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* BadassDecay: Vriska. Karma list. Nothing more needs to be said.
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* BadassDecay: Vriska. Karma list. Nothing more needs to be said.Vriska spends most of the story focusing on making a "karma list" (but generally half-assing it) instead of doing almost anything else, giving herself a much less active role.
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** In SJAHJ, Jake ends up fighting [[spoiler:Roxy, who ends up holding nearly every juju in the story]]. Towards the final battle of ''Homestuck'', Jake ends up fighting the Felt, who hold nearly every juju in the story.
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Up until right now I\'ve been pretending that I know nothing of that game. Welp, here I go.
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** [[DiscOneFinalBoss The Evil]] is [[VideoGame/{{Undertale}} a skeleton who speaks in comic sans,]] albeit one that is also an evil villain that seems to be made of darkness. On the flip side, he's a parody of ''Mario'' [=RPGs=] where Bowser is usually hijacked by some new villain. [[spoiler:Starting from ''Paper Mario: Sticker Star'', this wasn't the case, and he hijacked villain title in ''Mario & Luigi: Dream Team'', securing two spots as the final Big Bad in a row]].
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** [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=1630 This page]] predicts the Rosesprite incident, where a free (...enough) kernel gets prototyped with someone who is already alive despite another character having plans for them. Except whereas Jaspersprite was just trying to revive the dead Rose he saw, [[spoiler:Roxy]] intentionally wasted prototypes to fuck with the Blue and Yellow Team.
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* ShallowParody: By means of not doing the research. Pikmin Fan thought that "Leijon was pronounced the same way as "legion" before reading that it's origins sound more like "lay-on". Half of the jokes about them don't make sense unless you think that or know of the misunderstanding too.
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* ShallowParody: By means of not doing the research. Pikmin Fan thought that "Leijon "Leijon" was pronounced the same way as "legion" before reading that it's origins sound more like "lay-on". Half of the jokes about them don't make sense unless you think that or know of the misunderstanding too.
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** Dave is established very early on to have the power to see into any conversation and simply butt in, provided that he has a dreamself out. He doesn't even need to make his presence apparant, but in all of the conversations he's been stated to spy on he does so anyway. Oh, and while this isn't explored as much, he can look into the Mario session through hacking a camera system. He can also enter dreams with ease and his dreamselves can teleport anywhere at any time, and at one point he sort-of ''watches John, Jade, Jane, Jake, and Nepeta sleeping''.
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** Dave is established very early on to have the power to see into any conversation and simply butt in, provided that he has a dreamself out. He doesn't even need to make his presence apparant, but in all of the conversations he's been stated to spy on he does so anyway. Oh, and while this isn't explored as much, he can look into the Mario session through hacking a camera system. He can also enter dreams with ease and his dreamselves can teleport anywhere at any time, and at one point he sort-of ''watches John, Jade, Jane, Jake, and Nepeta sleeping''.sleeping''.
* ShallowParody: By means of not doing the research. Pikmin Fan thought that "Leijon was pronounced the same way as "legion" before reading that it's origins sound more like "lay-on". Half of the jokes about them don't make sense unless you think that or know of the misunderstanding too.
* ShallowParody: By means of not doing the research. Pikmin Fan thought that "Leijon was pronounced the same way as "legion" before reading that it's origins sound more like "lay-on". Half of the jokes about them don't make sense unless you think that or know of the misunderstanding too.
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** The thousanth, fifteen hundreth and tenth (that was supposed to be for page 1500), and two-thousanth pages are very odd filler comics. The first is a short story about John and Jade being attacked by clones of themselves arising from the lack of original ideas at a movie store then defeating them by suing the directors for copyright infrindgement, and the second and third are talk shows. Said second special is an interview with the patron trolls (each of the main four asks them one question, to which they all answer), and said third is one with the Revenge Five (Jade takes this one solo and interviews them one-by-one). Oh yes, and the first talk show/second special has some "facts" that include Jane saying that a human male's ejaculation is faster than any land animal. [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=1510 Yes, really.]] [[spoiler:Believe it or not, the first one might also be an InnocuouslyImportantEpisode, retroactively foreshadowing the massive number of alter egoes. Particularly the technicolor ones]].
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** The thousanth, fifteen hundreth and tenth (that was supposed to be for page 1500), and two-thousanth pages are very odd filler comics. The first is a short story about John and Jade being attacked by clones of themselves arising from the lack of original ideas at a movie store then defeating them by suing the directors people behind the company for copyright infrindgement, leaving them there which MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext since they're supposed to be trapped and suddenly their clones switched sides, and the second and third are talk shows. Said second special is an interview with the patron trolls (each of the main four asks them one question, to which they all answer), and said third is one with the Revenge Five (Jade takes this one solo and interviews them one-by-one). Oh yes, and the first talk show/second special has some "facts" that include Jane saying that a human male's ejaculation is faster than any land animal. [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=1510 Yes, really.]] [[spoiler:Believe it or not, the first one might also be an InnocuouslyImportantEpisode, retroactively foreshadowing the massive number of alter egoes. Particularly the technicolor ones]].
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** The thousanth, fifteen hundreth and tenth (that was supposed to be for page 1500), and two-thousanth pages are very odd filler comics. The first is a short story about John and Jade being attacked by clones of themselves arising from the lack of original ideas at a movie store then defeating them by suing the directors for copyright infrindgement, and the second and third are talk shows Said second special is an interview with the patron trolls (each of the main four asks them one question, to which they all answer), and said third is one with the Revenge Five (Jade takes this one solo and interviews them one-by-one). Oh yes, and the first talk show/second special has some "facts" that include Jane saying that a human male's ejaculation is faster than any land animal. [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=1510 Yes, really.]]
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** The thousanth, fifteen hundreth and tenth (that was supposed to be for page 1500), and two-thousanth pages are very odd filler comics. The first is a short story about John and Jade being attacked by clones of themselves arising from the lack of original ideas at a movie store then defeating them by suing the directors for copyright infrindgement, and the second and third are talk shows shows. Said second special is an interview with the patron trolls (each of the main four asks them one question, to which they all answer), and said third is one with the Revenge Five (Jade takes this one solo and interviews them one-by-one). Oh yes, and the first talk show/second special has some "facts" that include Jane saying that a human male's ejaculation is faster than any land animal. [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=1510 Yes, really.]]]] [[spoiler:Believe it or not, the first one might also be an InnocuouslyImportantEpisode, retroactively foreshadowing the massive number of alter egoes. Particularly the technicolor ones]].
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You know I wonder if in the future I\'ll read this Bizarro Entry and wonder if someone else wrote it, because I\'m kind of going outside of my \"usual writing style\" for this.
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** The Shipping Intermission. It's a completely out-of-nowhere story arc featuring the cast in a new plotline, nothing in the Mario session being hinted at, and overall it doesn't seem to have anything to do with the main story. It doesn't help that the following Intermission Intermission ''does'' and is a direct look on the counterpart's journey to try to safely deliver the Nepeta clones to Alternia to fulfill a StableTimeLoop. Oh, and halfway through this intermission, [[spoiler:the cast starts dying by the buttloads. The ones who survived are nuked. After that, it turns out that the whole thing is a fan fiction... written by Spongebob Squarepants in sunglasses, which only raises more questions]]. It's something of an InnocuouslyImportantEpisode as much later it's revealed that [[spoiler:it also accurately tells of an alternate universe that led to the creation of the Hat Goddess]], but that still doesn't make it not feel like it came out of nowhere.
** The thousanth, fifteen hundreth and tenth (that was supposed to be for page 1500), and two-thousanth pages are very odd filler comics. The first is a short story about John and Jade being attacked by clones of themselves arising from the lack of original ideas at a movie store then defeating them by suing the directors for copyright infrindgement, and the second and third are talk shows Said second special is an interview with the patron trolls (each of the main four asks them one question, to which they all answer), and said third is one with the Revenge Five (Jade takes this one solo and interviews them one-by-one). Oh yes, and the first talk show/second special has some "facts" that include Jane saying that a human male's ejaculation is faster than any land animal. [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=1510 Yes, really.]]
** The Shipping Intermission. It's a completely out-of-nowhere story arc featuring the cast in a new plotline, nothing in the Mario session being hinted at, and overall it doesn't seem to have anything to do with the main story. It doesn't help that the following Intermission Intermission ''does'' and is a direct look on the counterpart's journey to try to safely deliver the Nepeta clones to Alternia to fulfill a StableTimeLoop. Oh, and halfway through this intermission, [[spoiler:the cast starts dying by the buttloads. The ones who survived are nuked. After that, it turns out that the whole thing is a fan fiction... written by Spongebob Squarepants in sunglasses, which only raises more questions]]. It's something of an InnocuouslyImportantEpisode as much later it's revealed that [[spoiler:it also accurately tells of an alternate universe that led to the creation of the Hat Goddess]], but that still doesn't make it not feel like it came out of nowhere.
** The thousanth, fifteen hundreth and tenth (that was supposed to be for page 1500), and two-thousanth pages are very odd filler comics. The first is a short story about John and Jade being attacked by clones of themselves arising from the lack of original ideas at a movie store then defeating them by suing the directors for copyright infrindgement, and the second and third are talk shows Said second special is an interview with the patron trolls (each of the main four asks them one question, to which they all answer), and said third is one with the Revenge Five (Jade takes this one solo and interviews them one-by-one). Oh yes, and the first talk show/second special has some "facts" that include Jane saying that a human male's ejaculation is faster than any land animal. [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=1510 Yes, really.]]
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Also moving this from the YMMV sandbox.
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* AngstWhatAngst: [[spoiler:The main characters' hometown has been blown up, one of their exposition guides (Rip) turned out to be the BigBad, another one (GHES) was destroyed by the former guide, and a number of their friends are dead. Two months later, John is the only one with some actual issues from it (refusing to delete Dave and Rose's handles from Pesterchum), and Jade simply ''forgets'' everything that happened]].
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IMO SJAHJ Aranea is still a bigger jerk than HS Aranea. Just look at the way she talked down to Aradia right before Slender-moding!
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* HarsherInHindsight: Aranea's [[spoiler:sudden flip into a villain ''sure'' was ironic, huh? I mean, helping Vriska's mind control plan aside, it sure doesn't seem likely that she will ''actually'' become such a terrible, ruthless villain like her post-scratch self (HS)/patron ancestor (SJAHJ), right? [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=008440 ...Right?]]]]
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* IronWoobie: Vriska. She takes everything that happens to her ''pretty well'', aside from the initial loss of her legs, which sparked an outburst to Jade.
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* ArcFatigue: The Mario Intermission. Intermission Act Two alone has lasted over ''three hundred and fifty pages'', and it's aknowledged by the creator as more of the ''exposition'' for the real story. And there's an intermission within the intermission ''and'' two more acts after that. What makes matters worse is that there was only ''one page'' before it began; so the story basically starts out on it and we're introduced to the Mario aspects of the world first whereas things such as the kids' neighborhood only get passing reffrences. What makes matters even worse was that this intermission was originally intended to be extremely short and simple back when the comic was in its early stages. And, as it stands, most of it up to late into [=IA2=] was actually ''rushed''. Lampshaded [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=588&id=860 here]]:
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* ArcFatigue: ArcFatigue:
** The Mario Intermission. Intermission Act Two alone has lasted over ''three hundred and fifty pages'', and it's aknowledged by the creator as more of the ''exposition'' for the real story. And there's an intermission within the intermission ''and'' two more acts after that. What makes matters worse is that there was only ''one page'' before it began; so the story basically starts out on it and we're introduced to the Mario aspects of the world first whereas things such as the kids' neighborhood only get passing reffrences. What makes matters even worse was that this intermission was originally intended to be extremely short and simple back when the comic was in its early stages. And, as it stands, most of it up to late into [=IA2=] was actually ''rushed''. Lampshaded [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=588&id=860 here]]:
** The Mario Intermission. Intermission Act Two alone has lasted over ''three hundred and fifty pages'', and it's aknowledged by the creator as more of the ''exposition'' for the real story. And there's an intermission within the intermission ''and'' two more acts after that. What makes matters worse is that there was only ''one page'' before it began; so the story basically starts out on it and we're introduced to the Mario aspects of the world first whereas things such as the kids' neighborhood only get passing reffrences. What makes matters even worse was that this intermission was originally intended to be extremely short and simple back when the comic was in its early stages. And, as it stands, most of it up to late into [=IA2=] was actually ''rushed''. Lampshaded [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=588&id=860 here]]:
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** Act Two Act Two completely blows all of the above away. ''Seven hundred and nine pages'', twice the length of Intermission Act Two and (even if you do split it up by the rather short Act Two Act Two intermissions) the absolute longest individual subact/intermission in the comic. This wouldn't be so notable if it wasn't for how, contrast to the comic's general overly fast and confusing pace, the pacing during this subact is ''very slow'' for the most part.
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* ParanoiaFuel: How does Roxy sign off her message to Jane in Act 2 Act 2 [[spoiler:after she's snapped? By saying she's right behind her. The next page consists entirley of Jane turning. The page after that reveals that she's not there, but then the page after ''that'' shows that she really ''was'' there, but above them]].
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** How does Roxy sign off her message to Jane in Act 2 Act 2 [[spoiler:after she's snapped? By saying she's right behind her. The next page consists entirley of Jane turning. The page after that reveals that she's not there, but then the page after ''that'' shows that she really ''was'' there, but abovethem]].them]].
** Dave is established very early on to have the power to see into any conversation and simply butt in, provided that he has a dreamself out. He doesn't even need to make his presence apparant, but in all of the conversations he's been stated to spy on he does so anyway. Oh, and while this isn't explored as much, he can look into the Mario session through hacking a camera system. He can also enter dreams with ease and his dreamselves can teleport anywhere at any time, and at one point he sort-of ''watches John, Jade, Jane, Jake, and Nepeta sleeping''.
** How does Roxy sign off her message to Jane in Act 2 Act 2 [[spoiler:after she's snapped? By saying she's right behind her. The next page consists entirley of Jane turning. The page after that reveals that she's not there, but then the page after ''that'' shows that she really ''was'' there, but above
** Dave is established very early on to have the power to see into any conversation and simply butt in, provided that he has a dreamself out. He doesn't even need to make his presence apparant, but in all of the conversations he's been stated to spy on he does so anyway. Oh, and while this isn't explored as much, he can look into the Mario session through hacking a camera system. He can also enter dreams with ease and his dreamselves can teleport anywhere at any time, and at one point he sort-of ''watches John, Jade, Jane, Jake, and Nepeta sleeping''.
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...Sure as hell isn\'t hilarious for me D:<
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** From the [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=1057 Trip Intermission,]] posted on September:
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Jude: they delayed ''[[VideoGame/{{Pikmin}} pikmin 3]]'''s releese date again?
:::Several months after this update, it turns out that ''Pikmin 3'' was in fact delayed from the second quarter to August.
-->Jean: I HAVE SUM TERRIBLE NEWS!\\
Jude: they delayed ''[[VideoGame/{{Pikmin}} pikmin 3]]'''s releese date again?
:::Several months after this update, it turns out that ''Pikmin 3'' was in fact delayed from the second quarter to August.
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A little clarification. And again, not adding Tricksters here because that canonizing simply made SJAHJ\'s tricksters seem a lot less shocking. And also I personally think canon ruined the idea by tossing these stupid Cherub themes onto them and redesigning the general template from \"YOU THERE. BOY.\" Guh!
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** The Mario world themes are lifted directly from the two ''New Super Mario Bros.'' games released at the time, with the jokes about the lifting being more than there (especially of how there's the notion that World 5 has a "new" theme). Both of the games released after the Mario worlds reveal ''also'' reuse these level themes.
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** The Mario world themes are lifted directly from the two ''New Super Mario Bros.'' games released at the time, with the jokes about the lifting being more than there (especially of how there's the notion that World 5 has a "new" theme). theme, [[spoiler:yet later on it turns out to use be another mountain world]]). Both of the games released after the SJAHJ Mario worlds reveal ''also'' reuse these level themes.themes, retroactivley making the Mario Session a parody of the ''New'' series's reusal of biomes.
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Part of the reason why this took so long was because I kept putting off drawing the sprites of Jude, Joan, and Jaka until I absolutley needed to.
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** John, Jade, Jane, and Jake trying to break out of their inward journey rooms in the first part of Intermission Act Three. It took around 200 pages, though quite a few times the perspective did switch to the other characters.
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No I\'m not one of those guys who thinks that original themes is directly proportional to quality or something. I think excecution means much more than concept.
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** The Mario world themes are lifted directly from the two ''New Super Mario Bros.'' games released at the time, with the jokes about the lifting being more than there (especially of how there's the notion that World 5 has a "new" theme). Both of the games released after the Mario worlds reveal ''also'' reuse these level themes.
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** To an extent, the beginning of the Shipping Intermission after [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=007269 this]] set of updates. What is the event/person/people/ship that mainly sets off this whole chain of literal ShipToShipCombat, sending people into doubt and dissaray? [[spoiler:Tavris]]. In fact, Auto Responder [[spoiler:''specifically'' seems to distrust Tavris because of their fused form, and willingness to fuse]].
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** To an extent, the beginning of the Shipping Intermission after [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=007269 this]] set of updates. What is the event/person/people/ship that mainly sets off this whole chain of literal ShipToShipCombat, sending people into doubt and dissaray? [[spoiler:Tavris]]. In fact, Auto Responder [[spoiler:''specifically'' seems to distrust Tavris because of their fused form, and willingness to fuse]].fuse]].
* ParanoiaFuel: How does Roxy sign off her message to Jane in Act 2 Act 2 [[spoiler:after she's snapped? By saying she's right behind her. The next page consists entirley of Jane turning. The page after that reveals that she's not there, but then the page after ''that'' shows that she really ''was'' there, but above them]].
* ParanoiaFuel: How does Roxy sign off her message to Jane in Act 2 Act 2 [[spoiler:after she's snapped? By saying she's right behind her. The next page consists entirley of Jane turning. The page after that reveals that she's not there, but then the page after ''that'' shows that she really ''was'' there, but above them]].
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Ok the Tavris thing was actually a suggestion, not one of my own ideas. But still.
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** To an extent, the beginning of the Shipping Intermission after [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=007269 this]] set of updates. What is the event/person/people/ship that mainly sets off this whole chain of literal ShipToShipCombat, sending people into doubt and dissaray? [[spoiler:Tavris]]. In fact, Auto Responder [[spoiler:''specifically'' seems to distrust Tavris because of their fused form, and willingness to fuse]].
** To an extent, the beginning of the Shipping Intermission after [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=007269 this]] set of updates. What is the event/person/people/ship that mainly sets off this whole chain of literal ShipToShipCombat, sending people into doubt and dissaray? [[spoiler:Tavris]]. In fact, Auto Responder [[spoiler:''specifically'' seems to distrust Tavris because of their fused form, and willingness to fuse]].
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** John and Jean's reaction towards Dave's update after John's flipout in Homestuck Act 6 Intermission 3. Particularly his reaction to Dave' note...
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** John and Jean's reaction towards Dave's update after John's flipout in Homestuck Act 6 Intermission 3. Particularly his reaction to Dave' note...
** John and Jean's reaction towards Dave's update after John's flipout in Homestuck Act 6 Intermission 3. Particularly his reaction to Dave' note...
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* ArcFatigue: The Mario Intermission. Intermission Act Two alone has lasted over ''three hundred and fifty pages'', and it's aknowledged by the creator as more of the ''exposition'' for the real story. And there's an intermission within the intermission ''and'' two more acts after that. What makes matters worse is that there was only ''one page'' before it began; so the story basically starts out on it and we're introduced to the Mario aspects of the world first whereas things such as the kids' neighborhood only get passing reffrences. What makes matters even worse was that this intermission was originally intended to be extremely short and simple back when the comic was in its early stages. And, as it stands, most of it up to late into [=IA2=] was actually ''rushed''.
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* ArcFatigue: The Mario Intermission. Intermission Act Two alone has lasted over ''three hundred and fifty pages'', and it's aknowledged by the creator as more of the ''exposition'' for the real story. And there's an intermission within the intermission ''and'' two more acts after that. What makes matters worse is that there was only ''one page'' before it began; so the story basically starts out on it and we're introduced to the Mario aspects of the world first whereas things such as the kids' neighborhood only get passing reffrences. What makes matters even worse was that this intermission was originally intended to be extremely short and simple back when the comic was in its early stages. And, as it stands, most of it up to late into [=IA2=] was actually ''rushed''. Lampshaded [[http://mspfanventures.com/?adv=588&id=860 here]]:
-->[[color:magenta:The Princess (Thinking): Im never gonna get saved at this rate am i]]
-->[[color:magenta:The Princess (Thinking): Im never gonna get saved at this rate am i]]
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Whops. (Regarding saying that there are only 3 I Acts when IA4 has been mentioned for quite some time, but the redundancy was also bad.)
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* ArcFatigue: The Mario Intermission. Intermission Act Two alone has lasted over ''three hundred and fifty pages'', and it's aknowledged by the creator as more of the ''exposition'' for the real story. And there's an intermission within the intermission ''and'' one two more act acts after that. What makes matters worse is that there was only ''one page'' before it began; so the story basically starts out on it and we're introduced to the Mario aspects of the world first whereas things such as the kids' neighborhood only get passing reffrences. What makes matters even worse was that this intermission was originally intended to be extremely short and simple back when the comic was in its early stages. And, as it stands, most of it up to late into [=IA2=] was actually ''rushed''.
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* ArcFatigue: The Mario Intermission. Intermission Act Two alone has lasted over ''three hundred and fifty pages'', and it's aknowledged by the creator as more of the ''exposition'' for the real story. And there's an intermission within the intermission ''and'' one more act after that. What makes matters worse is that there was only ''one page'' before it began; so the story basically starts out on it and we're introduced to the Mario aspects of the world first whereas things such as the kids' neighborhood only get passing reffrences. What makes matters worse was that this intermission was originally intended to be extremely short and simple back when the comic was in its early stages. And, as it stands, most of it up to late into [=IA2=] was actually ''rushed''.
** The Shipping Intermission itself. Pikmin Fan only wanted it to last about fourty pages (not much longer than Intermission Act One), but it turned out being over seventy. He said he wanted to [[spoiler:have almost everybody (with obvious exceptions such as John, Jade, and Nepeta) die before the ocean gets nuked, but he eventually decided to cut it short and end the pre-nuke deaths at Eridan.]]
* BadassDecay: Vriska. Karma list. Nothing more needs to be said.
* HilariousInHindsight:
** Twice, John "combines" but avoids "fuse combining" because he doesn't want to think about what would happen if he fused with Yoshi or Jade and his FIRE counterpart. [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006734 Speaking of "fuse combining..."]]
** Worth mentioning: SJAHJ actually uses the "Over Nine Thousand" meme before ''Homestuck'' itself does.
** The Shipping Intermission itself. Pikmin Fan only wanted it to last about fourty pages (not much longer than Intermission Act One), but it turned out being over seventy. He said he wanted to [[spoiler:have almost everybody (with obvious exceptions such as John, Jade, and Nepeta) die before the ocean gets nuked, but he eventually decided to cut it short and end the pre-nuke deaths at Eridan.]]
* BadassDecay: Vriska. Karma list. Nothing more needs to be said.
* HilariousInHindsight:
** Twice, John "combines" but avoids "fuse combining" because he doesn't want to think about what would happen if he fused with Yoshi or Jade and his FIRE counterpart. [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006734 Speaking of "fuse combining..."]]
** Worth mentioning: SJAHJ actually uses the "Over Nine Thousand" meme before ''Homestuck'' itself does.
