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* CompleteMonster: Gregory Grue. Let us count the ways. He's a ManipulativeBastard. He gives [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech rather brutal]] [[HannibalLecture verbal beatdowns]] to the protagonist. He threatens to kill Jen. He's a [[spoiler: vampire con man]] who was [[spoiler:hired by Mutual's parents to convert Mutual into a vampire.]] Not only that, but he also [[spoiler:converts Cathy, tries to manipulate Jen into converting, and kills Fred.]] And unlike [[spoiler:converting Mutual]], those last three were NOT a case of JustFollowingOrders. Oh, and also, [[spoiler:he infiltrates Jen's mind and makes her have sex dreams about Fred to further manipulate her.]] As Jen puts it, "he totally crossed a line."
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* CompleteMonster: Gregory. Fucking. Grue. Let us count the ways. He's a ManipulativeBastard. He gives [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech rather brutal]] [[HannibalLecture verbal beatdowns]] to the protagonist. He threatens to kill Jen. He's a [[spoiler: vampire con man]] who was [[spoiler:hired by Mutual's parents to convert Mutual into a vampire.]] Not only that, but he also [[spoiler:converts Cathy, tries to manipulate Jen into converting, and kills Fred.]] And unlike [[spoiler:converting Mutual]], those last three were NOT a case of JustFollowingOrders. Oh, and also, [[spoiler:he infiltrates Jen's mind and makes her have sex dreams about Fred to further manipulate her.]] As Jen puts it, "he totally crossed a line."
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* CompleteMonster: Gregory. Fucking. Gregory Grue. Let us count the ways. He's a ManipulativeBastard. He gives [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech rather brutal]] [[HannibalLecture verbal beatdowns]] to the protagonist. He threatens to kill Jen. He's a [[spoiler: vampire con man]] who was [[spoiler:hired by Mutual's parents to convert Mutual into a vampire.]] Not only that, but he also [[spoiler:converts Cathy, tries to manipulate Jen into converting, and kills Fred.]] And unlike [[spoiler:converting Mutual]], those last three were NOT a case of JustFollowingOrders. Oh, and also, [[spoiler:he infiltrates Jen's mind and makes her have sex dreams about Fred to further manipulate her.]] As Jen puts it, "he totally crossed a line."
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* CompleteMonster: Gregory. Fucking. Grue. Let us count the ways. He's a ManipulativeBastard. He gives [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech rather brutal]] [[HannibalLecture verbal beatdowns]] to the protagonist. He threatens to kill Jen. He's a [[spoiler: vampire con man]] who was [[spoiler:hired by Mutual's parents to convert Mutual into a vampire.]] Not only that, but he also [[spoiler:converts Cathy, tries to manipulate Jen into converting, and kills Fred.]] And unlike [[spoiler:converting Mutual]], those last three were NOT a case of JustFollowingOrders. Oh, and also, [[spoiler:he infiltrates Jen's mind and makes her have sex dreams about Fred to further manipulate her.]] As Jen puts it, "he totally crossed a line."
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* CompleteMonster: Gregory. Fucking. Grue. Let us count the ways. He's a ManipulativeBastard. He gives [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech rather brutal]] [[HannibalLecture verbal beatdowns]] to the protagonist. He threatens to kill Jen. He's a [[spoiler: vampire con man]] who was [[spoiler:hired by Mutual's parents to convert Mutual into a vampire.]] Not only that, but he also [[spoiler:converts Cathy, tries to manipulate Jen into converting, and kills Fred.]] And unlike [[spoiler:converting Mutual]], those last three were NOT a case of JustFollowingOrders. Oh, and also, [[spoiler:he infiltrates Jen's mind and makes her have sex dreams about Fred to further manipulate her.]] As Jen puts it, "he totally crossed a line.""
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Gregory crosses it when he kills Fred.]]
** [[spoiler:Mutual's parents cross it when they decide to convince their son to convert through MindRape.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Gregory crosses it when he kills Fred.]]
** [[spoiler:Mutual's parents cross it when they decide to convince their son to convert through MindRape.]]
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* CompleteMonster: Gregory. Fucking. Grue. Most villains in this story have their reasons, even good ones. Grue, however, does not.
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* CompleteMonster: Gregory. Fucking. Grue. Most villains in this story Let us count the ways. He's a ManipulativeBastard. He gives [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech rather brutal]] [[HannibalLecture verbal beatdowns]] to the protagonist. He threatens to kill Jen. He's a [[spoiler: vampire con man]] who was [[spoiler:hired by Mutual's parents to convert Mutual into a vampire.]] Not only that, but he also [[spoiler:converts Cathy, tries to manipulate Jen into converting, and kills Fred.]] And unlike [[spoiler:converting Mutual]], those last three were NOT a case of JustFollowingOrders. Oh, and also, [[spoiler:he infiltrates Jen's mind and makes her have their reasons, even good ones. Grue, however, does not.sex dreams about Fred to further manipulate her.]] As Jen puts it, "he totally crossed a line."
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* CompleteMonster: Gregory. Fucking. Grue. Most villains in this story have their reasons, even good ones. Grue, however, does not.
