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* HilariousInHindsight: Fergus first mentions in Chapter 13 that he didn't approve of the way Kalysta wrote Chapter 16 in her novel [[spoiler: specifically the part about the paternal figure disowning their child, which is exactly what Ambrosine does to him in Chapter 16]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: Fergus first mentions in Chapter 13 that he didn't approve of the way Kalysta wrote Chapter 16 in her novel [[spoiler: specifically the part about the paternal figure disowning their child, which is exactly what Ambrosine does to him in Chapter 16]].16]].
** Additionally, Hawkins had the idea in Chapter 16 to steal from Ambrosine's lockbox [[spoiler: and it turns out in Chapter 18 they were stealing from the funds Fergus's mother had left for them anyway]].
** Additionally, Hawkins had the idea in Chapter 16 to steal from Ambrosine's lockbox [[spoiler: and it turns out in Chapter 18 they were stealing from the funds Fergus's mother had left for them anyway]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: Fergus first mentions in Chapter 13 that he didn't approve of the way Kalysta wrote Chapter 16 in her novel [[spoiler: specifically the part about the paternal figure disowning their child, which is exactly what Ambrosine does to him in Chapter 16]].