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-->That night when Scott did not come home his father called the police. Divers searched the lake. They found Scott's body. And the broken canoe. In the bottom of the canoe was a tube of Giffen's Great Glue.
* TearJerker: A number, especially "For Ever" from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus! The main plot is Tim being terminally ill and he can't go anywhere snowy because the parents spent their money on medical bills. Richard annoys his brother by collecting toilet paper, but he really does it to make him happy. He tears up toilet paper outside to make it look like snow and wraps himself in some to look like a snowman. Tim dies happy that his wish came true.
* TearJerker: A number, especially "For Ever" from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus! The main plot is Tim being terminally ill and he can't go anywhere snowy because the parents spent their money on medical bills. Richard annoys his brother by collecting toilet paper, but he really does it to make him happy. He tears up toilet paper outside to make it look like snow and wraps himself in some to look like a snowman. Tim dies happy that his wish came true.
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-->That night when Scott did not come home his father called the police. Divers searched the lake. They found Scott's body. And the broken canoe. In the bottom of the canoe was a tube of Giffen's Great Glue. \n* TearJerker: A number, especially "For Ever" from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus! The main plot is Tim being terminally ill and he can't go anywhere snowy because the parents spent their money on medical bills. Richard annoys his brother by collecting toilet paper, but he really does it to make him happy. He tears up toilet paper outside to make it look like snow and wraps himself in some to look like a snowman. Tim dies happy that his wish came true.
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* TearJerker: A number, especially "For Ever" from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus!
The main plot is Tim being terminally ill and he can't go anywhere snowy because the parents spent their money on medical bills. Richard annoys his brother by collecting toilet paper, but he really does it to make him happy. He tears up toilet paper outside to make it look like snow and wraps himself in some to look like a snowman. Tim dies happy that his wish came true.
The main plot is Tim being terminally ill and he can't go anywhere snowy because the parents spent their money on medical bills. Richard annoys his brother by collecting toilet paper, but he really does it to make him happy. He tears up toilet paper outside to make it look like snow and wraps himself in some to look like a snowman. Tim dies happy that his wish came true.
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* TearJerker: A number, especially "For Ever" from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus!
focus! The main plot is Tim being terminally ill and he can't go anywhere snowy because the parents spent their money on medical bills. Richard annoys his brother by collecting toilet paper, but he really does it to make him happy. He tears up toilet paper outside to make it look like snow and wraps himself in some to look like a snowman. Tim dies happy that his wish came true.
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* TearJerker: A number, especially "For Ever" from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus!
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* TearJerker: A number, especially "For Ever" from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus!focus!
The main plot is Tim being terminally ill and he can't go anywhere snowy because the parents spent their money on medical bills. Richard annoys his brother by collecting toilet paper, but he really does it to make him happy. He tears up toilet paper outside to make it look like snow and wraps himself in some to look like a snowman. Tim dies happy that his wish came true.
The main plot is Tim being terminally ill and he can't go anywhere snowy because the parents spent their money on medical bills. Richard annoys his brother by collecting toilet paper, but he really does it to make him happy. He tears up toilet paper outside to make it look like snow and wraps himself in some to look like a snowman. Tim dies happy that his wish came true.
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* MoralEventHorizon: The VillainProtagonist of "The Strap-Box Flyer" crosses this line when his defective glue causes the drowning of a small boy.
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* MoralEventHorizon: The VillainProtagonist of "The Strap-Box Flyer" crosses this line when his defective glue causes the drowning of a small young boy.
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* FridgeBrilliance: ''The Copy'' has a stroke of this when you realise [[spoiler: that the whole story (at least from when the boy wakes up after using the copy machine) was told from the clone's POV without him realising it.]] He mentions his counterpart being really stubborn when it comes to who should hide in his room and who should interact with his parents and girlfriend. By the end of the story, [[spoiler: the Copy has taken over his original's life and all of the mirror-imaged changes in his quirks and physical appearance are noticed. The original had noticed this and knew it would be conspicuous.]]
* TearJerker: A number, especially ''For Ever'' from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus!
* TearJerker: A number, especially ''For Ever'' from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus!
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* FridgeBrilliance: ''The Copy'' "The Copy" has a stroke of this when you realise [[spoiler: that the whole story (at least from when the boy wakes up after using the copy machine) was told from the clone's POV without him realising it.]] He mentions his counterpart being really stubborn when it comes to who should hide in his room and who should interact with his parents and girlfriend. By the end of the story, [[spoiler: the Copy has taken over his original's life and all of the mirror-imaged changes in his quirks and physical appearance are noticed. The original had noticed this and knew it would be conspicuous.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: The VillainProtagonist of "The Strap-Box Flyer" crosses this line when his defective glue causes the drowning of a small boy.
* TearJerker: A number, especially''For Ever'' "For Ever" from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus!
* MoralEventHorizon: The VillainProtagonist of "The Strap-Box Flyer" crosses this line when his defective glue causes the drowning of a small boy.
* TearJerker: A number, especially
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* FridgeBrilliance: ''The Copy'' has a stroke of this when you realise [[spoiler: that the whole story was told from the clone's POV without him realising it.]] He mentions his counterpart being really stubborn when it comes to who should hide in his room and who should interact with his parents and girlfriend. By the end of the story, [[spoiler: the Copy has taken over his original's life and all of the mirror-imaged changes in his quirks and physical appearance are noticed. The original had noticed this and knew it would be conspicuous.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: ''The Copy'' has a stroke of this when you realise [[spoiler: that the whole story (at least from when the boy wakes up after using the copy machine) was told from the clone's POV without him realising it.]] He mentions his counterpart being really stubborn when it comes to who should hide in his room and who should interact with his parents and girlfriend. By the end of the story, [[spoiler: the Copy has taken over his original's life and all of the mirror-imaged changes in his quirks and physical appearance are noticed. The original had noticed this and knew it would be conspicuous.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: ''The Copy'' has a stroke of this when you realise [[spoiler: that the whole story was told from the clone's POV without him realising it.]] He mentions his counterpart being really stubborn when it comes to who should hide in his room and who should interact with his parents and girlfriend. By the end of the story, [[spoiler: the Copy has taken over his original's life and all of the mirror-imaged changes in his quirks and physical appearance are noticed. The original had noticed this and knew it would be conspicuous.]]
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* TearJerker: A number, especially ''For Ever'' from ''Uncovered!''. Just you try and keep those last few pages in focus!
