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* IdiotBall: Jose Carlos, everyone warned you that Sheccid had a BigScrewedUpFamily involved in the business of sex and drugs and she might be in it as well. What were you expecting?
** [[spoiler: The sequel reveals it was an ideantical cousin, not her.]]
** [[spoiler: The sequel reveals it was an ideantical cousin, not her.]]
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* AuthorsSavingThrow:
** Los Ojos de Mi Princesa 3, which tell the story from Sheccid/Lorenna's point of view. It explains about events and characters that were left hanging in the air in the previous books and it gives the story a proper happy ending.
** Los Ojos de Mi Princesa 3, which tell the story from Sheccid/Lorenna's point of view. It explains about events and characters that were left hanging in the air in the previous books and it gives the story a proper happy ending.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Jose Carlos. Nice, fragile and idealistic (even if he's a bit of a {{Cloudcuckoolander}}) protagonist? Or is he simply a manipulative Canon Sue who isn't nearly as saintly as he is intended to be? The sequel doesn't help.
** Also Mario. Is he a complex and minor antagonist who has his own reasons? Or he exist just to act as an EvilCounterpart to Jose Carlos, who exists simply to KickTheDog every five minutes? At least the sequel gives him CharacterDevelopment and PetTheDog moments.
** Also Mario. Is he a complex and minor antagonist who has his own reasons? Or he exist just to act as an EvilCounterpart to Jose Carlos, who exists simply to KickTheDog every five minutes? At least the sequel gives him CharacterDevelopment and PetTheDog moments.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: AlternativeCharacterInterpretation:
** Jose Carlos. Nice, fragile and idealistic (even if he's a bit of a {{Cloudcuckoolander}}) protagonist? Or is he simply a manipulative Canon Sue who isn't nearly as saintly as he is intended to be? The sequel doesn't help.
**Also Mario. Is he a complex and minor antagonist who has his own reasons? Or he exist just to act as an EvilCounterpart to Jose Carlos, who exists simply to KickTheDog every five minutes? At least the sequel gives him CharacterDevelopment and PetTheDog moments.
** Jose Carlos. Nice, fragile and idealistic (even if he's a bit of a {{Cloudcuckoolander}}) protagonist? Or is he simply a manipulative Canon Sue who isn't nearly as saintly as he is intended to be? The sequel doesn't help.
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* BaseBreaker:
** Los Ojos de Mi Princesa 2, partially because of the AssPull seen below and .
** To some, the sequels themselves.
** Los Ojos de Mi Princesa 2, partially because of the AssPull seen below and .
** To some, the sequels themselves.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Jose Carlos. Nice, fragile and idealistic (even if he's a bit of a CloudCuckooLander) protagonist? Or is he simply a manipulative CanonSue who isn't nearly as saintly as he is intended to be? The sequel doesn't help.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Jose Carlos. Nice, fragile and idealistic (even if he's a bit of a CloudCuckooLander) {{Cloudcuckoolander}}) protagonist? Or is he simply a manipulative CanonSue Canon Sue who isn't nearly as saintly as he is intended to be? The sequel doesn't help.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow:
** Los Ojos de Mi Princesa 3, which tell the story from Sheccid/Lorenna's point of view. It explains about events and characters that were left hanging in the air in the previous books and it gives the story a proper happy ending.
* AssPull: [[spoiler: The promiscuous girl at the party isn't Sheccid, but her identical cousin.]]
* BaseBreaker:
** Los Ojos de Mi Princesa 2, partially because of the AssPull seen below and .
** To some, the sequels themselves.
** Los Ojos de Mi Princesa 3, which tell the story from Sheccid/Lorenna's point of view. It explains about events and characters that were left hanging in the air in the previous books and it gives the story a proper happy ending.
* AssPull: [[spoiler: The promiscuous girl at the party isn't Sheccid, but her identical cousin.]]
* BaseBreaker:
** Los Ojos de Mi Princesa 2, partially because of the AssPull seen below and .
** To some, the sequels themselves.
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* EvilCounterpart: Mario, to Jose Carlos.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Ariadne. Also, Mario after his CharacterDevelopment.
* EvilCounterpart: Mario, to Jose Carlos. And Justine to Sheccid/Lorenna.
* EvilCounterpart: Mario, to Jose Carlos. And Justine to Sheccid/Lorenna.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Jose Carlos. Nice, fragile and idealistic (even if he's a bit of a CloudCuckooLander) protagonist? Or is he simply a manipulative CanonSue who isn't nearly as saintly as he is intended to be? The sequel doesn't help.
** Also Mario. Is he a complex and minor antagonist who has his own reasons? Or he exist just to act as an EvilCounterpart to Jose Carlos, who exists simply to KickTheDog every five minutes? At least the sequel gives him CharacterDevelopment and PetTheDog moments.
* EvilCounterpart: Mario, to Jose Carlos.
* IdiotBall: Jose Carlos, everyone warned you that Sheccid had a BigScrewedUpFamily involved in the business of sex and drugs and she might be in it as well. What were you expecting?
** [[spoiler: The sequel reveals it was an ideantical cousin, not her.]]
* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The sequel. Partially because Jose Carlos [[TookALevelInJerkass takes a level in jerkass]] and ends up affecting the lives of his friends, albeit unintentionally. Not to mention he is the only one who gets a happy ending.
* TheWoobie: Waaaay too many, but Jose Carlos takes the cake.
** Also Mario. Is he a complex and minor antagonist who has his own reasons? Or he exist just to act as an EvilCounterpart to Jose Carlos, who exists simply to KickTheDog every five minutes? At least the sequel gives him CharacterDevelopment and PetTheDog moments.
* EvilCounterpart: Mario, to Jose Carlos.
* IdiotBall: Jose Carlos, everyone warned you that Sheccid had a BigScrewedUpFamily involved in the business of sex and drugs and she might be in it as well. What were you expecting?
** [[spoiler: The sequel reveals it was an ideantical cousin, not her.]]
* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The sequel. Partially because Jose Carlos [[TookALevelInJerkass takes a level in jerkass]] and ends up affecting the lives of his friends, albeit unintentionally. Not to mention he is the only one who gets a happy ending.
* TheWoobie: Waaaay too many, but Jose Carlos takes the cake.
