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** Episodes 2 and 6 of After Dark have Luna "enjoying" the story, despite the fact that it stars her own sister!
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** Also in Episode 38, the story has Linka ask Lane if he [[InsubstantialIngredients added love to his pies]], causing him to blush. The real siblings seem awkward at this -- is this a reference to ''Film/AmericanPie'', in which a boy [[ADateWithRosiePalms masturbates]] with a [[UnconventionalFoodUsage pie]], or did they think Lane blushing at Linka's compliment seemed too romantic for siblings?
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** Also in Episode 38, the story has Linka ask Lane if he [[InsubstantialIngredients added love to his pies]], causing him to blush. The real siblings seem awkward at this -- is this a reference to ''Film/AmericanPie'', in which a boy [[ADateWithRosiePalms masturbates]] masturbates with a [[UnconventionalFoodUsage pie]], or did they think Lane blushing at Linka's compliment seemed too romantic for siblings?
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** In "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan wants to kill a kitten, is prejudiced against Luna for being bi, is antisemitic, is a pedophile, rapes Lincoln, has sex with Bobby to spite Lori, and beats up the twins. And she's the ''protagonist.''
** In "A Town Hates a Boy", Lisa calls Lincoln "dispensable".
** In "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan wants to kill a kitten, is prejudiced against Luna for being bi, is antisemitic, is a pedophile, rapes Lincoln, has sex with Bobby to spite Lori, and beats up the twins. And she's the ''protagonist.''
** In "A Town Hates a Boy", Lisa calls Lincoln "dispensable".
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* AlternativeJokeInterpretation: In Episode 31, Luna says that she once wore a lampshade on her head for Halloween, only for her friends to claim not to recognise her. This was meant as a reference to the meme of replacing Luna with a lamp, yet it could also be interpreted as them [[LampshadeWearing claiming she got drunk all the time]] (albeit falsely, since she was confirmed not to drink in After Dark: 4.)
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* AlternativeJokeInterpretation: AlternativeJokeInterpretation:
** In Episode 31, Luna says that she once wore a lampshade on her head for Halloween, only for her friends to claim not to recognise her. This was meant as a reference to the meme of replacing Luna with a lamp, yet it could also be interpreted as them [[LampshadeWearing claiming she got drunk all the time]] (albeit falsely, since she was confirmed not to drink in After Dark: 4.))
** In Episode 17, when Lincoln in the story is picked up by three {{Original Character}}s who call him heavy, one of the men reading the story claims that most of the weight would be in his head. Is he joking about how Lincoln is drawn with a large head, or is he saying that Lincoln is so {{Wangst}}y in this fanfic, his angst is weighing down his brain?
** In Episode 33, Lana mentions knowing a frog named Jeremiah. Someone in the comments mistook this for a nationalist joke about Frenchmen, but it was actually a reference to a song which had "Jeremiah was a bullfrog" as a lyric.
** In Episode 38, when Linka in the story owns a box marked, "In case the chocolate monster is about to come out", and the real (alternate) Louds wonder what the box was meant to contain. Lane jokingly suggests Pepto-Bismol -- is he referring to poop as a "chocolate monster", or is he suggesting that if Linka went insane and ate too much chocolate, she'd get indigestion?
** Also in Episode 38, the story has Linka ask Lane if he [[InsubstantialIngredients added love to his pies]], causing him to blush. The real siblings seem awkward at this -- is this a reference to ''Film/AmericanPie'', in which a boy [[ADateWithRosiePalms masturbates]] with a [[UnconventionalFoodUsage pie]], or did they think Lane blushing at Linka's compliment seemed too romantic for siblings?
** In Episode 31, Luna says that she once wore a lampshade on her head for Halloween, only for her friends to claim not to recognise her. This was meant as a reference to the meme of replacing Luna with a lamp, yet it could also be interpreted as them [[LampshadeWearing claiming she got drunk all the time]] (albeit falsely, since she was confirmed not to drink in After Dark: 4.
** In Episode 17, when Lincoln in the story is picked up by three {{Original Character}}s who call him heavy, one of the men reading the story claims that most of the weight would be in his head. Is he joking about how Lincoln is drawn with a large head, or is he saying that Lincoln is so {{Wangst}}y in this fanfic, his angst is weighing down his brain?
** In Episode 33, Lana mentions knowing a frog named Jeremiah. Someone in the comments mistook this for a nationalist joke about Frenchmen, but it was actually a reference to a song which had "Jeremiah was a bullfrog" as a lyric.
** In Episode 38, when Linka in the story owns a box marked, "In case the chocolate monster is about to come out", and the real (alternate) Louds wonder what the box was meant to contain. Lane jokingly suggests Pepto-Bismol -- is he referring to poop as a "chocolate monster", or is he suggesting that if Linka went insane and ate too much chocolate, she'd get indigestion?
** Also in Episode 38, the story has Linka ask Lane if he [[InsubstantialIngredients added love to his pies]], causing him to blush. The real siblings seem awkward at this -- is this a reference to ''Film/AmericanPie'', in which a boy [[ADateWithRosiePalms masturbates]] with a [[UnconventionalFoodUsage pie]], or did they think Lane blushing at Linka's compliment seemed too romantic for siblings?
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* UncannyValley: In the Christmas special, when the sisters and Grammy lose it, Lucy levitates and spins her head 360 degrees, while Lisa's eyes display the blue screen of death.
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* AlternativeJokeInterpretation: In Episode 31, Luna says that she once wore a lampshade on her head for Halloween, only for her friends to claim not to recognise her. This was meant as a reference to the meme of replacing Luna with a lamp, yet it could also be interpreted as them [[LampshadeWearing claiming she got drunk all the time]] (albeit falsely, since she was confirmed not to drink in After Dark: 4.
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* AlternativeJokeInterpretation: In Episode 31, Luna says that she once wore a lampshade on her head for Halloween, only for her friends to claim not to recognise her. This was meant as a reference to the meme of replacing Luna with a lamp, yet it could also be interpreted as them [[LampshadeWearing claiming she got drunk all the time]] (albeit falsely, since she was confirmed not to drink in After Dark: 4.)
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* TheWoobie: Luan falls into this during the third "After Dark" episode, where she is forced to sit through a story about her being a horrible person, to point of nearly ''crying''.
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* TheWoobie: Luan falls into this during the third "After Dark" episode, where she is forced to sit through a story about her being a horrible person, to point of nearly ''crying''.''crying''.
-->'''Luan''': ''(squirming on the couch, on the verge of tears)'' I- I don't like this.
-->'''Luan''' ''(after Leni says, 'Let's finish the story')'' Do we have to?
-->'''Luan''': ''(squirming on the couch, on the verge of tears)'' I- I don't like this.
-->'''Luan''' ''(after Leni says, 'Let's finish the story')'' Do we have to?
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Enforced in After Dark Episode IV: [[https://www.deviantart.com/tenorghoul/art/Peeking-Through-the-Fourth-Wall-AD-Episode-4-761205627 "The Edgy House"]], where the sisters and Chaz eventually get too bored of the titular edginess to even care.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Enforced in After Dark Episode IV: [[https://www.deviantart.com/tenorghoul/art/Peeking-Through-the-Fourth-Wall-AD-Episode-4-761205627 "The Edgy House"]], where the sisters and Chaz eventually get too bored of the titular edginess to even care.
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** When Lynn in "The Sleeping Boy" suggests playing sports, the real Louds say, "ThatsYourAnswerToEverything". Lynn [[InsultBackfire agrees]] and finds excuses to play sports in situations suggested by her family. When Lucy suggests a funeral, Lynn suggests casket surfing.
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** When Lynn in "The Sleeping Boy" suggests playing sports, the real Louds say, "ThatsYourAnswerToEverything"."That's YourAnswerToEverything". Lynn [[InsultBackfire agrees]] and finds excuses to play sports in situations suggested by her family. When Lucy suggests a funeral, Lynn suggests casket surfing.
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* AlternativeJokeInterpretation: In Episode 31, Luna says that she once wore a lampshade on her head for Halloween, only for her friends to claim not to recognise her. This was meant as a reference to the meme of replacing Luna with a lamp, yet it could also be interpreted as them [[LampshadeWearing claiming she got drunk all the time]] (albeit falsely, since she was confirmed not to drink in After Dark: 4.
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* CrackPairing: Discussed when Hugh/[[Film/ReturnOfTheJedi Jabba]] is mentioned in Episode 17 ("Luck").
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* CrackPairing: CrackPairing:
** Discussed when Hugh/[[Film/ReturnOfTheJedi Jabba]] is mentioned in Episode 17("Luck").("Luck").
** Discussed again in After Dark: 6, when the older Loud sisters (except Lori) note that the author of ''Tryst of Fate'' and ''New Jersey'' ships unlikely couples together ([[IncompatibleOrientation Lori and Carol]], then Lynn and Clyde).
** "The Edgy House" has [[AgeGapRomance Rita/Mr. Grouse]], Rita/Flip, and Rita/Dr. Feinstein.
* CrossesTheLineTwice:
** When Lynn in "The Sleeping Boy" suggests playing sports, the real Louds say, "ThatsYourAnswerToEverything". Lynn [[InsultBackfire agrees]] and finds excuses to play sports in situations suggested by her family. When Lucy suggests a funeral, Lynn suggests casket surfing.
** In Episode 27, the story (''A Town Hates a Boy'') involves things such as Lincoln only saying, "[[DissonantSerenity Very strange]]" in response to a man being killed in front of him, and Lynn surviving drinking rat poison.
** Luan's "pussy" joke in response to Leni turning into a horny, incestuous cat in "Property of Luan Loud".
** Discussed when Hugh/[[Film/ReturnOfTheJedi Jabba]] is mentioned in Episode 17
** Discussed again in After Dark: 6, when the older Loud sisters (except Lori) note that the author of ''Tryst of Fate'' and ''New Jersey'' ships unlikely couples together ([[IncompatibleOrientation Lori and Carol]], then Lynn and Clyde).
** "The Edgy House" has [[AgeGapRomance Rita/Mr. Grouse]], Rita/Flip, and Rita/Dr. Feinstein.
* CrossesTheLineTwice:
** When Lynn in "The Sleeping Boy" suggests playing sports, the real Louds say, "ThatsYourAnswerToEverything". Lynn [[InsultBackfire agrees]] and finds excuses to play sports in situations suggested by her family. When Lucy suggests a funeral, Lynn suggests casket surfing.
** In Episode 27, the story (''A Town Hates a Boy'') involves things such as Lincoln only saying, "[[DissonantSerenity Very strange]]" in response to a man being killed in front of him, and Lynn surviving drinking rat poison.
** Luan's "pussy" joke in response to Leni turning into a horny, incestuous cat in "Property of Luan Loud".
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* LessDisturbingInContext: The episode covering "All's Fair in Pranks and War" has Lynn blushing after Lisa notes that she googled, "puppy play". Lynn was actually interested in the nonsexual version of puppy play, and only found it embarrassing due to the whole puppy aspect clashing with her toughness.
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Nolan's Birthday", Luna says that "Different cultures are weird".
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* BrokenBase: Luna getting turned on by the story in After Dark 2. Some people see it as hilarious VulgarHumour that ties in with her bisexuality, while others are skeeved out by it seeing as one of the characters in the story was her own sister.
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* UncannyValley: In the Christmas special, when the sisters and Grammy lose it, Lucy levitates and spins her head 360 degrees, while Lisa's eyes display the blue screen of death.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Sam meowing at Cliff in "Tongue Tied". There was no way of telling that she was gonna go meow at the cat, it has absolutely no place in a love story, and she had no reason to.
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** In "Diary of Luan Loud", Fic!Luan wants to kill a kitten, is prejudiced against Fic!Luna for being bi, is antisemitic, is a pedophile, rapes Fic!Lincoln, has sex with Fic!Bobby to spite Fic!Lori, and beats up the Fic!twins. And she's the ''protagonist.''
** In "A Town Hates a Boy", Fic!Lisa calls Fic!Lincoln "dispensable".
** In "A Town Hates a Boy", Fic!Lisa calls Fic!Lincoln "dispensable".
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** In "Diary of Luan Loud", Fic!Luan Luan wants to kill a kitten, is prejudiced against Fic!Luna Luna for being bi, is antisemitic, is a pedophile, rapes Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, has sex with Fic!Bobby Bobby to spite Fic!Lori, Lori, and beats up the Fic!twins.twins. And she's the ''protagonist.''
** In "A Town Hates a Boy",Fic!Lisa Lisa calls Fic!Lincoln Lincoln "dispensable".
** In "A Town Hates a Boy",
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** In "The Edgy House", Fic!Lincoln gets tricked into eating cookies baked by the twins that had Fic!Lana's shit mixed into the batter. To be fair, [[LaserGuidedKarma he deserved it]] [[TheToothHurts in the context of the story.]]
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** In "The Edgy House", Fic!Lincoln Lincoln gets tricked into eating cookies baked by the twins that had Fic!Lana's Lana's shit mixed into the batter. To be fair, [[LaserGuidedKarma he deserved it]] [[TheToothHurts in the context of the story.]]
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** In "Diary of Luan Loud", Fic!Luan wants to kill a kitten, is prejudiced against Luna for being bi, is antisemitic, is a pedophile, rapes Lincoln, has sex with Bobby, and beats up the twins.
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** In "Diary of Luan Loud", Fic!Luan wants to kill a kitten, is prejudiced against Luna Fic!Luna for being bi, is antisemitic, is a pedophile, rapes Lincoln, Fic!Lincoln, has sex with Bobby, Fic!Bobby to spite Fic!Lori, and beats up the twins.Fic!twins. And she's the ''protagonist.''
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** In "The Edgy House", Fic!Lincoln gets tricked into eating cookies baked by the twins that had Lana's Fic!Lana's shit mixed into the batter. To be fair, [[LaserGuidedKarma he deserved it it]] [[TheToothHurts in the context of the story.]]
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Nolan's Birthday", Luna says that "Different cultures are weird".
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Nolan's Birthday", Luna says that "Different cultures are weird".weird".
* TheWoobie: Luan falls into this during the third "After Dark" episode, where she is forced to sit through a story about her being a horrible person, to point of nearly ''crying''.
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* CrackPairing: Discussed when Hugh/[[Film/ReturnOfTheJedi Jabba]] is mentioned in Episode 17 ("Luck").
* CrossoverShip: Discussed when Hugh/[[Film/ReturnOfTheJedi Jabba]] is mentioned in Episode 17 ("Luck").
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Enforced in After Dark Episode IV: [[https://www.deviantart.com/tenorghoul/art/Peeking-Through-the-Fourth-Wall-AD-Episode-4-761205627 "The Edgy House"]], where the sisters and Chaz eventually get too bored of the titular edginess to even care.
* RonTheDeathEater:
** In "Diary of Luan Loud", Fic!Luan wants to kill a kitten, is prejudiced against Luna for being bi, is antisemitic, is a pedophile, rapes Lincoln, has sex with Bobby, and beats up the twins.
** In "A Town Hates a Boy", Fic!Lisa calls Fic!Lincoln "dispensable".
* CrossoverShip: Discussed when Hugh/[[Film/ReturnOfTheJedi Jabba]] is mentioned in Episode 17 ("Luck").
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Enforced in After Dark Episode IV: [[https://www.deviantart.com/tenorghoul/art/Peeking-Through-the-Fourth-Wall-AD-Episode-4-761205627 "The Edgy House"]], where the sisters and Chaz eventually get too bored of the titular edginess to even care.
* RonTheDeathEater:
** In "Diary of Luan Loud", Fic!Luan wants to kill a kitten, is prejudiced against Luna for being bi, is antisemitic, is a pedophile, rapes Lincoln, has sex with Bobby, and beats up the twins.
** In "A Town Hates a Boy", Fic!Lisa calls Fic!Lincoln "dispensable".
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* ShockingMoments: In the one about "Model Brother", Leni ''imagines running over the bullies with a steamroller''.
* {{Squick}}:
** The fact that Lori, Luan, and Luna snicker when fic!Lincoln asks fic!Luna "got the cream out of [her] hair", considering Lincoln and Luna are siblings.
** Lana eats a BLT that had been under her hat for two weeks.
** Luna says that if she had a long tongue, she'd do [[TheUnreveal something]] that started with pinning Sam to the table...
** Lucy drinking Lisa's nosebleed blood.
** Apparently, Izzy peed on Lola's bedsheets at one point.
* UnfortunateImplications: In "Nolan's Birthday", Luna says that "Different cultures are weird".
* {{Squick}}:
** The fact that Lori, Luan, and Luna snicker when fic!Lincoln asks fic!Luna "got the cream out of [her] hair", considering Lincoln and Luna are siblings.
** Lana eats a BLT that had been under her hat for two weeks.
** Luna says that if she had a long tongue, she'd do [[TheUnreveal something]] that started with pinning Sam to the table...
** Lucy drinking Lisa's nosebleed blood.
** Apparently, Izzy peed on Lola's bedsheets at one point.
* UnfortunateImplications: In "Nolan's Birthday", Luna says that "Different cultures are weird".
