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* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. The protagonist is still shown to miss his family continually throughout, and right up until the end of story, despite moving on and having adapted well to Equestrian life.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Is Rarity acting in Fluttershy's best interests when she [[spoiler: suggests [[TriangRelations including Fluttershy]] in their relationship, or is she taking advantage of the vulnerable and naive pegasus to act on her long-time crush]]. [[TakeAThirdOption Or is she doing the right thing but for the wrong reasons]]? Or is it a case of BelievingTheirOwnLies?
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Is Rarity acting in Fluttershy's best interests when she [[spoiler: suggests [[TriangRelations [[{{Polyamory}} including Fluttershy]] in their relationship, or is she taking advantage of the vulnerable and naive pegasus to act on her long-time crush]]. [[TakeAThirdOption Or is she doing the right thing but for the wrong reasons]]? Or is it a case of BelievingTheirOwnLies?
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* RomanticPlotTumor: [[spoiler: The [[TriangRelations inclusion of Fluttershy]] into the relationship between the protagonist and Rarity was not received well by some readers, who criticised it as a needless distraction from their existing relationship, while spending most of the time not really going anywhere]]. Indeed, the author himself agrees with this assessment.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: [[spoiler: The [[TriangRelations [[{{Polyamory}} inclusion of Fluttershy]] into the relationship between the protagonist and Rarity was not received well by some readers, who criticised it as a needless distraction from their existing relationship, while spending most of the time not really going anywhere]]. Indeed, the author himself agrees with this assessment.
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** Rarity having her work copied by an old acquaintance in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E8RarityTakesManehattan Rarity Takes Manehattan]] is quite reminiscent of how Cashmere steals Rarity's special fabric design for use in a fashion show.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: [[spoiler: The [[TriangRelations inclusion of Fluttershy]] into the relationship between the protagonist and Rarity was not received well by some readers, who criticised it as a needless distraction from their existing relationship, while spending most of the time not really going anywhere]]. On the other hand, the story spends significant time deconstructing the idea, to the point where you could argue this is intentional.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: [[spoiler: The [[TriangRelations inclusion of Fluttershy]] into the relationship between the protagonist and Rarity was not received well by some readers, who criticised it as a needless distraction from their existing relationship, while spending most of the time not really going anywhere]]. On Indeed, the other hand, the story spends significant time deconstructing the idea, to the point where you could argue author himself agrees with this is intentional.assessment.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. The protagonist is still shown to miss his family throughout the story, despite moving on and having adapted well to Equestrian life.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. The protagonist is still shown to miss his family throughout continually throughout, and right up until the end of story, despite moving on and having adapted well to Equestrian life.
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** Cashmere's appearance is surprisingly similar to [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Sunset Shimmer]], as [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/198034/so-i-just-saw-equestria-girls-spoilers-obviously-plus-jessica-rarity this post]] by the author points out.
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* SturgeonsLaw: SecondPersonNarration? Check. Protagonist has a sexual relationship with a canon character? Check. Oh, [[WishFulfillment it's one of tho]]— wait, he actually ''has'' a backstory and characterization? They don't fall in love after a day, but actually become friends first? You actually see their relationship develop over the course of months? The characters actually act like real and well-adjusted people? Yeup, SturgeonsLaw is in full effect ladies and gentlemen. Enjoy it while it lasts.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Is Rarity acting in Fluttershy's best interests when she [[spoiler: suggests [[TriangRelations including Fluttershy]] in their relationship, or is she taking advantage of the vulnerable and naive pegasus to act on her long-time crush. [[TakeAThirdOption Or is she doing the right thing but for the wrong reasons]]]]? Or is it a case of BelievingTheirOwnLies?
* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. The protagonist is still shown to miss his family throughout the story, despite moving on and having adopted well to Equestrian life.
* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. The protagonist is still shown to miss his family throughout the story, despite moving on and having adopted well to Equestrian life.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Is Rarity acting in Fluttershy's best interests when she [[spoiler: suggests [[TriangRelations including Fluttershy]] in their relationship, or is she taking advantage of the vulnerable and naive pegasus to act on her long-time crush. crush]]. [[TakeAThirdOption Or is she doing the right thing but for the wrong reasons]]]]? reasons]]? Or is it a case of BelievingTheirOwnLies?
* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. The protagonist is still shown to miss his family throughout the story, despite moving on and havingadopted adapted well to Equestrian life.
* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. The protagonist is still shown to miss his family throughout the story, despite moving on and having
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* LoveToHate: It would be hard for anyone to deny that there's something satisfying about seeing [[spoiler: Slate]] take a well deserved punch to the face, when the full extent of his stalking is revealed.
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* SturgeonsLaw: SecondPersonNarration? Check. Protagonist has a sexual relationship with a canon character? Check. Oh, [[WishFulfillment it's one of tho]]— wait, he actually ''has'' a backstory and characterization? They don't fall in love after a day, but actually become friends first? You actually see their relationship develop over the course of months? The characters actually act like real and well-adjusted people? Yeup, SturgeonsLaw is in full effect ladies and gentlemen. Enjoy it while it lasts.
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** The protagonist, after having his [[YouCantGoHomeagain hopes of returning home dashed.dashed]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: The [[AuthorTract author's reasons]] for writing the story, given that the ''show's own writers'' struggled with writing Rarity's character in season 3, forcing [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E10SpikeAtYourService Spike at Your Service]] to be rewritten from a Rarity-centric episode to an Applejack one.
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** The [[AuthorTract author's reasons]] for writing the story, given that the ''show's own writers'' struggled with writing Rarity's character in season 3, forcing [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E10SpikeAtYourService Spike at Your Service]] to be rewritten from a Rarity-centric episode to an Applejackone.one.
** Horn rings, which are considered to be a somewhat tacky way of proposing to a unicorn. And then [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 A Canterlot]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 Wedding]] aired...
** The [[AuthorTract author's reasons]] for writing the story, given that the ''show's own writers'' struggled with writing Rarity's character in season 3, forcing [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E10SpikeAtYourService Spike at Your Service]] to be rewritten from a Rarity-centric episode to an Applejack
** Horn rings, which are considered to be a somewhat tacky way of proposing to a unicorn. And then [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 A Canterlot]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 Wedding]] aired...
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* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. The protagonist is still shown to miss his family throughout the story, despite moving on and having adopted well to Equestrian life.
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* HilariousInHindsight: The [[AuthorTract author's reasons]] for writing the story, given that the ''show's own writers'' struggled with writing Rarity's character in season 3, forcing [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E10SpikeAtYourService Spike at Your Service]] to be rewritten from a Rarity-centric episode to an Applejack one.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: [[spoiler: The [[TriangRelations inclusion of Fluttershy]] into the relationship between the protagonist and Rarity was not received well by some readers, who criticised it as a needless inclusion that distracts from their existing relationship, while spending most of the time not really going anywhere]]. On the other hand, the story spends significant time deconstructing the idea, to the point where you could argue this is intentional.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: [[spoiler: The [[TriangRelations inclusion of Fluttershy]] into the relationship between the protagonist and Rarity was not received well by some readers, who criticised it as a needless inclusion that distracts distraction from their existing relationship, while spending most of the time not really going anywhere]]. On the other hand, the story spends significant time deconstructing the idea, to the point where you could argue this is intentional.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: [[spoiler: The [[TriangRelations inclusion of Fluttershy]] into the relationship between the protagonist and Rarity was not received well by some readers, who criticised it as a needless inclusion that distracts from their existing relationship, while spending most of the time not really going anywhere]]. On the other hand, the story spends significant time deconstructing the idea, to the point where you could argue this is intentional.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Is Rarity acting in Fluttershy's best interests when she [[spoiler: suggests [[TriangRelations including Fluttershy]] in their relationship, or is she taking advantage of the vulnerable and naive pegasus to act on her long-time crush. [[TakeAThirdOption Or is she doing the right thing but for the wrong reasons]]]]?
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Is Rarity acting in Fluttershy's best interests when she [[spoiler: suggests [[TriangRelations including Fluttershy]] in their relationship, or is she taking advantage of the vulnerable and naive pegasus to act on her long-time crush. [[TakeAThirdOption Or is she doing the right thing but for the wrong reasons]]]]?reasons]]]]? Or is it a case of BelievingTheirOwnLies?
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Is Rarity acting in Fluttershy's best interests when she [[spoiler: suggests [[TriangRelations including Fluttershy]] in their relationship, or is she inadvertently taking advantage of the vulnerable and naive pegasus to act on her long-time crush]]?crush. [[TakeAThirdOption Or is she doing the right thing but for the wrong reasons]]]]?
* FridgeBrilliance: Why does Rarity not take advantage of her [[DudeWheresMyRespect status as a national hero]] and connections to the princesses, when Cashmere threatens her business? Because that would mean not succeeding on her own merits and hard work, something she strongly believes in!
* FridgeBrilliance: Why does Rarity not take advantage of her [[DudeWheresMyRespect status as a national hero]] and connections to the princesses, when Cashmere threatens her business? Because that would mean not succeeding on her own merits and hard work, something she strongly believes in!
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* JerkassWoobie: Cashmere, when she admits just how heartbroken Rarity left her after turning her down.
* TheWoobie:
** The protagonist, after having his hopes of returning home dashed.
** Rarity, when she gets [[StalkerWithACrush stalked]], which is portrayed as a deeply disturbing violation of her privacy and personal life, and as upsetting as you would expect.
* JerkassWoobie: Cashmere, when she admits just how heartbroken Rarity left her after turning her down.
* TheWoobie:
** The protagonist, after having his hopes of returning home dashed.
** Rarity, when she gets [[StalkerWithACrush stalked]], which is portrayed as a deeply disturbing violation of her privacy and personal life, and as upsetting as you would expect.
