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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: It's revealed in chapter 3 of the rewrite that Cavlin and [[BabysitterFromHell Rosalyn]] have actually developed a much friendlier relationship with one another, [[MythologyGag even continuing to play Calvinball together.]] They even stage it so it appears they still cant tolerate each other, just so Calvin's parents will pay her more, making getting into college much easier. Calvin even gets his own cut of the money.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: It's revealed in chapter 3 of the rewrite that Cavlin and [[BabysitterFromHell Rosalyn]] have actually developed a much friendlier relationship with one another, [[MythologyGag even continuing to play Calvinball together.]] They even stage it so it appears they still cant can't tolerate each other, just so Calvin's parents will pay her more, making getting into college much easier. Calvin even gets his own cut of the money.
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* {{Narm}}: The Torture Room may become this when you realize that ''WesternAnimation/TheBackyardigans'' has a large PeripheryDemographic that would actually enjoy having the first two seasons available to them.
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* {{Narm}}: The Torture Room may become this when you realize that ''WesternAnimation/TheBackyardigans'' has a large PeripheryDemographic that would actually enjoy having the first two seasons available to them. Averted ''quite firmly'' in the rewrite.
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** [[spoiler: Dr Brainstorm's father praising him for being brave enough to admit he's not evil, and also for encouraging the rest of the family to accept him, which Mother Brainstorm does by giving him a hug. Subverted by Sheila, who sees this as her big chance to take over the world.]]
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** [[spoiler: Dr Brainstorm's father praising him for being brave enough to admit he's not evil, and also for encouraging the rest of the family to accept him, which Mother Brainstorm does by giving him a hug. Subverted by Sheila, who sees this as her big chance to take over the world.]]
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* EvilIsSexy: Subverted. Calvin is the only one to find his EvilKnockoff attractive.
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* TearJerker: In the rewritten version, [[spoiler: Hobbes goes through an identity crisis as he deals with the idea that he might just be Calvin's imaginary friend. Sherman and the MTM try to assure him he's real, but his talk with Andy is even sadder when Andy brings up how unlikely it is that Sherman - a hamster - will live to see his adult years. Even Hobbes is heartbroken by the thought.]]
* WhatAnIdiot: In the rewritten version, Calvin's evil clone has confronted the heroes and bragged that he has the hypercube, which stores most of Calvin's inventions. Andy uses the time-pauser and [[TimeStandsStill temporarily freezes time.]]
'''You'd Expect:''' Andy takes the cube away from Evil!Calvin and ties him up. Or even tell Calvin's parents not to let him outside while he and the others are off rescuing their real son.
'''Instead:''' He carries the others to a safe distance and they leave Evil Calvin alone with the Hypercube, which they ''know'' has the Transmogrifier Gun and assorted other fantastic weapons.
'''As A Result:''' Evil!Calvin uses the cube to unleash a legion of destructive monsters from beneath Calvin's bed, and begins his plan for world domination. Even Andy is bemused that this didn't occur to him.
'''Subverted:''' Turns out, [[spoiler: this was part of the Entity's plan to force either the heroes or the villains into Time Stop, ensuring they'd have no other choice.]]
* WhatAnIdiot: In the rewritten version, Calvin's evil clone has confronted the heroes and bragged that he has the hypercube, which stores most of Calvin's inventions. Andy uses the time-pauser and [[TimeStandsStill temporarily freezes time.]]
'''You'd Expect:''' Andy takes the cube away from Evil!Calvin and ties him up. Or even tell Calvin's parents not to let him outside while he and the others are off rescuing their real son.
'''Instead:''' He carries the others to a safe distance and they leave Evil Calvin alone with the Hypercube, which they ''know'' has the Transmogrifier Gun and assorted other fantastic weapons.
'''As A Result:''' Evil!Calvin uses the cube to unleash a legion of destructive monsters from beneath Calvin's bed, and begins his plan for world domination. Even Andy is bemused that this didn't occur to him.
'''Subverted:''' Turns out, [[spoiler: this was part of the Entity's plan to force either the heroes or the villains into Time Stop, ensuring they'd have no other choice.]]
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* TearJerker: In the rewritten version, [[spoiler: Hobbes goes through an identity crisis as he deals with the idea that he might just be Calvin's imaginary friend. Sherman and the MTM try to assure him he's real, but his talk with Andy is even sadder when Andy brings up how unlikely it is that Sherman - a hamster - will live to see his adult years. Even Hobbes is heartbroken by the thought.]]
* WhatAnIdiot: In the rewritten version, Calvin's evil clone has confronted the heroes and bragged that he has the hypercube, which stores most of Calvin's inventions. Andy uses the time-pauser and [[TimeStandsStill temporarily freezes time.]]
'''You'd Expect:''' Andy takes the cube away from Evil!Calvin and ties him up. Or even tell Calvin's parents not to let him outside while he and the others are off rescuing their real son.
'''Instead:''' He carries the others to a safe distance and they leave Evil Calvin alone with the Hypercube, which they ''know'' has the Transmogrifier Gun and assorted other fantastic weapons.
'''As A Result:''' Evil!Calvin uses the cube to unleash a legion of destructive monsters from beneath Calvin's bed, and begins his plan for world domination. Even Andy is bemused that this didn't occur to him.
'''Subverted:''' Turns out, [[spoiler: this was part of the Entity's plan to force either the heroes or the villains into Time Stop, ensuring they'd have no other choice.]]
* WhatAnIdiot: In the rewritten version, Calvin's evil clone has confronted the heroes and bragged that he has the hypercube, which stores most of Calvin's inventions. Andy uses the time-pauser and [[TimeStandsStill temporarily freezes time.]]
'''You'd Expect:''' Andy takes the cube away from Evil!Calvin and ties him up. Or even tell Calvin's parents not to let him outside while he and the others are off rescuing their real son.
'''Instead:''' He carries the others to a safe distance and they leave Evil Calvin alone with the Hypercube, which they ''know'' has the Transmogrifier Gun and assorted other fantastic weapons.
'''As A Result:''' Evil!Calvin uses the cube to unleash a legion of destructive monsters from beneath Calvin's bed, and begins his plan for world domination. Even Andy is bemused that this didn't occur to him.
'''Subverted:''' Turns out, [[spoiler: this was part of the Entity's plan to force either the heroes or the villains into Time Stop, ensuring they'd have no other choice.
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** [[spoiler: Dr Brainstorm's father praising him for being brave enough to admit he's not evil, and also for encouraging the rest of the family to accept him, which Mother Brainstorm does by giving him a hug. Subverted by Sheila, who sees this as her big chance to take over the world.]]
** [[spoiler: Moe, after being thoroughly humiliated by Evil Calvin, refuses to believe that it was anyone other than the real Calvin, and now that the monsters are gone, he thinks he's free to pummel him. Calvin's friends and family surround him, proving that this most definitely not the case.]]
** [[spoiler: Moe, after being thoroughly humiliated by Evil Calvin, refuses to believe that it was anyone other than the real Calvin, and now that the monsters are gone, he thinks he's free to pummel him. Calvin's friends and family surround him, proving that this most definitely not the case.]]
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** [[spoiler: Jack ''finally'' referring to Frank as Dr. Brainstorm, and the latter's surprised admittance that he prefers Jack calling him Frank.]]
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'''As A Result:''' Evil!Calvin uses the cube to unleash a legion of destructive monsters from beneath Calvin's bed, and begins his plan for world domination.
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'''As A Result:''' Evil!Calvin uses the cube to unleash a legion of destructive monsters from beneath Calvin's bed, and begins his plan for world domination. Even Andy is bemused that this didn't occur to him.
'''Subverted:''' Turns out, [[spoiler: this was part of the Entity's plan to force either the heroes or the villains into Time Stop, ensuring they'd have no other choice.]]
'''Subverted:''' Turns out, [[spoiler: this was part of the Entity's plan to force either the heroes or the villains into Time Stop, ensuring they'd have no other choice.]]
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** [[spoiler: Sherman's surprisingly sensitive advice to Hobbes during his identity crisis: "... instead of wondering what you are, focus more on ''who'' you are."]]
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* TearJerker: In the rewritten version, [[spoiler: Hobbes goes through an identity crisis as he deals with the idea that he might just be Calvin's imaginary friend. Sherman and the MTM try to assure him he's real, but his talk with Andy is even sadder when Andy brings up how unlikely it is that Sherman - a hamster - will live to see his adult years. Even Hobbes is heartbroken by the thought.]]
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* {{Narm}}: The Torture Room may become this when you realize that ''WesternAnimation/TheBackyardigans'' has a large PeripheryDemographic that would actually enjoy having the first two seasons available to them.
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* {{Narm}}: The Torture Room may become this when you realize that ''WesternAnimation/TheBackyardigans'' has a large PeripheryDemographic that would actually enjoy having the first two seasons available to them.them.
* WhatAnIdiot: In the rewritten version, Calvin's evil clone has confronted the heroes and bragged that he has the hypercube, which stores most of Calvin's inventions. Andy uses the time-pauser and [[TimeStandsStill temporarily freezes time.]]
'''You'd Expect:''' Andy takes the cube away from Evil!Calvin and ties him up. Or even tell Calvin's parents not to let him outside while he and the others are off rescuing their real son.
'''Instead:''' He carries the others to a safe distance and they leave Evil Calvin alone with the Hypercube, which they ''know'' has the Transmogrifier Gun and assorted other fantastic weapons.
'''As A Result:''' Evil!Calvin uses the cube to unleash a legion of destructive monsters from beneath Calvin's bed, and begins his plan for world domination.
* WhatAnIdiot: In the rewritten version, Calvin's evil clone has confronted the heroes and bragged that he has the hypercube, which stores most of Calvin's inventions. Andy uses the time-pauser and [[TimeStandsStill temporarily freezes time.]]
'''You'd Expect:''' Andy takes the cube away from Evil!Calvin and ties him up. Or even tell Calvin's parents not to let him outside while he and the others are off rescuing their real son.
'''Instead:''' He carries the others to a safe distance and they leave Evil Calvin alone with the Hypercube, which they ''know'' has the Transmogrifier Gun and assorted other fantastic weapons.
'''As A Result:''' Evil!Calvin uses the cube to unleash a legion of destructive monsters from beneath Calvin's bed, and begins his plan for world domination.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: It's revealed in chapter 3 that Cavlin and [[BabysitterFromHell Rosalyn]] have actually developed a much friendlier relationship with one another, [[MythologyGag even continuing to play Calvinball together.]] They even stage it so it appears they still cant tolerate each other, just so Calvin's parents will pay her more, making getting into college much easier. Calvin even gets his own cut of the money.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: It's revealed in chapter 3 of the rewrite that Cavlin and [[BabysitterFromHell Rosalyn]] have actually developed a much friendlier relationship with one another, [[MythologyGag even continuing to play Calvinball together.]] They even stage it so it appears they still cant tolerate each other, just so Calvin's parents will pay her more, making getting into college much easier. Calvin even gets his own cut of the money.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: It's revealed in chapter 3 that Cavlin and [[BabysitterFromHell Rosalyn]] have actually developed a much friendlier relationship with one another, [[MythologyGag even continuing to play Calvinball together.]] They even stage it so it appears they still cant tolerate each other, just so Calvin's parents will pay her more, making getting into college much easier. Calvin even gets his own cut of the money.
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* {{Narm}}: The Torture Room may become this when you realize that ''WesternAnimation/TheBackyardogans'' has a large PeripheryDemographic that would actually enjoy having the first two seasons available to them.
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* {{Narm}}: The Torture Room may become this when you realize that ''WesternAnimation/TheBackyardogans'' ''WesternAnimation/TheBackyardigans'' has a large PeripheryDemographic that would actually enjoy having the first two seasons available to them.
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* {{Narm}}: The Torture Room may become this when you realize that ''WesternAnimation/TheBackyardogans'' has a large PeripheryDemographic that would actually enjoy having the first two seasons available to them.
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** Calvin finding his EvilKnockoff ''gorgeous.''
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** Calvin finding his EvilKnockoff ''gorgeous.''''
* EvilIsSexy: Subverted. Calvin is the only one to find his EvilKnockoff attractive.
* EvilIsSexy: Subverted. Calvin is the only one to find his EvilKnockoff attractive.
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Very weird.
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Very weird.weird.
** Calvin finding his EvilKnockoff ''gorgeous.''
** Calvin finding his EvilKnockoff ''gorgeous.''
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** "Space mutants can solve anything," and the entire scenario with the [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext giant mutant goose]] that happens afterwards.
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** "Space mutants can solve anything," and the entire scenario with the [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext giant mutant goose]] that happens afterwards.afterwards.
** The mere existence of ''lava eels'' bears mentioning here.
** This line not long after the above:
--> Suddenly, a laser passed by Sherman's ship.\\
Ever see lasers being fired under lava?\\
Very weird.
** The mere existence of ''lava eels'' bears mentioning here.
** This line not long after the above:
--> Suddenly, a laser passed by Sherman's ship.\\
Ever see lasers being fired under lava?\\
Very weird.
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** "Space mutants can solve anything."
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** "Space mutants can solve anything."anything," and the entire scenario with the [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext giant mutant goose]] that happens afterwards.
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Calvin arguing with Bob over peanut butter sandwiches and Mount Rushmore.
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Calvin arguing with Bob over peanut butter sandwiches and Mount Rushmore.Rushmore.
** "Space mutants can solve anything."
** "Space mutants can solve anything."
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Calvin arguing with Bob over peanut butter sandwiches and Mount Rushmore.
