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* FridgeBrilliance: Rather than demanding the fulfillment of some easily achievable task like stealing Morgoth's favorite jewels or restoring a kingdom which died three millennia ago, Turgon simply accepts that Tuor is marrying his daughter. It is stated that Turgon remembers Huor's words during the Unnunmbered Tears ("Though we part here for ever, and I shall not look on your white walls again, from you and from me a new star shall arise.")...but it is also true that Gondolin was a multicultural society wherein mixed marriaged were common (Voronwë himself is son of a Noldor and a Grey Elf) and all members of the royal family are of mixed ancestry. So it makes sense that Turgon didn't kick up a fuss about his daughter marrying a Man.
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* FridgeBrilliance: Rather than demanding the fulfillment of some easily achievable task like stealing Morgoth's favorite jewels or restoring a kingdom which died three millennia ago, Turgon simply accepts that Tuor Túor is marrying his daughter. It is stated that Turgon remembers Huor's Húor's words during the Unnunmbered Tears ("Though we part here for ever, and I shall not look on your white walls again, from you and from me a new star shall arise.")...but it is also true that Gondolin was a multicultural society wherein mixed marriaged marriages were common (Voronwë himself is the son of a Noldor Ñoldor and a Grey Elf) and all members of the royal family are of mixed ancestry. So it makes sense that Turgon didn't kick up a fuss about his daughter marrying a Man.
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* RealismInducedHorror: Despite featuring elves, orcs, dragons and a Dark Lord, the story is a disturbingly accurate depiction of the hell of war, written when WWI was still ongoing by someone who had just survived the Battle of Somme: a power-hungry tyrant sends his army to destroy the last city which defies his rule. His war machines -newly created and built expressly to ensure the success of the siege- burn the fields surrounding the city before smashing down its walls and gates. His troops invade the city, slaughter or capture its inhabitants, loot anything valuable and burn everything down, erasing its people's history and culture. As the city is being razed to the ground, some few hundreds manage to flee as being chased and harassed by the invading forces. After escaping from the valley, the survivors spend one year living like refugees, wandering around unknown lands, suffering from hunger and thirst and putting up with bad weather until they find one place where they can settle down.
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* RealismInducedHorror: Despite featuring elves, orcs, dragons Elves, Orcs, Dragons, and a Dark Lord, the story is a disturbingly accurate depiction of the hell of war, written when WWI was still ongoing by someone who had just survived the Battle of Somme: a power-hungry tyrant sends his army to destroy the last city which defies his rule. His war machines -newly created and built expressly to ensure the success of the siege- burn the fields surrounding the city before smashing down its walls and gates. His troops invade the city, slaughter or capture its inhabitants, loot anything valuable valuable, and burn everything down, erasing its people's history and culture. As the city is being razed to the ground, some few hundreds manage to flee as being chased and harassed by the invading forces. After escaping from the valley, the survivors spend one year living like refugees, wandering around unknown lands, suffering from hunger and thirst thirst, and putting up with bad weather until they find one place where they can settle down.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Maeglin crosses the line between "evil" and irredeemable" when he decides to force Idril to see how he murders his little nephew.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Maeglin crosses the line between "evil" and irredeemable" when he decides to force Idril to see how he murders his little nephew.See [[MoralEventHorizon/TolkiensLegendarium here]].
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* RealismInducedHorror: Despite featuring elves, orcs, dragons and a Dark Lord, the story is a disturbingly accurate depiction of the hell of war, written when WWI was still ongoing by someone who had just survived the Battle of Somme: a power-hungry tyrant sends his army to destroy the last city which defies his rule. His war machines -newly created and built expressly to ensure the success of the siege- burn the fields surrounding the city before smashing down its walls and gates. His troops invade the city, slaughter or capture its inhabitants, loot anything valuable and burn everything down, erasing its people's history and culture. As the city is being razed to the ground, some few hundreds manage to flee as being chased and harassed by the invading forces. After escaping from the valley, the survivors spend one year living like refugees, wandering around unknown lands, suffering from hunger and thirst and putting up with bad weather until they find one place where they can settle down.
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* FridgeBrilliance: Rather than demanding the fulfillment of some easily achievable task like stealing Morgoth's favorite jewels or restoring a kingdom which died three millennia ago, Turgon simply accepts that Tuor is marrying his daughter. It is stated that Turgon remembers Huor's words during the Unnunmbered Tears ("Though we part here for ever, and I shall not look on your white walls again, from you and from me a new star shall arise.")...but it is also true that Gondolin was a multicultural society wherein mixed marriaged were common (Voronwë himself is son of a Noldor and a Grey Elf) and all members of the royal family are of mixed ancestry. So it makes sense that Turgon didn't kick up a fuss about his daughter marrying a Man.
* HilariousInHindsight: In the 1916 draft, Maeglin belongs to the House of the Mole. Fifty-eight years later, the "mole=sleeper agent" meaning was introduced to the public by Creator/JohnLeCarre's novel ''[[Literature/TheQuestForKarla Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy]]'', published three years after Tolkien's death. Admittedly, spies are called "moles" in Sir Francis Bacon's ''Historie of the Reign of King Henry VII'' (1626), but it is not known whether Tolkien even read that book.
* MoralEventHorizon: Maeglin crosses the line between "evil" and irredeemable" when he decides to force Idril to see how he murders his little nephew.
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* HilariousInHindsight: In the 1916 draft, Maeglin belongs to the House of the Mole. Fifty-eight years later, the "mole=sleeper agent" meaning was introduced to the public by Creator/JohnLeCarre's novel ''[[Literature/TheQuestForKarla Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy]]'', published three years after Tolkien's death. Admittedly, spies are called "moles" in Sir Francis Bacon's ''Historie of the Reign of King Henry VII'' (1626), but it is not known whether Tolkien even read that book.
* MoralEventHorizon: Maeglin crosses the line between "evil" and irredeemable" when he decides to force Idril to see how he murders his little nephew.
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