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* MoeMoe: Several characters seem designed with this in mind.
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* MoeMoe: {{Moe}}: Several characters seem designed with this in mind.
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=AntiClimaxBoss: Jonus Hart in Still Waters 3, Book 1. After lurking around, being suspicious, kidnapping one of Negi's students, and being revealed as an important member of a very powerful group of vampires, he's taken down relatively swiftly by Negi and the trio of Mochizuki Kagami, Urashima Taro, and Nakamura Sachiko, the latter three of which are only half trained students of Negi's.
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=AntiClimaxBoss: Jonus Hart in Still Waters 3, Book 1. After lurking around, being suspicious, kidnapping one of Negi's students, and being revealed as an important member of a very powerful group of vampires, he's taken down relatively swiftly by Negi and the trio of Mochizuki Kagami, Urashima Taro, and Nakamura Sachiko, the latter three of which are only half trained students of Negi's.
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** Ave Grace: Still Waters 3. An adult example, mixed with NightmareFuelStationAttendant for her use of water magic.
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** Ave Ava Grace: Still Waters 3. An adult example, mixed with NightmareFuelStationAttendant for her use of water magic.
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* {{Squick}}: One reader thought the interaction between young Mochizuki Kagami and Akihiko, a member of the organized crime group her brother is in charge of, reeked of this. The author was flabbergasted that anyone would take the scene in that way.
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* {{Squick}}: One reader thought the interaction in Still Waters 2 between young Mochizuki Kagami and Akihiko, a member of the organized crime group her brother is in charge of, reeked of this. The author was flabbergasted that anyone would take the scene in that way.
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* {{Squick}}: One reader thought the interaction between young Mochizuki Kagami and Akihiko, a member of the organized crime group her brother is in charge of, reeked of this. The author was flabbergasted.
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* {{Squick}}: One reader thought the interaction between young Mochizuki Kagami and Akihiko, a member of the organized crime group her brother is in charge of, reeked of this. The author was flabbergasted.flabbergasted that anyone would take the scene in that way.
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* Squick: One reader thought the interaction between young Mochizuki Kagami and Akihiko, a member of the organized crime group her brother is in charge of, reeked of this. The author was flabbergasted.
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* Squick: {{Squick}}: One reader thought the interaction between young Mochizuki Kagami and Akihiko, a member of the organized crime group her brother is in charge of, reeked of this. The author was flabbergasted.
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** Madoka and Misa: This can be seen pretty much any time they're in the same place; shows up intentionally at the end of Ace of Spades and in the ''Downtime~Dekopin Rocket'' chapter of ''Still Waters Side Stories: Book 1''.
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** Madoka and Misa: This can be seen pretty much any time they're in the same place; shows up intentionally at the end of Ace ''Ace of Spades Spades'' and in the ''Downtime~Dekopin Rocket'' chapter of ''Still Waters Side Stories: Book 1''.
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* OneTrueThreesome: Starting at the end of Still Waters 1, Akira, Jennifer, and Max. By the time Still Waters 3 rolls around they're sharing an apartment together, complete with a drunken, sleeping Akira clinging to Jennifer's (empty) shirt.
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* OneTrueThreesome: Starting at the end of Still Waters 1, Akira, Jennifer, and Max. By the time Still Waters 3 rolls around they're sharing an apartment together, complete with a drunken, sleeping Akira clinging to Jennifer's (empty) shirt.shirt.
*TheScrappy: Most characters have enough of a personality to avoid this, but there are one or two who come across as particularly abrasive or annoying.
**Kobayashi Ayumi: ''Still Waters 3'', and especially in the ''Downtime~No Name Band'' chapter of ''Still Waters Side Stories: Book 1''. WordOfGod says she was designed specifically with this in mind.
*Squick: One reader thought the interaction between young Mochizuki Kagami and Akihiko, a member of the organized crime group her brother is in charge of, reeked of this. The author was flabbergasted.
*TheScrappy: Most characters have enough of a personality to avoid this, but there are one or two who come across as particularly abrasive or annoying.
**Kobayashi Ayumi: ''Still Waters 3'', and especially in the ''Downtime~No Name Band'' chapter of ''Still Waters Side Stories: Book 1''. WordOfGod says she was designed specifically with this in mind.
*Squick: One reader thought the interaction between young Mochizuki Kagami and Akihiko, a member of the organized crime group her brother is in charge of, reeked of this. The author was flabbergasted.
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*HoYay: Sometimes intentional, more often not.
**Max and Negi: One reader claimed to see this quite prevalently in the early chapters of Still Waters 1.
**Madoka and Misa: This can be seen pretty much any time they're in the same place; shows up intentionally at the end of Ace of Spades and in the ''Downtime~Dekopin Rocket'' chapter of ''Still Waters Side Stories: Book 1''.
**Max and Negi: One reader claimed to see this quite prevalently in the early chapters of Still Waters 1.
**Madoka and Misa: This can be seen pretty much any time they're in the same place; shows up intentionally at the end of Ace of Spades and in the ''Downtime~Dekopin Rocket'' chapter of ''Still Waters Side Stories: Book 1''.
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** F9A: A Robot's Life. Another RobotGirl, this time in constant fear for her life from the older robots around her who are slowly breaking down even though she loves them like family members and can't bear to leave them. Also, she's the [[spoiler: soul of a girl who was killed off screen in Still Waters 2]]. If that doesn't make you want to protect her...
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** F9A: [=F9A=]: A Robot's Life. Another RobotGirl, this time in constant fear for her life from the older robots around her who are slowly breaking down even though she loves them like family members and can't bear to leave them. Also, she's the [[spoiler: soul of a girl who was killed off screen in Still Waters 2]]. If that doesn't make you want to protect her...
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*MoeMoe: Several characters seem designed with this in mind.
**Ave Grace: Still Waters 3. An adult example, mixed with NightmareFuelStationAttendant for her use of water magic.
**Caro Shaw: Still Waters 3. Shy, awkward around people, and her first attempt to make a friend was directed toward '''Eva'''. WordOfGod says she was designed as a character with this in mind.
**F9A: A Robot's Life. Another RobotGirl, this time in constant fear for her life from the older robots around her who are slowly breaking down even though she loves them like family members and can't bear to leave them. Also, she's the [[spoiler: soul of a girl who was killed off screen in Still Waters 2]]. If that doesn't make you want to protect her...
**Kelory Omeris: Still Waters 3, current [[spoiler: Demon Queen]]. WordOfGod says she was designed with this in mind as well. She only has one scene at the time this was written; time will tell how well it turns out.
**Rally Wheeler: Shy, pink haired RobotGirl who asks permission to call Chachamaru big sister? Yeah.
**Ave Grace: Still Waters 3. An adult example, mixed with NightmareFuelStationAttendant for her use of water magic.
**Caro Shaw: Still Waters 3. Shy, awkward around people, and her first attempt to make a friend was directed toward '''Eva'''. WordOfGod says she was designed as a character with this in mind.
**F9A: A Robot's Life. Another RobotGirl, this time in constant fear for her life from the older robots around her who are slowly breaking down even though she loves them like family members and can't bear to leave them. Also, she's the [[spoiler: soul of a girl who was killed off screen in Still Waters 2]]. If that doesn't make you want to protect her...
**Kelory Omeris: Still Waters 3, current [[spoiler: Demon Queen]]. WordOfGod says she was designed with this in mind as well. She only has one scene at the time this was written; time will tell how well it turns out.
**Rally Wheeler: Shy, pink haired RobotGirl who asks permission to call Chachamaru big sister? Yeah.
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* CrackPairing: [[spoiler:Misa and Madoka]]. WordOfGod says it was there before he even realized it had started.
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*OneTrueThreesome: Starting at the end of Still Waters 1, Akira, Jennifer, and Max. By the time Still Waters 3 rolls around they're sharing an apartment together, complete with a drunken, sleeping Akira clinging to Jennifer's (empty) shirt.
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* CrackPairing: [[spoiler:Misa and Madoka]]. WordOfGod says it was there before he even realized it had started.
