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** Greta Ludwig von Hertz, a would-be MadDoctor who burned down the institute that expelled her, has graduated since to the poisonous MadScientist of crime lord Big D, having influenced him to start Purge Night. While running Big D's OrganTheft ring, Greta leads [[PlayingWithSyringes twisted and tortuous torturous experiments]] on innocents for little reason than to gratify her own sadism, [[ImAHumanitarian snacking on human body parts]] regularly whilst horribly abusing her put-upon lackey Schultz day in and day out. With ambitions to launch a zombie apocalypse, Greta murders the child of Big D and manipulates his grief to control his crime empire, intent on deploying the virus in a series of major cities. Even when pointed out a full-out apocalypse will leave nothing to rule over, Greta shrugs it away and opts to burn the children she was planning to use as breakouts for the virus to soothe her frustration.
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** [[SinisterMinister Kleetus Klementine]], true name [[WouldHurtAChild Christopher Cogswell]], is an ancient being surviving on the deaths of others. Having been UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper and [[HistoricalRapSheet responsible for a myriad of human atrocities]], Cogswell preys on innocence by holding children and [[HumanTraffickers giving them to clientele]] to rape, torture and eventually murder. Eventually killing his own stock and sacrificing a follower to take on the strength of Shub-Niggurath, Cogswell opts to bring the apocalypse and completely exterminate mankind.
** Greta Ludwig von Hertz, a would-be MadDoctor who burned down the institute that expelled her, has graduated since to the poisonous MadScientist of crime lord Big D, having influenced him to start Purge Night. While running Big D's OrganTheft ring, Greta leads [[PlayingWithSyringes twisted and tortuous experiments]] on innocents for little reason than to gratify her own sadism, [[ImAHumanitarian snacking on human body parts]] regularly whilst horribly abusing her put-upon lackey Schultz day in and day out. With ambitions to launch a zombie apocalypse, Greta murders the child of Big D and manipulates his grief to control his crime empire, intent on deploying the virus in a series of major cities. Even when pointed out a full-out apocalypse will leave nothing to rule over, Greta shrugs it away and opts to burn the children she was planning to use as breakouts for the virus to soothe her frustration.
** [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Crank Gibson]], the ArcVillain of Chapter 4, is a drug lord responsible for the creation of [[FantasticDrug Pleasure]], a drug with euphoric effects and hideous withdrawal. Gibson demands the production of Pleasure through cheap slave labor, keeping his "employees" motivated via threats to families he's already murdered and [[ExplosiveLeash detonating the hearts]] of any who resist. Gibson intends to facilitate Greta's ZombieApocalypse on the promise to rule what's left, murders his defiant minions, and when Pinot turns his operation against him, Gibson detonates the bombs implanted in every remaining slave's heart in a fit of hysterical laughter.
** [[SinisterMinister Kleetus Klementine]], true name [[WouldHurtAChild Christopher Cogswell]], is an ancient being surviving on the deaths of others. Having been UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper and [[HistoricalRapSheet responsible for a myriad of human atrocities]], Cogswell preys on innocence by holding children and [[HumanTraffickers giving them to clientele]] to rape, torture and eventually murder. Eventually killing his own stock and sacrificing a follower to take on the strength of Shub-Niggurath, Cogswell opts to bring the apocalypse and completely exterminate mankind.
** Greta Ludwig von Hertz, a would-be MadDoctor who burned down the institute that expelled her, has graduated since to the poisonous MadScientist of crime lord Big D, having influenced him to start Purge Night. While running Big D's OrganTheft ring, Greta leads [[PlayingWithSyringes twisted and tortuous experiments]] on innocents for little reason than to gratify her own sadism, [[ImAHumanitarian snacking on human body parts]] regularly whilst horribly abusing her put-upon lackey Schultz day in and day out. With ambitions to launch a zombie apocalypse, Greta murders the child of Big D and manipulates his grief to control his crime empire, intent on deploying the virus in a series of major cities. Even when pointed out a full-out apocalypse will leave nothing to rule over, Greta shrugs it away and opts to burn the children she was planning to use as breakouts for the virus to soothe her frustration.
** [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Crank Gibson]], the ArcVillain of Chapter 4, is a drug lord responsible for the creation of [[FantasticDrug Pleasure]], a drug with euphoric effects and hideous withdrawal. Gibson demands the production of Pleasure through cheap slave labor, keeping his "employees" motivated via threats to families he's already murdered and [[ExplosiveLeash detonating the hearts]] of any who resist. Gibson intends to facilitate Greta's ZombieApocalypse on the promise to rule what's left, murders his defiant minions, and when Pinot turns his operation against him, Gibson detonates the bombs implanted in every remaining slave's heart in a fit of hysterical laughter.
