titular board game in the store:
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* RelationshipWritingFumble: There is a moment in the first book where [[spoiler:Julian disguises himself as Zach, Jenny's cousin]]. He persuades Jenny to kiss him and about a page and a half goes by before TheReveal is made.
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* FoeYay: The way Audrey and Dee act towards each other could be seen as this.
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* Narm: The way Jenny and Julian talk about the titular board game in the store:
->'''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation.
->'''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
->'''Julian''': Mystery. Danger. Seduction. Fear. Secrets revealed. Desires unveiled. Temptation.
->'''Jenny''': [[FunnyMoments What are you talking about]]?
