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** The forward and epilogue from Bones and Spock, loving their friend after his (assumed) death on the ''Enterprise''-B's shakedown and calling him a true FatherToHisMen.
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** The forward foreword and epilogue from Bones and Spock, loving their friend after his (assumed) death on the ''Enterprise''-B's shakedown and calling him a true FatherToHisMen.
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** On the ''Republic'', where Ensign Kirk has to report Finney, and everyone else ends up hating him, Scotty looks after him. Garrovick then takes Kirk with him to the ''Farragut'' and later promotes him, but that doesn’t end as well.
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** On the ''Republic'', where Ensign Kirk has to report Finney, Finney for a potentially catastrophic act of negligence, and everyone else ends up hating him, Scotty looks after him. Garrovick then takes Kirk with him to the ''Farragut'' and later promotes him, but that doesn’t end as well.
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** On the ship where Ensign Kirk has to report Finney, and everyone else ends up hating him, Scotty looks after him. Garrovick also takes him to another assignment and later promotes him, but that doesn’t end as well.
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** On the ship ''Republic'', where Ensign Kirk has to report Finney, and everyone else ends up hating him, Scotty looks after him. Garrovick also then takes Kirk with him to another assignment the ''Farragut'' and later promotes him, but that doesn’t end as well.
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Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
** The forward and epilogue from Bones and Spock, loving their friend after his (thought of) death on the Enterprise tour and calling him a true FatherToHisMen.
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** The forward and epilogue from Bones and Spock, loving their friend after his (thought of) (assumed) death on the Enterprise tour ''Enterprise''-B's shakedown and calling him a true FatherToHisMen.
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** On the ship where Ensign Kirk has to report Finney, and everyone else ends up hating him, Scotty looks after him. Garrovick also takes him to another assignment, but that doesn’t end as well.
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** On the ship where Ensign Kirk has to report Finney, and everyone else ends up hating him, Scotty looks after him. Garrovick also takes him to another assignment, assignment and later promotes him, but that doesn’t end as well.
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* HeartwarmingInHindsight: Kirk learns the cannon “Arena” trick from an experiment his brother did when he was five, gets his love of Yosemite from his father taking him there on holiday, and learns rock climbing from his mom.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments:
** The forward and epilogue from Bones and Spock, loving their friend after his (thought of) death on the Enterprise tour and calling him a true FatherToHisMen.
** Jim is an AnnoyingYoungerSibling to his older brother, irritating him with his BigBrotherWorship, until he cries about his mom being gone, and they get closer from there.
** On the ship where Ensign Kirk has to report Finney, and everyone else ends up hating him, Scotty looks after him. Garrovick also takes him to another assignment, but that doesn’t end as well.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments:
** The forward and epilogue from Bones and Spock, loving their friend after his (thought of) death on the Enterprise tour and calling him a true FatherToHisMen.
** Jim is an AnnoyingYoungerSibling to his older brother, irritating him with his BigBrotherWorship, until he cries about his mom being gone, and they get closer from there.
** On the ship where Ensign Kirk has to report Finney, and everyone else ends up hating him, Scotty looks after him. Garrovick also takes him to another assignment, but that doesn’t end as well.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Antonia in the ''Film/StarTrekGenerations'' movie is Blurry Woman Syndrome, retconned in with an unexplained retirement from Mr “I would rather die than retire” Kirk, after they weren’t allowed to use Carol Marcus. Antonia in the book is affectionately snarky, sees through the swaggering persona and knows full well he’s only with her because he’s trying to ignore his problems.
